FF:You complete me-4!updtd pg144

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Hello everyone,😛

So, here we go.... 4th thread...!!! I've opened it up so that you people can continue with all your lovely comments and posts like always..!!


now, here are the useful links:

link to the original thread, THREAD 1: Parts 1 to 46

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1439095/ff-you-complete-me-pg-193-p47-imp-note-on-194

link to the second thread: THREAD 2: Parts 47 to Part 62

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1457056/ff-you-complete-me-2-p62-pg145-imp-msg-on-pg150

link to the third thread: THREAD 3: Parts 63 to 77

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1472666/ff-you-complete-me-3-part-77-page-141

link to the fifth thread: THREAD 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1531338/ff-you-complete-me-5-imp-note-on-pg-151



go ahead and use this thread much like the previous ones and thanks a ton for loving my FF so much...!!!! the credit for opening up a new thread certainly goes to each one of you...!!!!!!! 👏

Soumya😊


Part 78-Page 1
Part 84-Page 58 Part 90-Page 115
Part 79-Page 10 Part 85-Page 68 Part 91-Page 124
Part 80-Page 19 Part 86- Page 75 Part 92-Page 134
Part 81-Page 30 Part 87-Page 83 Part 93-Page 144
Part 82-Page 38 Part 88-Page 90
Part 83-Page 49 Part 89-I Page 98
Part 89-II-Page 106
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Hello wonderful people,

welcome to thread 4...!!! so last update, Maan meets his friend Nishant and his family. Geet is angry with maan, because he had alcohol, but maan seems to convince her...!!!! lets see what happens next..... 😉😉😉😉😉😉


Part 78

"geet, I don't want to think about my life without you". He hugged her tight and said, "by the way, you looked too hot in the bath robe today morning. Took me lot of control and will power to keep away from you".

"Maan" she said blushing.

"bolo geet!" he said whispering, "waise mujhpe gussa, tum , Kia pe nikal rahi thi?"

"hmm, aur kya karti, ab meri baat thodi na sunte hai?"

"geet, itni saalo ke baad, nishant se mil raha hoon, tuo bas thoda sa drink kiya"

"Maan, baat ek drink ki nahi hai,baat aapki carelessness ki hai".

"Mrs. Geet Maan, aaj tak kisi ne , maan khurana ko careless bhulane ki himmat nahi ki" he said raising his tone a little.

"mujhe kuch bhi karne ki aur kehne ki haq hai", she said.

He did not have to respond to this, she was right. She was the only one who had every right to do anything or say anything to him.

"geet!" he said whispering in her ears and biting them, "I was expecting you to speak nonstop about Aaron, but you seemed to have forgotten".

"maan, aapke is pee ne ke chakkar mein, main us cute cute boy ke bare mein bhool gayi. Kitna cute hai woh, awww, aapse bhi zyaaada", she said smiling.

"mujhse bhi zyaada cute hai?" maan asked geet angrily.

"hmm!" she said nodding her head hard. She knew what would happen next, since maan was angry. she geared herself for it and she was not wrong. Maan pulled her towards himself and curled his legs around her legs. She smiled at his anger.

"what are you wearing?" he asked as he felt her bare legs with his toes.

"your kurta!" she said, "I was in no mood to search for my clothes, so I pulled out your kurta from the closet and wore it".

"Oh that reminds me, I have to change too!" he said, getting up from the bed.

Geet held his arm, "Maan, jaldi aana, aapse ek zaroori baat karni hai!"

"hmmm!" he said and knelt on his elbow and kissed her forehead and went into the other room.

He walked back in after 10 minutes and switched off the lights, he got into bed and geet pulled the quilt over him.

"bolo!" he said, getting back to the same position he was with her like before.

"Maan, main soch rahi thi, ki delhi jaane ke baad, kya main aapse door reh paungi?"

"kya matlab?tum mujhse door kab rehti ho, geet?", he said, running his hands slowly through the side slits of the kurta and holding her bare waist.

"Maan, mera matlab hai, will I be staying in Pinky's house?", she asked, holding his hands on her waist.

"I, personally would want you to stay with me. But again the choice is yours!" he said calmly.

"par agar main aapke saath rahungi, tuo daadi aur pinky ke dad kya kahenge?"

"geet, daadi ko aur pinky ke dad ko main samjhaunga"

"theek hai, par maan agar woh log na mane tuo?

"maan singh khurana ka baath na maanne ki aadat sirf tumhe hai, kisi aur ko nahi".

