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Posted: 14 years ago

Alright, second update today!

I'm spoiling you!
Will work on the next few chapters some other time.
I admit, not my best pieces of work today.
The chapters are indeed rushed...
I'm sorry. :(

Chapter Ten - Avnesha

"Mehra naam hai Avnesha..."

[My Name is Avnesha]
"Mujhe kya farq padtha hai tumare naam seh, daffa hoja yahan seh!"
[What do I care what your name is? Get lost!]

"Haath meh talwar...ankon meh tezaab...apka naam toh sirf Brij Handa ho sakta hai..."

[One hand holding a sword and eyes filled with acid, your name can only be Brij Handa]
"Oye! Yeh talwar tum par bhi utt sakti hai besharam aurat...hatja mehri nazro seh."
[Oye! This sword can be raised on you aswell shameless woman, get out of my sight!]

"Tumari behen ko meh jaanti hoon...Geet? Geet Handa...Lekin aaj kal woh Handa naam istamaal nahi karti...kethi hai...sharam athi hai..."

[I know your sister...Geet? Geet Handa...but she doesn't like calling herself Handa...she says she's ashamed to do so...]
Fast Forward

"Usse mehri shaadi hone wali thi, lekin jabse woh ladki aay hai...Maan mujhe dekta nahi hai...! Apko patha nahi apki behen besharmo jaise harqat karti hai..mehra bas yahi kaam tha...uski sachay jaan ke meh Maan ko batao woh kitni charitarheen larki hai! Phir usko chod kar woh mehre paas aajaye gaa... Aap mujhe uske bare meh batao...sabh kuch...aur badle meh apse vaada karti hoon keh meh uska patha apko doongi...phir aapko jho bhi karna hai kariye..."

[I was about to get married to him, but then that girl arrived and Maan wouldn't even look at me! You have no idea of the shameless behaviour your sister does...all I want is to find out her full truth and inform Maan of her characterless nature. Then he will leave her and come to me...just tell me what you know about her...everything and in return I promise to give you her address...do with it what you will...]
"Tumari gardan meh kaat kar patha laga sakta hoon woh kaha hai ladki!"
[I could just as easily cut your throat and find out girl!]

"Haan...lekin aapne aise kiya tho meh apko nahi bataaongi...Woh mar gayi phir Maan puri zindagi uske gham meh mujhe bhool jayega...lekin uski sachay batha kar phir woh use nafrat karega!"

[Yes...but then I wouldn't be able to tell you...if she dies just like that then Maan will mourn her for eternity and forget about me...however if her truth is provided to him then he'll hate her instead!]
"Phir suno...Jabse woh haram kaur Hoshiapur aya...usne teen din meh uski shaadi Geet seh karwane khi zid khi..."
[Then listen...ever since that bas***d came to Hoshiapur...he insisted the wedding be completed in three days...]

"Kaun?"

[Who?]
"Tumko kya matlab hai uske naam seh!?"
[What do you need his name for?]

"Bas aise..."

[Just...]
"Vaise abh koi farq nahi padtha...Dev...uska naam tha Dev Khurana...uski bhabi Naintara...behen Pammi aur uski Maa. Sabh keh sabh kaminey...Geet keh saath aik raath guzar kar bagh gaya woh saala...humari purko khi zameen aur handani zevaar leh kar daffa hogaya aur Geet koh airport chor kar challa gya..."
[Doesn't matter anyway...Dev...his name was Dev Khurana...his sister-in-law Naintara, sister Pammi and his mother. All of them bas***ds...He spent one night with Geet and then ran away with our land and family jewelry and left Geet at the aiport and ran away]
Rewind

Chor kar challa gya...

[Left Geet at the aiport and ran away]
Rewind

Challa gya...

[ran away]
Rewind

Dev....uska naam tha.

[His name was Dev]
Forward

Aik raath guzarkar...

[He spent one night...]
"DEV!" Maan roared and grabbed at the fallen man at his feet. He slammed the recorder on his head repeatedly. "Suno! AUR SUNO! Bhag kyun rahe ho!? PHIR SEH SUNO!" He thrust his broth- no...he thrust the monster away from him only to kick him repeatedly in the ribs. "Mehra bai ho kar istara si harqat?!"

He pounded his flesh against Dev's cheek again...and again...but to no avail. There was no satisfaction.

Maan flung Dev halfway across the room and slammed both hands on the bedside drawers and dug his nails into the wood as his guilt overwhelmed him. He shut his eyes tight as he recalled the days of Hoshiapur.

She'd ripped the property documents in his very face.

Screamed her pain...she wouldn't sign.

She was tired of everyone's words...tired of trusting her own family.

He hadn't cared.

Teen din woh dhoka deh kar chala gya...aur aap sabh kethe hai...bhool jhao!?

[He betrayed me and left me after three days...and all any of you can see is forget it?!]
Yeh ladki...apki beti Geet apkeliye bahut bare musibat bane wali hai...mehri yeh baat yaad rakiye gaa...
[This girl...your daughter Geet will become a huge problem for you...remember my words]

Mujhe maat maro veerji...maat maro...maine koi galti nahi khi...

[Don't kill me brother...don't hit me...I did nothing wrong]
Please bachalo mujhe...bachalo...
[Please save me...save me...]

Dev held his battered body between his hands and gasped open mouthed. He had ran and fallen at the feet of Maan begging for forgiveness...but had received what he truly deserved. There was no hatred in him for this...only complete and utter shame for his actions...but now as he listened to the tape horror creeped up his spine.

Alexandra had crossed all limits.

