FF Maneet: Tere mast mast do nain pt37 LAST pg 94 - Page 34

Created

Last reply

Replies

617

Views

111.2k

Users

77

Likes

2.1k

Frequent Posters

swetha10 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
nice update... maan getting romantic was really cute.. liked maan proposing geet.. do continue soon
mitzi11 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
hip hip hooray the wedding is on wow super hot update pls cont soonnnnnnnn
Tishuu thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
lool the weddin is gna be fab i can sense it - haha they are sooooooo cuteee
hermoini thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
wow so nice parts coming up nw
dhrashtee thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

that was lovely update....starting from beginning...should be good...plz cont soon

-BlushaLicious- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
the neck parts funny
reali nce update
please please update soonxxxx:)
kooliio thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update!!!
cant wait for the next part!!!
pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM
-shamima- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
Aww yay theyre back together and that was naughty maan she's hiding them and he wants to give more lool anyways great update and continue soon 😊
SaVni thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago

Part 18:

Maan start the car and says to Geet to sit and she does as she don't want him to be angry on her. Geet looked at Maan as he was looking at her.

Geet- Please Maan, I don't want to die and start laughing
Maan - What is so funny in that?

Geet- Please Maan first you are really unromantic

Maan looks up and gives her a strange look

Geet- Seriously .. Tum itne boring ho , aur romantic .. tauba tauba..

Maan- Geet ? You are saying that MSK is unromantic
Geet- Yes! and gives a smile
Maan- Don't smile!
Geet- Kyo? Sach bola is liye?
Maan: Main tumhara kya karo?
Geet- Eat me!
Maan get's a naughty tought and don't care in his driving
Geet- No Maan! I was joking. And anotherthing I was saying about eat me as a meal not as a human being,

Maan- Geet! You ruined the fun!
Geet- Acha baba! Where are we going?

Maan- Itni jaldi bhol gayi?
Geet- ?
Maan- Office Geet?
Geet- I mean after Office?

Dadi maa calls Maan and he answer

Dadimaa: Maan bete aap ho kaha?
Maan: Woh Dadi maa mein aur Geet office ja rahe hain, kyo kuch hua hai kya?
Dadi maa: I was thinking that aaj aap dono shopping ke liye jate. I mean Geet ko bridal shopping with NT.
Maan: I will ask Geet.

Maan - Geet Dadi maa poch rahe hai if you want to go and make bridal shopping with NT

Geet smiles - Yes! no
Maan- Why no?
Geet- Office?
Maan- I'm also going with you remember?
Maan: Ji dadi maa woh NT ke saath ja rahi hai. Waise Dev ko bhi saath bejna
Dadimaa: Maan! Aap nhi sudro ge. Fine aap bhi apni shopping kar lena.
Maan: Thik hai dadi maa

Geet- Waise NT kaha bolaya hai?
Maan- At Mall?

Geet- Yah , thik hai
Maan parkes the car in the parking lot and goes out. Geet stands next to him when suddenly Maan started to laugh.

Geet- Kya hua?
Maan- HAHAHA
Geet- Maan aap ko kya hua? She looks around for see if he has seen something funny that she missed?

Geet- yeh.. aap .. aap ko kya hua hai?
Maan- Thik hai .. fine .. tum itne pyaar se poch rahi ho to btana ho ga!
Geet- Boliye na!

Maan: Tum ne jo itna time lagaya hai apne marks hatane mein
Geet- to?

Maan- Woh marks ab nazar a rahe hai
Geet- WHAT? mirror
Maan- huh?

Geet- MIRROR!!!

Maan- here

Geet takes it and looks , she makes a sad baby face and looks at him, she is about say something to him when NT and Dev comes. Geet takes her dupatta and tries to hide it. Maan gives her a fly kiss and she gives a angry look back!

All goes in to the shopping mall , Geet is angry on Maan and want him to stay away so NT wont note so much of her neck , she tought!

NT: Kya hua Geet?

Geet - mein soch rahi thi ke hum apni shopping karte hai aur inko apni shopping karne dethe hai

NT- Thank god Geet!

