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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3

Did he just burst into tears??? 😲 Whoa...now this is different!
He feels quite strongly about the mystery girl i.e. Geet already....

How old is he again...in college? (this is NOT a sarcastic remark...I'm genuinely asking 😊 )

It was cute how the flowers inevitably reached Geet! 😃

Part 4

Arjohi in the rain! I see you've kept Arjun as the serious guy 😊
I like him that way...

Nice to see Armaan developing feelings for Ridz and also how they both wore red😉

As for Maan, I hope he realises that Geet is meant to be for him NOT Rishi soon!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 5

Aaah...it is sweet of Rishi to give Geet lessons!
But Geet is for Maan only...I hope Charu comes soon 😃

I also like the way Geet associates anything romantic with Maan! ADORABLE 😊😊😊

Dancing and singing...sounds fun!!!

Part 6

Riddhima was so harsh to Armaan! 😒
The poor guy likes her so much...and she was so mean 😲

Anyways, Maan has finally seen the "one"...how will he react???


P.S. Can I request an index on the first page?

Please continue PMing me and update asap ⭐️

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Posted: 14 years ago
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love it! plz add me to ur pm list and bring charu back for rishi!!!!! x
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Colourful birds Part 7






That is an old lady.
She:Yes?
Maan:Nothing.Sorry.
He is embarassed.He goes back to his friends who are laughing.
Armaan:Where you loving that old lady?Were you praising her beauty?
Rishi:We pity you.
Arjun:Without seeing the face you fell in love with her..because of the beautiful dress she wore?Till now you were watching an old lady.
Maan loses his control:No.The girl i saw and love is another one.
R:Don't be stupid.It is the same person.
M;No.She is a different person.She is lovely like snow.
Arj:Stop it.How can you be so sure about it?
M:When i saw that lady first itself i felt that she looks different from the girl i used to see before.
R:Then why were you eager to see her face?
M:That is because...a little hope was left.
R:O really?
M:Yes.I'm sure about my belief.One day you people will understand the truth.
His friends take it funny.

Geet prays in the temple.She feels that something is missing in her.She touches her ear:Oh,my new earring is missing.
She hears a manly voice:"Is it your's?"
She looks.It is Maan.He is holding her earring.She is surprised.
G:Maan!How did you get it?
M:I got it from the floor.I guess it fell down from your ear.
G:Thanks a lot.
M:No mention.
He puts it on her ear.Suddenly she realizes that it's only a dream.
M:Take it.
She takes it from his hand.
Maan goes away and prays.Geet looks at him.

Arohi is walking on the road.She sees Arjun.But she walks forward.
A:Arohi!
He goes near her.
A:Are you angry with us?Rishi did the right thing.Riddhima was so rude to Armaan.
Ar:But what did Armaan do?
A:He did'nt do it purposefully yaar.He just tried to make her happy.But..
Arohi smiles.
Ar:I know that.I have no personal grudge towards you all.
Arjun is relieved.
A:Then why did you avoid me now?
Ar:It is just to console Riddhima.By the way even if i avoid you why do you feel hurt?
Arjun simply smiles:Don't you know that?
Arohi blushes and runs away.Arjun smiles.




Rishi opens the gate to go out.
"Rishi",Geet calls him.
Rishi is embarassed to face her.
Geet goes near him with a smile.
G:Why are you hesitant to talk to me?
R:Nothing like that.
G:I feel you are avoiding me.
R:Nothing like that.
G:I know the reason.You were rough to Riddhima.So you find it difficult to face her friends.
R:No.Never.
G:That's true.You don't have to be embarassed.You should understand that.So don't try to run away from us.
Geet smiles.Rishi also smiles.
G:We don't justify Riddhima.We doubt whether Riddhima's anger is a drama.
R:What?
G:It's just a doubt.Don't tell this to Armaan.
Rishi nodded.

College fashion show...
Riddhima wears a stylish costume.The moment she reaches the stage some guys hoot.Geet and Arohi look at those guys.They were Rishi,Maan and Arjun.
Riddhima goes away from the stage with anger.Geet and Arohi become dull.They go to the backstage.Riddhima is crying there.
Geet keeps her arms on her shoulder.
G:Riddhima..don't mind it.Come.
R:Go.I'm not coming now.
A:What is this?Let them hoot.Why should you bother?
R:When they insulted me did any of our college mates react?
G:Don't expect anyone's help.You shoould take part in the fashion show.
R:No,i will not.
A:I want to shout at them.They destroyed her dream.
Arohi goes to the crowd.But she does'nt find them there.

The boys tell Armaan what happened in the college.
Armaan can't tolerate it.
Arm:You all should not have done that.
Arj:Now also Armaan has softcorner for that prowd girl.
Arm:What you all have done is very bad.You all went there without me.You all did'nt think about me once before going there?You all knew that it will make me upset.Right?Or you all are pretending that you gyys did'nt know that it will hurt me?
Armaan's change in tone makes others uncomfortable.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow thts sweet .....whn is maan knwing the girl is Geet :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...that was awesome...really loved it
poor maan missed geet again...
i hope they do meet soon...i want maan to know
it is geet...who he is after...loved it..keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow lovely update. sad Maan's dream girl was an old lady 😆 sorry can't help. So wen he is going to meet the beauty of the mist his angel aka Geet and knw it her and he is helping his frnd to get close to his dream girl
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thx 4 the pm.well in the last part i thought tat maan met geet,u u made the twist by showing the old lady.gr8 job.but make them meet soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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armaan is such a sweetheart!!!

bring charu for rishi....

leave maneet alone rishie!!!

update sooN!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pls continue soon waiting for Maan and Geet to meet

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