(Mayur FF) Transparent yet Obscure ! - Page 4

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

*edited*

Alright, if you call this the first chapter, I should tell you this is WAY too short! 🤓

Coming to the update, what do I say? F A N T A S T I C! You've always been to me like one of the best writers out here, and you prove me right all the time. 😳 This is such a beautiful piece of writing, I could like actually visualize it. Amazing job done, Fatima! 😃

I would really wanna read a longer update next time. Nonetheless - I love your works. Keep writing! 👍🏼

-Kanky

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

*edited*

Alright, if you call this the first chapter, I should tell you this is WAY too short! 🤓

Coming to the update, what do I say? F A N T A S T I C! You've always been to me like one of the best writers out here, and you prove me right all the time. 😳 This is such a beautiful piece of writing, I could like actually visualize it. Amazing job done, Fatima! 😃

I would really wanna read a longer update next time. Nonetheless - I love your works. Keep writing! 👍🏼

-Kanky

Originally posted by: dua_adil

great update

but it was too short

i could not even get into it

Originally posted by: kulsumd

hie fatima...

Fab update..

D concept z awesome..

Pehle hi chap mein nupur ke liye sad horaha hai.

Aur yeh kya dear itna chota nahi yeh toh promo ki jaisa lag raha hai.

Love
summi

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Ok -good girl...Updated without delay 🤗 I dont mind the short updates, because it atleast gave the feel of the story.. Baaki comments hum offline denge tumhein - okay na?

Aur haan - meine sirf poocha tha ki kya logi concept ke liye? I didnt commit anything ,huh?🤔 Fir bhi pooch lo - agar meri bas ki baat hain tho theek hain... Lekin kaikeyi ki tarah kuch maang mat lena..😆

Continue soon...