"Maan, aap kisi ke baath nahi maante" , she said, moving her hair to the other side. Maan was happy she had moved her hands away. He moved his hands across her back, mischievously.

"Maan!" she said, turning onto her back suddenly, "that's tickling me!"

"I don't care, understood?" he asked, in a very passionately dangerous tone.

He turned her towards him again and ran his hands on her back. Geet closed her eyes, and held onto his bares houlders, tightly. Maan grabbed her lips with his and moved his hands towards the front. He slowly unbuttoned her kurta. Geet pulled away from the kiss, breathing heavily and screamed, "Maan!"

"geet, chup raho, warna tumhare saath bahut bura hoga", he warned her.

She looked at him in shock, while he smirked. He continued unbuttoning it. He then moved down a little and kissed the part of her body that was now, exposed. Geet, intertwined her hands behind his back and pulled him in, closer.

He was conscious not to hurt her or go overboard. He moved up again, after sometime and made her rest her head on his arm. She cuddled in closer to him.

"don't worry geet, I will not go overboard", he told her softly, kissing her eyes.

"I know, maan!" she told him confidently.

"you should sleep now!" he said, "bahut late ho gaya".

"Maan, what's the plan for tomorrow?"

"Oh yes! Hum abhi abhi discuss kar rahe the, kal hum bahar jayenge, sightseeing aur shopping!"

"kiske saath discuss kar rahe the?"

"nishant aur sanjana!"

"Par sanjana tuo so rahi thi na?"

"no, she was in the kitchen, heating milk for Aaron".

"and when are we getting back to Delhi?"

"whenever you want!" he said, kissing her cheeks and gently caressing them.

"maan, serious"

"day after tomorrow, afternoon flight!" he said.

"uske baad kya main aapke ghar jaungi, ya pinky ke?"

"geet, tum, hamare ghar chaloge!"

"how many shots did you say, you took?you don't look or sound high at all?you look so normal", she said turning to face him.

"honey, I don't need alcohol to get high, you're proximity is enough to do serious damage to my brain" he told her with a lopsided smile.

"maan!" she said laughing and blushing at the same time,"how many shots do you have to take before you completely, go crazy.

"I don't know, geet. I never had to drink so much that some one had to carry me home. Daadima would not be happy if I did that, and I don't like it too. Sleep now!" he told her and kissed her.

good night", she said and rested her head on the pillow. She gently pulled him and made him rest his head on her heart and both of them fell asleep.

Shimla: next day, 7 am:

"good morning, daadiji" said Naintara as she met daadi at the breakfast table.

"Good morning, honey!" said daadima smiling. She knew she had to be perfectly normal to trap naintara in her own game.

"aap itni achanak yahan kaise?" asked naintara, pouring some coffee into the cup.

"should I not come to visit my grandson and you?" she asked, winking.

"aisi koi baat nahi, daadiji! Aap jab chahe tab aa skate hai" said naintara smiling.

"I know, beta, aakhir dev mere liye utna hi hai, jitna maan!" said daadi, lying outrightly. But she was not worried, because she knew this one line would make Naintara confident enough to make mistakes that can later be caught red-handed.

Naintara thought to herself, "this one line is enough to get maan out of daadi's life".

Naintara continued smiling while daadi looked at the headlines in the newspaper. Dev joined them after 15 minutes and hugged his daadi.

"badi kushi hui aapko yaha dekh kar!" he told her.

"isiliye tuo aaye hai hum, dev!" she told him, patting his cheek.

The three of them had breakfast and dev asked daadiji, "daadiji, aaj aapka kya plan hai? Accordingly, I'll plan my day at office".

"you carry on with your office work , Dev, I'm sure you don't want to be shopping with women", she said winking.

"oh, shopping ka plan hai, phir tuo main office mein theek hoon. Jab aapka shopping khatam ho jayega, tuo hume phone kijiye, hum aa jayenge"

"sure!" she told him and continued reading the newspaper.

Beach House, Same day, 7:50am: Maan had returned to his bedroom after spending an hour in the gym. He found geet still sleeping.

"what's with these wives?" he thought, walking to her side, "there sanjana is sleeping and nishant and his son are awake, and here, my beautiful wife is sleeping".

He sat beside her, he was sweating profusely. He called out to her softly, "geet!" she turned the other side and pulled the quilt over her face and slept.

