Colourful birds Maneet FF Pg 40 Climax - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
nice update.. but when would maan knw tht the girl in geet??? do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
Awesome update
Loved it
Geet is falling 4 maan
Armaan is falling 4 ridzy
The boys can b cruel sometimes
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Thats Awesome................
When is Maan going to realise that the one whom he is searching is Geet?????????
Pls Update Sooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sweetttt update.
When maan will come to know that geet is his dream girl.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.




Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
Hey

I have just started reading your fan fic.. and its really interesting.. Please add me to your PM list and update soon.. Cant wait to read more of this.. Please n thanks

PS - keep up the amazing work

Nikky
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey its going really gr8 nd srsly wen maan will kno dat itz geet nd non other dan her eagerly waiting 4 ur nxt part du post it soon n pm me .....................:)tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
part 6-
awesome
gr8 job
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
part 7-
fantastic
i love it
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Colourful birds Part 8




Armaan:When you people decided to hoot at Riddhima's fashion show you all could have thought of my face.Otherwise how can you guys be my sincere friends?
Armaan looks very emotional.
Arm:You people could have called me to hoot.
The other guys stare at him as without understanding anything.
Arm:I could have joined you guys to hoot.
They are shocked.
Rishi:What?
Arm:I feel energetic to hoot at Riddhima.I was also interested to hoot.
All the boys laugh together.
Armaan goes to the other room with a smile.His smile slowly fades away.
He says to himself:I have to be happy for my friends.I don;t want them to harm themselves for me.
His friends who were hiding behind the wall were watching him secretly.They feel upset.

Maan and Arjun open the gate to go out.They see Geet and Arohi staring at them.
Arohi:Usually boys from other colleges come to our college to flirt with us.But you all came only to hoot.
G:They all proved that they can hoot nicely.Right Arohi?
Ar:I have not seen anyone hooting so nicely.
G:Where is Rishi?He always hides somewhere.
Ar:Poor boys got nervous.Don't waste time by listening to our crazy talk.Carry on.
Maan and Arjun walk way.They are embarassed.Arjun looks back.Arohi winks at him.He becomes shy.Arohi and Geet laugh.
Maan turns back and looks.THen he looks at Arjun:Why are they laughing?
A:Nothing.Walk.
Geet and Arohi can't control their laughter.


Geet and Arohi go to Geet's room.Riddhima is looking at the yellow flowers on the table.
G:Why are you attracted towards flowers suddenly?Usually people get attracted towards flowers when they fall in love.
R:I don't know.
G:If you don't know that you should know that.
A:Riddhima...we scolded the boys who hooted that day.
R:Scolded Armaan also?
Arohi lies:Yes.He is the real culprit no?We slapped him.
Riddhima is shocked.She imagines Armaan getting a slap.She feels bad.
R:But he had'nt hooted.
A:So what?He may be the one who sent them to hoot.R:NO.
G:Yes.He only did that.
R:nO.
She moves out.
A:What i said has effected Riddhima.
Geet smiles.

Geet dials the boys' land phone number.
Rishi picks up the phone.
R:Who is speaking?
G:Though you did'nt reognise me i recognised you Rishi.
Rishi is wondered:How?
G:I'm not anyone whom you tried to flirt with.So don't be nervous.I'm Geet.
Rishi is surprised:Geet!
G:Are you surprised?
R:Yes,i am.A pleasant surprise.
G:You are always hiding yourself from us.So in order to talk to you i need to phone you.Right?
He smiles.
G:Riddhima...
R:Please Geet.Don't utter that name.We could not tolerate her behaviour.That's why we behaved like that in the college.Please try to understand Geet.
G:Ok...but you should not have gone to this extent.Don't you think that you all crossed the limit?I know Riddhima very well.That's why i gave you a hint that day.Did you forget it?
Rishi is silent.
G:I will remind you if you forgot it.I had told you that i felt that Riddhima's stubborn nature is just her drama.
R:But it must be only your doubt.
G:May be.But now she is not that short tempered like before.She is feeling sympathy towards Armaan.
R:I'm sure that Riddhima's change is just her drama.
G:Rishi..
R:No Geet.We can't give Armaan hopes again.We thought Armaan's feeling for Riddhima is just an infatuation.But when Riddhima avoided her we studied him very well.We realized that we had not known our friend properly before.He is madly in love with Riddhima.But to make us happy he pretends to be naughty and cheerful now.He is recovering.We don't want him to stop smiling again.Though he talks a lot..though he cracks jokes always we know how soft his mind is.He should not be hurt in any way.
Geet is stunned.

Geet goes to the kitchen.She can't concentrate on cooking thinking of Rishi's words.She thinks:I'm sure that Riddhima is feeling the same which Armaan feels for her.So i thought problems are over.But Rishi...Oh!Riddhima will be hurt again and i don't think Armaan will be happy if he moves away from her.
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Posted: 14 years ago

awwww

i feel for the frends of armaan - and ridzi too......awwww
not to fear i knw happy days are on their way :D
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago

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