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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
really nice update..i loved it...
oh this maan ....he is so thinking
wrong...and geet i felt bad for her...
overall beautiful update...
waiting for the next one 👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
intesresting
but rarely any maan and geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
thx 4 the pm.its a gr8 part as usual.so geet n maan danced.tats ud.but make charu's entry now so tat geet n maan can now become luv birds
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Colourful birds Part 6





The show...
The song is played.
'Luta Doon Sab Ki Tujh Pe Meharbaaniyan; Mein Ek Nazar Daaloon Tujh Pe To
Badd Jaaye Meri Saath Teri Yaariyan; Kadmo Mein Tere Lakh Jannat Ho
Aankhon Mein Baathein Hai; Baathon Mein Wade Hai
Baathon Mein Baahen Hai, Tu Baahon Mein Aaja Zara
Lucky Boy You Are My Lucky Boy
Tell Me Kaun Banega Mera Lucky Boy...'{Bachna Ae Haseeno}.
Arohi dances.Towards the end Geet and Riddhima also join her in dancing.All the boys are surprised.

Armaan with the other boys.
Arm:Maan is after a girl whose face is not revealed to him yet.We don't even know whether she has a face.
Armaan,Rishi and Arjun laugh.Maan is irritated.
Arm:I don't bother about Maan's silly love.But Rishi and Arjun are settled.But i'm single.I'm declaring that tomorrow onwards i will work hard to win a girl's heart.Riddhima.I decided to spend my poor father's hard earned money on her.
The other boys laugh.

Hearing the calling bell's ringtone Riddhima opens the door.Armaan is standing there with a naughty smile.He is excited to see Riddhima.
Arm:Riddhima!
R:Why?You did'nt like me opening the door?
Arm:What a question!I wanted you to open the door.I was expecting to see you.
R:Why did you come here?
Arm:Won't you invite me inside?
He gets inside without waiting for her invitation.
Arm:I saw my old friend.He came back from abroad.He gave me some cosmetics.
R:You use cosmetics?
Arm:Yes..i use cosmetics like you.I like whatever you like.We match each other no?
R:Usually boys don't use cosmetics.
Arm:You thought i'm an ordinary guy?I'm very different.
Riddhima bursts into laughter.
Arm:You like cosmetics.Right?You take it.I have enough cosmetics at home.
Riddima looks through the cosmetics.She understands that Armaan bought it from the nearby shop.
R:Sorry,i don't want this.
Arm:Why?R:I don't like taking the gift someone else gave you.
Armaan is embarassed.He thinks:I can't even tell her that it's not the gift i got.
Armaan takes another cover.
Arm:Plz accept this.
R:What is this?
Arm:This is a dress for you.It will match you.
R:Is this also given by your NRI friend?Do you wear the women's dresses since we both have same taste?
Armaan is embarassed.
Riddhima takes that cover from him.He is relieved.Riddhima goes to her room.Armaan imagines Riddhima coming out of the room wearing that dress.But Armaan gets a shock when she throws it on her face.She is angry.
R:The top is so short.I never thought that you will stoop so low like this.You are so cheap.
Armaan is shocked.
Arm:Riddhima...i'm sorry.I did'nt know that it's that short.I thought the size is correct for you.I did'nt do it purposefully.
She shouts:Get out man.
Armaan becomes extremely upset and leaves the house with that dress.
He goes home.
His friends notice the change in his face.
Rishi:What happened to you?
Arm:Nothing.
Arjun:Lie.
Arm:Nothing happened.I told you no.
R:We know you very well.Don't you know that we can understand the changes in your face expressions.
Maan:Tell us the matter.We will sort out the problem.
A:No solution for this problem.
Armaan tells everything.
R:She is so prowd.What does she think of herself?Let me see her.
Arm:No Rishi.Leave it.She is Geet's friend.If you misbehave with her Geet will hate you.
R:Let Geet hate me.But i want to talk to Riddhima.
He is determined to do that.

Geet,Riddhima and Arohi are laughing over this topic.
A:Armaan is so naughty.
G:He may not be knowing your size.
R:I know that Geet.Armaan is not a fraud.But he is mad.So i thought of making him crazy.
A:He is already mad.Then why do you want to make him crazy?You could have gone straight to him and dated him.
R:Arohi!
Riddhima throws the pillow on Arohi.
The calling bell rings.
Riddhima opens the door.That is Rishi.
R:I want to talk to you.Very serious.
Riddhima grins:What's that?romance?
Rishi finds it unbearable.But he controlled himself.
R:Let us go out and talk.
R:Ok.
They both go to the compound.
Rishi's face expression changes.His eyes become red.
R:What did you ask?Romance?Why should i do that with you?Are you Miss Universe?Armaan is too foolish to fall in love with you.
Rid:That's true.Armaan is so foolish to walk behind me.
Rishi is irritared:You decided that.
Rid:Yes.What does that funny man have to love me?
Rishi loses his control:He is much better than you.
Riddhima is hurt.

Geet is ironing clothes.Arohi comes there.
A:Geet!
G:What's the matter Arohi?Why do you look upset?
Arohi grabs her hand and runs to the verandah.They see Rishi shouting at Riddhima.
Rishi sees the serious look of Geet and Arohi.
Geet:What's the matter Riddhima?
Riddhima's eyes showed anger and pain.Her lips shivered.She keeps silent.

All the four boys are in the park.Armaan sees a girl in the mist.
Arm:Maan...there is your snowy girl.
Everyone's eyes move that way.Maan is excited.
Arm:Go Maan.Today you should meet her.
Rishi:You should know who she is.
Arjun:You should enjoy her face.
Maan runs to her immediately.He is shocked to see her.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
hey..that was awesome..really...loved it..
maan finally gotta see him misty gurl..
hope he is not gonna give up on her...
superb update...loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM>
continue soon


love
Riddss
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
hey pls yaar tum to CV ke jaise mat karo ohh my my finelly Maan will meet his misty girl wow love it nice update.pls update soon yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Finally maan has met with his misty girl.
I want her to be geet.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
awwwwwwww so maan finally sees geet !!! 2 gud :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
ooooo finally maan sees's d gal!
huh!finally!
hope it is geet.......lets c.....

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