Maan called out again, "geet!". She did not respond. He smirked and pulled the quilt off her face, he bent down to her ears and whispered, "honey, you have to wake up. otherwise, I will have to pull the quilt away. Do you want me to remind you that last night I unbuttoned.." and geet jumped up. she looked at her self and pulled the quilt over her to cover herself properly.

"Maan, yeh kounsa tareekha hai, utane ka?" she asked, angrily.

"tuo aur kya karu? Tumhe seedha seedha kaho tuo samaj mein thodi na aati hai?"

"aap bhi na! aap jaeye yaha se", she said getting up from the bed wrapping the quilt around her.

He got up and hugged her from behind, "tuo tumhe kya laga? Main ek haath mein coffee, aur doosri haath mein breakfast leke aunga tumhare liye? Aur kahunga pyaar se, "geet , meri jaan , uto na?"

"aapse itna umeed kaha kar sakti hoon?" she said turning towards him, still holding the quilt firmly around her.

"hmmm?" he asked her, smiling.

"hmmm!" she said, pulling him into the quilt and putting it around the both of them.

"geet!I have no intentions to get to bed again, so stop tempting me so much".

"but,I do. I'm still sleepy" she said, pushing him towards the bed.

"there are people waiting for us, honey!" he told her, caressing her face gently.

"I don't care!" she said and pulled him onto the bed.

"well, okay then, Lets finish what we left incomplete yesterday night", he said, smirking and removing his vest.

"Maan, you go take a shower first and then wake me up, in a proper way. No threatening", she said, laughing and pushing him out of the quilt.

He rolled towards her and said, "ab I'll call nishant and tell him, that my wife wants to spend her day in bed and unfortunately only I can give company. So, that they can go ahead with shopping and we can continue".

"Maan, jaaeye na, please!"

Maan looked at her for some time and said, "geet, sari pehen lo, aaj!" he walked towards the other room, when he heard geet yell back.

"ji, nahi!" she told him and walked into the bathroom.

He smiled and walked away into the other room. An hour later, Nishant's family and Maan were already at the dining table, waiting for geet to come. Sanjana had made some breakfast and was feeding Aaron, whereas Maan and Nishant were reading the newspaper. Geet walked down the stairs, dressed in a blue color salwar kameez. She sat in the chair in between Maan and Aaron.

Aaron screamed, "good morning , aunty! You will look so pretty" and kissed her. Maan raised his eye brow. Geet kissed him back and said, "good morning, beta. Aap bhi aaj bade handsome lag rahe hai!"

She then turned to look at Sanjana and Nishant and said, "good morning!" they greeted her back.

She continued, "sorry, thoda late ho gayi. Lekin aap mere liye intezaar kyon kar rahe the?you should have started".

"woh kya hai na geet, aapke pati ne aapke bina breakfast karne se mana kiya, aur hume bhi khane se rokh diya, kaha, geet ko aane do!"

Geet blushed and looked at maan, who angrily responded, "aisi koi baat nahi hai, tumhe itna khush hone ki zaroorat nahi hai"

"itna vadda jhoot, maan veerji?" added sanjana in between.

Nishant winked at Maan and all of them had breakfast. They went to the mall first. They stood at the directory.

Sanjana and Geet spoke up at the same time, "we'll head to the second floor, to the women's section". They looked at each other and laughed.

Nishant hit his head and said, "yaar, maan, aaj main bankrupt hone wala hoon, tera paas paise hai na? mein London jaane ke baad, transfer kar dunga".

Sanjana hit his arm and said, "ab tuo main aapko, bankrupt karke chodungi".

Geet laughed and Maan asked her, "aapko bhi aisi koi iraade hai geet, ji?"

"nahi ji!" she said, smiling.

Geet turned to Sanjana, "chale sanjana?"

Sanjana held Aaron's hand and Aaron held geet's hand. He started to walk in between the both of them and kept jumping up in between while walking. The women walked away leaving the men behind.

"ab hum kya kare?" asked Maan.

"chal, kisi electronic stores mein guste hai!" he said. Maan nodded and walked around the mall for sometime until they found a huge electronics store and walked into it.

Maan realized geet would need a phone. He turned to Nishant, " I have to buy a phone for my wife!"

"sure, lets look at some phones then, and after that, I'll get Aaron some Wii sports stuff. He seems to be bored with the ones he has!" he said, looking around the shop for phones.

"I think you should buy her an iPhone" said Nishant.

"that's exactly what I was thinking". He went ahead and chose the white color and paid the bill. Nishant looked around and got some stuff for Aaron. Both of them walked out and walked into another store.