Geet- Matlab Di?

NT - Mujhe laga ke Geet Maan veer ji ke saath aur time spend karna chahti thi.

Geet who was drinking water spills everything out.
Maan gives her a evil smile and she start to couch..

Geet- Di chalo!

After 3 hours.

Maan and Dev are still shopping and NT and Geet was already finished. They had some stuff left but they don't want to be in this mall anymore. They were really hungry.

NT sees some marks on Geet's neck but she tought that she wont ask her maybe she will take it wrong. Then she get's a ida

NT- Geet!

Geet- Ji di?
NT- udhar dekho wo Dev aur Maan veer ji hai na?
Geet: Kaha?
NT- Look at left

Geet looked and NT sees the love marks she touch it and Geet jumpes up.

NT- yeh kya hai Geet? in a teasing voice
Geet- Kya di?
NT - Apni di se chupao gi? the love ma..
Geet- Woh di.. She sees Maan and Dev coming

Geet- Di aap Maan se hi poche yeh marks usne kaise diye!
NT- ohh!! =) .. Toh yeh Maan veer ji neh diye hai!
Geet- Ohh I..

Dev and Maan reach to them and ask them what they have shopped.

NT- dekhiye .. suddenly she was feeling weak and falls down
Dev catch's her and Maan and Geet get's worried

Geet- Dev take her to the doc

Hospital:

Doc comes out and Dev get's in tension.

Dev- doc how is NT
Doc- Don't worry mr dev , she is fine but you should take care of her.
Dev- What is it something seriouse?
Doc - No no.. She is fine! But try to keep her away stress.

Geet understand direct what doc meant.
Doc looked at Geet and said that she should have taken care of her.

Dev- Doc what are you talking about?

Doc- Oh I'm sorry ! Well congrats mr. Dev you are going to be a father
Dev- That's ok .. WHAT! Doc what did you say? he has a big smile
Doc- I just go and write som medecine for her.

Dev- Bro , did you hear? mein baap bane wala ho aur aap bade papa
Maan- Congrats Dev! and hugs him

Dev- I must go and meet NT.

Maan goes to Geet and she is trying to escape from him and Maan holds her hand and pushes her to the wall.

Maan- Kya hua Geet? with a smile

Geet- Maan choro mujhe! koi aa jaega
Maan- To ane do
Geet- Please
Maan- Waise I think tumhe doc se poch lena chai hai ke yeh marks kaise jate hai
Geet- Yooouu!! I know how they will go away
Maan- Really? Do you have practise or something?
Geet- Maan , enough now! and makes a sad face.

Suddenly somebody knocks on Geet's shoulder. Geet jumpes up and looks back and get's shocked!

Precap: Maneet Marriage??? :D

Thank you everyone for liking it .. Press Like button if you like it or not! :D

Sorry if I don't describe so much on theire marriage. I want more of theire after life after marriage.. what will happend? To know you guys have to read :D Lots of love Iram

pushpi thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Haii Maneet Marriage?! Karo karo jaldi update karo na :-D
I soo LOVE your story and how things are shaping up.
Thanks a ton dear

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

5 months ago

Tere Ho Gaye Hain Hum(I have become Yours)Sameer Nandini ZaBir SS

Parth,Adnan and Ketaki version I dedicate this to my friend Sydell who wants the Parth,Adnan,Ketaki version of the movie Hum dil de chuke sanam...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

5 months ago

Tere Ho Gaye Hain Hum Purab Sakshi ZaBir SS(Closed)

(Parth,Adnan and Ketaki version) Tere Ho Gaye Hain Hum.... I have become Yours..Part 1 I dedicate this to my friend Sydell who wants the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

2 months ago

Aradhana & Reyaansh SS : Na Jaane Kyun (last chp + epilogue pg 3)

COVER BY AISHWARYA (Mystic_Muse) SUMMARY Suzanne Miller , an Indian Origin Canadian Citizen adopted by the Miller family, who goes on a quest to...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

7 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2) In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".