The recording device slipped out of Maan's hand and the play button hit the marble ground.

"Marne kiliye jhab nikla tabh woh jungle meh apne yaar keh saath bhag gayi...woh Maan...uska patha kya hoga?"

[I left to go kill her but she ran of with her boyfriend...that Maan...do you have his whereabouts?]
"K-kyun?"
[W-why?]

"Kyunke uska bhi hisaab karna bhaki hai bewakoof ladki..."

[Because I have to clear my debt with him too you stupid girl]
The tape crackled for a minute and eventually various noises managed to cut through.

Noises of Alexandra running...panting...yelling...being dragged...her shrieks of pain...and then a roar indicating her fighting back.

"Panch mard ho kar pakar nahi paa rahe ho aik ladki ko?! Mujhe woh zinda chahiye! Oye! Uske haath meh kya hai? Bachne nah paaye! Pakro!"

[Five of you men can't catch one single girl? I want her alive! Oye! What's that in her hand? Don't let her escape! Catch her!]
One single vengeful screech and an ear blistering loud bang...

Brij Handa falling...one sickening thud...heavy breathing, a sigh of relief then a pained grunt as the jeep door opened and closed.

Maan frowned and bent down towards the recorder, his eyes wide and searching. "This is how she got injured...that ******* went after her because she wouldn't give up our address..." He looked across with a deathly glare at Dev and hissed. "This is all because of you. Geet...Alexandra...mujhe...Daadima...sabko...sabh kuch hatham kardiya tumne!"

Maan growled and stopped the tape, rubbing a hand all over his face as a soulless look slipped into his eyes. "Dev...Go call Choti-ma, Pammi and Naintara back from Canada...give them any excuse...just get them back now."

Dev flinched at his brother's cold voice but crawled to the doorway before getting up slowly.

"Don't even think about running out of this house Dev...varna tumara itna bura hashar karunga...tumari puri duniya hill jayegi." Dev nodded fearfully and escaped to his room instead...whatever would happen, at least one thing was for sure. His two-faced wife would go down with him.

Maan clenched his fists and breathed out fire before stalking out, barely noticing a panting Nakul running behind him as he strode towards the stairs.

"Saab! Rukiye!"

"WHAT?!" Maan whipped around nearly toppling Nakul to the floor.

"W-woh...Pinky maam ka phone hai..." He whimpered.

Maan blistered instantly, "Usko kaho mehre paas waqt nahi hai uski baqwaas sune keliye." He had to find Geet somehow...

"W-woh Geet maa-"

"Give me the phone." Maan snatched the white cordless phone from Nakul's hands. "Geet kya? Kahan hai woh...?"

"W-woh sir...apko abhi usko rukna hoga...woh aaj raath Mumbai jaa rahi hai train keh zariye...You have only twenty minutes s-sir." Pinky's voice uncertainly told him, torn between betraying her friend and hoping for the miracle that was Maan. "P-please sir...woh hamesha kiliye jaa rahi hai."

Maan dropped the phone and for the second time that night, he tore through the mansion and sped out of the gates in one of the Khurana cars.

She wasn't going to leave...not now...not ever.

Savitri Devi hurried to the staircase and watched her grandson go like a hurricane. "Maan beta ruko! Kya huwa?! Maan!" She placed one hand on her chest and breathed in with great difficulty...what was going on?

---

Geet held her ticket and suitcase tightly in her hands and shivered in the night cold; wrapping her shawl tightly around herself she looked down at her unborn child. "Phikar math karo. Tumari maa tujhe kuch bhi nahi hone deh ghi...kal seh hum dono phir seh aik nayi zindagi shuru karenge..." She promised and bit her lip as her train came to a screeching stop in front of her. "Chal Geet...himmat phir seh juta...aur chal..." The station was mostly deserted at this time of night (or well...early morning) so she didn't bother asking for anyone's help and instead took small tiny steps forward and started lifting up her suitcase onto the train holding her stomach protectively.

"Iss halat meh...yeh kaam tujhe nahi karna chahiye Geet."

Geet froze.

Edited by alias90 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PreeyaKSharma

run dev run!! varna tu mara aaj *evil grin*


brij... charles brons... what a comparison!!!

both updates are great... bas ab us khotti geet nu rok!!!

can't post longer alia... my comp doesn't let...

so updt soon...

Oh Goodie Preeya! You're here. Even if it's short term.
I knew if not anyone else, you'd get the Charles Brons joke. 😆
*mwah!*
:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
oye taaliyan... yup you're spoiling us... but i like this!!!

awesome update... i love alex very very very much! would've kissed her if she was a guy!

love you alia!
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Posted: 14 years ago
@alia: hehehe... tum aise joke charles brons maaro... aur mai na samjhun? how can that happen!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Let her go she need a break 4rm maan.....lol.... Nahi...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

Let her go she need a break 4rm maan.....lol.... Nahi...

Tum sabh mujhse confuse karo geh toh phir meh kya karoongi?! 😕😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update..............i'm so happy to see dev bashed up like this by maan...............................hope maan stops geet ...........................poor alex, so much she had to endure to uncover the truth and get proof......................but plz update soon as it is becoming more interesting nearing the climax
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Posted: 14 years ago
superhero maan to the rescue i hope
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Posted: 14 years ago

oh baby you are on a roll today ........

2 updates in a row.

can't really believe it.

really loved it though they were short ones.i don't care , because you are back👍🏼

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow! Two updates! Nice...

Loved them - except I don't understand Hindi, so could you sum up the conversation on the tape?

Thanks!

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