"Nishant, tumhe kya lagta, yeh log kab tak aayenge?" asked maan already missing geet.

"aa jayenge, mall close hone se pehle" he said, looking at other stores.

"kya? Abhi mall close hone mein, 6 hours hai!" he said.

"yaar, tu ne kabhi geet ke saath shopping nahi kiya kya? Ek baar aurton ko shopping leke aaoge tuo che-saath ghante asaani se lag jaati hai. that is if you are lucky, otherwise use zyaada".

Maan closed his eyes in frustration. "yeh aurton, in bekaar ki cheezon mein itna time waste kyon karte hai?"

"Maan, jaise hamare liye stocks, markets, business baath karte karte ghante lag jaate hai, waise hi aurton ko shopping mein ghante lag jaate hai".

"Hmm, you seem to understand the psychology of women, very well!" maan said, getting a little irritated, that Nishant kept justifying reasons behind women's shopping.

"yes, I've been married for quite sometime now!" he said smirking, "you'll understand too!"

On the other side, geet and sanjana looked at some accessories and clothes. Aaron wanted an ice-cream and geet got him one while Sanjana tried on few clothes. She chose some for geet, too.

"Geet, tum jao aur yeh try karo, aaron mere saath rahega!" she said, giving her some clothes and leading her to the trial rooms.

"nahi, sanjana mujhe kuch nahi lena! Mujhe kuch nahi chahiye", she said.

"geet, samaj lo ki mera gift hai, tere liye!" said sanjana.

"nahi sanjana! " she said leaving the clothes back on the counter, after taking a look at the price tag.

"Geet! jao na please. We did not get you anything. Because we did not know anything about you. so this is the least I can get, please!"

geet looked at the clothes again. She reluctantly picked up one sari and one salwar kameez and looked up at Sanjana. Sanjana smiled at her, "jao, try karo. Sari tuo pucca lena , aur salwar kameez try karo. Pasand nahi aaya tuo doosra lena"

"nahi, main sirf salwar kameez leti hoon! No sari"

"geet, theek hai, jao aur try karo".

Geet went into the trial room and tried it on and came out to show Sanjana. Sanjana thought it would look perfect on her. Geet went back in to change and thought of maan's reaction to the dress. She tried to imagine what he would say. She turned around 360 degrees, trying to analyze the dress from maan's point of view. She then realized maan would like it. She changed into her previous dress and came out.

Sanjana paid for geet's dress. But geet was feeling guilty. She wanted to ask maan if she should take the dress or not. she wanted to call him. she told sanjana, "Sanjana , aap yahi rahiye, main abhi aati hoon!"

She went out of the store and walked to the telephone booth near by. She dialed his number. Maan wondered who's number it is and took the call.

He heard geet speak, "Maan!"

"bolo" he said, "tum kaha se phone kar rahe ho?theek ho na?"

"haan! Aap zara 2nd floor mein, shopper's stop pe ayenge? Mujhe aapse baat karni hai!"

"kya hua geet? tabiyat theek nahi hai kya?" he asked, sounding worried. He then held the phone and told Nishant, "main 2nd floor jaa raha hoon, shopper's stop. Tum bhi chaloge?"

Nisahnt replied, "tum jao, main abhi aata hoon!"

Maan continued walking and asked her again,"sab theek hai na?"

"haan maan! Aap aaeye, main rakhti hoon!" she hung up and waited outside for him. he met up with her and asked, "kya hua, kiska phone tha?"

"woh public telephone tha! Waise that's not important" she said and narrated the whole incident about Sanjana gifting a dress to her.

"geet, itni si baat hai. agar tumhe len a ho tuo lo, warna mat lo. Isme pareshaan hone ki kya baat hai?"

"par maan, maine unhe kuch nahi diya,".

"geet, don't worry about that. I've taken care of their gifts. I had got them with me, when I came from Delhi. I'll show them to you, tonight. Daadi chose gifts for them".

"oh theek hai!" she said, feeling relieved.

"bas yeh baat thi? Mujhe laga tum mujhe miss kar rahi thi!" he said.

"maan, chup rahiye aap! Aur chaliye andar".

"geet, tumhe apne liye kuch nahi liya?" he asked walking behind her , into the store.

"mujhe kuch nahi chahiye, maan! Aap hai, tuo sab kuch hai!" she said turning back to him, smiling.

"soch lo" he said smiling, "dresses, saris, jewelery, shoes, bags etc etc, mujhe baaki accessories nahi pata!"

