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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Nice concept...Want to read it
continue soon and do pm me nxt time

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Do continue.
Love to read this

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

amazing concept!!!
waiting 4 ur update
thanks 4 the pm

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Hey guys....sorry I could not reply to everyone of u'll individually......since It's just the start of the story :)

and "Ab concept ya introduction humein batane ke liye kya logi?" nivya di jo mujhe lena hai....I'll take later...ab bus story enjoy karo ji 😉

So I'll be posting the first chap.....hope u guys like it :)

-Fatima

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

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Please read note at the beginning !!!

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

*edited*

Alright, if you call this the first chapter, I should tell you this is WAY too short! 🤓

Coming to the update, what do I say? F A N T A S T I C! You've always been to me like one of the best writers out here, and you prove me right all the time. 😳 This is such a beautiful piece of writing, I could like actually visualize it. Amazing job done, Fatima! 😃

I would really wanna read a longer update next time. Nonetheless - I love your works. Keep writing! 👍🏼

-Kanky

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago

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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Awesom update...i loved it

do continue soon

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dua

@dua22

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

great update

but it was too short

i could not even get into it

Edited by dua_adil - 14 years ago

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kulsumd

@kulsumd

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

hie fatima...

Fab update..

D concept z awesome..

Pehle hi chap mein nupur ke liye sad horaha hai.

Aur yeh kya dear itna chota nahi yeh toh promo ki jaisa lag raha hai.

Love
summi