FF Maneet: Tere mast mast do nain pt37 LAST pg 94 - Page 33

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Posted: 14 years ago
cant w8 till maan say 'will u marry me ' update soon.xxx:)!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb!!!...
i don't want geet to do something stupid again just because she was feeling guilty!...
i hope they get married soon!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hmmm..I wonder who's proposing...
thanks for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update !! same question wasnt she in a night dress then hw cme u mentioned saree
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Posted: 14 years ago
Please Update Soon! I love this FF!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update!!!
cant wait for the next part!!!
pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii....
just completed all d parts....
last part was really awesome....so much of passion....
looks,NT's plan is going to b successful very soon....
good going....
n continue soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice n romantic update
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Part 17:

maan waited for her to come out..he could hear her cry & weep it was killing him..he tried knocking the door but she did'nt respond.. geet stood there thinking about wat she just felt..she was so guilty she wondered how could she ever initiate all that..how much she avoided even thinking about maan..where this desire came from...wat was all this
rush of act of lust..Then she remembers that she loves him but she didn't wanted her to do it before marriage. She felt guilty for what she has done.

She thinks that she is only engaged with Maan and they have just reunion and this mistake already. She start cry more.

maan just opened the door forcefully & walked in..geet was drenched in her saree..
she was hating herself..maan just hugged her tight and said..
maan - geet u are my fianc ..its ok..
geet - no its not ok..leave me..chodoo mujhe..
maan did'nt let go of her...maan held her tight & said..geet please calm down

She fell week & helpless , maan lifted her & took her to the room..took a towel & wiped her wiped her tears with his thumb

geet - said I am sorry..main..woh!! I did'nt mean and started to cry again...
maan closed her lips with his index finger & said please kuch math kaho..

Maan- it is not your fault.
Geet grabed his hand - Please Maan don't think I just did it for money or something , or the bet...

Maan- I know Geet , I trust you.. I know that you didn't do it for the bet or something. But please rona band karo na! You know warna and kiss her neck
Geet- Maan choro , mujhe godgodhi hor rahi hai and start laughing

Maan- Maan is still kissing her neck, and continue to her collarbone

Geet wants him to go off and start tickle him

Maan jumps up and bits on her neck

Geet- Aahh , she screams

Maan- What did I say?
Geet- Maan ! and hugs him

Geet goes to change as she is late for work. Maan goes to take a shower and comes back.

Geet is about to enter when Maan stops her.

Maan- rokho na! I want to say something!
Geet- haa bolo
Maan bends down on his knees

Maan - Geet Handa , I love you bottom of my heart , I can't be away from you , my heart beats only for you, I'm only yours, so will you marry me? and takes out a ring
Geet: Maan , with tears in her eyes
Maan- I'm waiting with a smile
Geet: Yes! Yes I will marry you and hugs him.

Maan hugs Geet - Tum ne aaj mera din bna diya. I will call dadi and say that you answer yes.

Geet - Can I go and change my clothes?
Maan looks at her neck and says yes,

Geet goes in to the bathroom and looks at her self.

Geet- Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!! Maaaaaaan!!!
Maan startes to laugh and goes to the bathroom
Maan- Kya hua Geet?
Geet: Kya hua ? Look at my neck what have you done?
Maan looks and it is full off kiss mark and his bit everything that remembered him about theire night.
Geet- Yeh ,, aghhhh!! Main inko kaise chupao? All your fault Maan!
Maan- my fault? you didn't stop me!
Geet- I didn't stop u? You stay away.

Maan - As your wish and start laughing again , he goes out from the bathroom and says iss pagal ladki ka mein kya karo?

Maan goes and calls dadi and says that Geet and he wants to get married soon. Dadi is happy that Geet and Maan want's to begin from a new beginning.

Dadi tells the hole house that they are marring again. NT is happy as her plan succes.

Geet comes out from the washroom and is wearing a light yellow anarkali. She is about to make-up her marks when Maan holds her from the back. Geet looks at the mirror and gives him a angry look

Maan- What? Still angry? in a glad voice
Geet- Yes still angry, leave me now!
Maan- kiss her again on her neck and she becomes more angry
Geet: Maan , yeh aap kya kar rahe ho? Mujhe itna time lag raha hai yeh marks chupane mein aur apko romance soja hai
Maan- I'm happy
Geet- Happy? Happy to kam lag rahe ho aur romantic ke mode mein zayda ho
Maan- Well I don't mind if we repeat it.

Geet- Now it's enough. You have to wait until I don't came out and then we will go to the office
Maan- Pehle meri baat to sun lo
Geet- Mujhe kuch nehi sununa, and close the door.

She takes a concelare and markes her mark that Maan gave her.

She opens the door and Maan is looking at her neck. He can't evan see a little bite mark och something.

Maan- Wow Geet, see you have hide it
Geet - Don't take you me
Maan- Tum MSK ko keh rahi ho ,
Geet- Wow MSK ko keh rahi ho , do you think i'm scared of him?
Maan- Geeet!!!
Geet- Hehe , acha baba chalo i'm sorry
Maan- Aise nhi
Geet- To kaise?
Maan- one kiss and looks at her neck
Geet- bilkul nhi and takes her dupatta
Maan- fine then I won't drive
Geet- Fine , then I take the taxi and goes out from the car.

Maan start the car and says to Geet to sit and she does as she don't want him to be angry on her.

Precap: Starting from the beginning

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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr88888 part.
Continue soonnnn.
Thanxx for the pm.




Fatima

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