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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

great start dear..pls continue soon...............................

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Is this a chapter???

Ok fine I agree the updates r short but little bit long is fine na
next time a long one

comin to d update

it was simply fantastic

mindblowing

loved it

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

nice & short updt
thanks for the pm

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: -Kanky-
*edited*

Alright, if you call this the first chapter, I should tell you this is WAY too short! 🤓

Coming to the update, what do I say? F A N T A S T I C! You've always been to me like one of the best writers out here, and you prove me right all the time. 😳 This is such a beautiful piece of writing, I could like actually visualize it. Amazing job done, Fatima! 😃

I would really wanna read a longer update next time. Nonetheless - I love your works. Keep writing! 👍🏼

-Kanky

Hello Kanishka , Are you still INACTIVE? 😊 Or forgot to change the signature??😉

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Ok -good girl...Updated without delay 🤗 I dont mind the short updates, because it atleast gave the feel of the story.. Baaki comments hum offline denge tumhein - okay na?

Aur haan - meine sirf poocha tha ki kya logi concept ke liye? I didnt commit anything ,huh?🤔 Fir bhi pooch lo - agar meri bas ki baat hain tho theek hain... Lekin kaikeyi ki tarah kuch maang mat lena..😆

Continue soon...

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Hey Sowwwieeee for being so late .
But amazin one Fatima but really short one .

Ur first para, it was almost what i go around. Sometimes full of life and sometimes gloomy... Wel , this is life !

I am defo looking forward to it ...and with Mayank's such response, my curosity is inc.

Thanx for the pm darlin'

-Ruchi

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -Kanky-
*edited*

Alright, if you call this the first chapter, I should tell you this is WAY too short! 🤓

Coming to the update, what do I say? F A N T A S T I C! You've always been to me like one of the best writers out here, and you prove me right all the time. 😳 This is such a beautiful piece of writing, I could like actually visualize it. Amazing job done, Fatima! 😃

I would really wanna read a longer update next time. Nonetheless - I love your works. Keep writing! 👍🏼

-Kanky

Yeah I know dear it's way too short lekin kya karein.....meine toh aap se pehle hi kahi k updates chote honge...😉
lekin aap sabhi logon ko manzur tha.......and thnx for the compliment dear ! :)
and the length of the chapter is directly proportional to my mood....so the length will be decided by my mood 😳

-Fatima

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: dua_adil
great update
but it was too short
i could not even get into it

Sowiee dear...for the short update dear....lekin as I said mere updates will depend on my mood....hope you get them then :)

-Fatima

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: kulsumd
hie fatima...

Fab update..

D concept z awesome..

Pehle hi chap mein nupur ke liye sad horaha hai.

Aur yeh kya dear itna chota nahi yeh toh promo ki jaisa lag raha hai.

Love
summi

awwee...mera baccha u commented dear I'm touched was waiting for ur comment only 😊

Thnx for liking it ! hmm....sad not alwayz yaar...life toh aise hi hoti haina ...

promo ?? 😕 nahi yehi mera chap hai.....

-Fatima

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi
Ok -good girl...Updated without delay 🤗 I dont mind the short updates, because it atleast gave the feel of the story.. Baaki comments hum offline denge tumhein - okay na?

Aur haan - meine sirf poocha tha ki kya logi concept ke liye? I didnt commit anything ,huh?🤔 Fir bhi pooch lo - agar meri bas ki baat hain tho theek hain... Lekin kaikeyi ki tarah kuch maang mat lena..😆

Continue soon...

Thnk you di 😳 awee....at least tum toh mera saath de rahi ho in shorter updates.....
sure sure baakie k comments offline dejiye ga :)

hmm....woh toh hum waqt aane pe jo lena hai le lenge :)

-Fatima

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