"maine kaha na mujhe kuch nahi chahiye!"

"theek hai, your wish", he said. Soon, they were joined by Sanjana and Aaron. Aaron complained of leg ache and sanjana had been carrying him all this while. She put him down to talk to geet and maan and he started crying again.

"Aaron, mere haath mein dard ho rahe hai, beta, just give me 5 minutes. Let's wait for papa to come and then I'll carry you".

"nahi mom!" he screamed and rolled on the floor.

Geet turned to maan and said, "Maan, aaron ko thodi der ke liye, please!" she asked softly.

Maan did not need another word. He quickly bent down and picked Aaron up.

"are maan!its okay. Leave him down, we'll sit somewhere, till Nishant comes!" said Sanjana.

"no problem" said maan, kissing aaron and telling him, "ab theek hai, awww, ab rona bandh karo".

Geet smiled looking at him with aaron. Aaron rested his head on maan's shoulder and put his hands around maan's neck. Geet wiped his tears away and kissed him.

She then went onto maan's other side and whispered in his ear, "maan khurana, you so deserve a hug and kiss for this!" she then walked slowly to sanjana, when she heard maan tell her, "I'll remind you of it".😛


Okies, so so so hope you liked it...!!!! leave your comments and criticism in this thread, hence forth..!!!

I responded to all your previous comments in thread 3..!!! Thanks a ton for reading...!!! Love you all.... 🤗

I did not put colors again because of the number of characters..!!! Sorry...!!!!


Soumya



Edited by pickle6586 - 14 years ago
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hi, Sorry, I took longer timer than anticipated. I had to check about this schools & colleges closure on 24th & 25th in Karnataka in lieu of Ayodhya verdict. I had to talk to my friend in new s channel and then call back to my nephew on this. So please bear with me.

The episode is a dhamakdhar one👏👏👏👏👏👏👏. Geet wearing maan's kurtha, yaar what are you people are upto? every one is making her wear his kurtha and the poor guy will be deprived of the intimacy and will have to control his desires???????? 😉😉😉😉😉😉 Too bad Soumya. btw, you have become too naughty off late and letting maan have his way and then concludes in the precise moment, beyond where it might hurt his love. Great soumya, you have a total control over MSK😆😆😆😆😆 The way Geet was asking hi8m about how many shots it takes for him to get knocked off, I thought she wanted him to knock off and take her wholesome😳😳😳😳😳
Though he said it takes only her presence, but I am not sure whether it is really true????????😉😉😉😉😉 If so, ........................ , sorry, going off track, he was very nice to change the track of flow of talk by being wise man and telling neither Daadi nor he likes that way (complete knock off by drunk) . The morning wake up call was really alarming. so was his request for them to wait for the breakfast, but I think it was sanjana & Nishant's idea than Maan's.
btw, why he didn't gave her his card or wallet when he asked her to go shopping. What will she shop with empty hand? It was wise of sanjana to buy her a dress and her instant thought on return gift was too sensible. So Maan bought her the phone, so god only knows, how will they end up paying the phone bills, as i can forsee them on phone 24*7*365 from now on😉😉😉😉😉
Nishant scared Maan with ladies shopping ahbbits and them taking 6 - 8 hrs to shop that was cute to read but I have my objections here dear. How on the earth the men will be able to pay the shopping bills if, wify keeps shopping all through the day?

Daadi & NT together both thinking of outsmarting the other was quite a scene. Will wait for more.

Maan with the child and the childs hand around his neck was scene of the day and he surely deserves a HUG & KISS.

love you for the fantastic update.
Jaya



Thanks you dear for keeping up the promise. Will read and comment later⭐️

Jaya
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Congrats for the new thread 😊 😊 😊


The update was both cute, hot and romantic!!!
Loved it 😊
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Thanks somuya,

for updating earliy n for pm I m also comment later
love u
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CONGRATES SWEETY FOR 4th THREAD👏LOVED THIS PART A LOT👏
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hey...congrats on new thread...
the update was as aewsome as always...
really nice loved it...and maaneet so
adorable...so cute...loved those moments
and dadi is upto something.....love her
keep writing..👏👏👏
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such a cute update...

lovelyyy and brilliant
will be waiting for the next part
plzzzzzz update soon...
and thanx for this marvellous update
reva
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Congrats 4 d new thread !

Cute part !
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oh so cute.. lovely update... do continue soon n congrats for new thread..

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