SS on maaneet TOGETHER FOREVER part 15 page 51 - Page 30

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow
I love the way he
Cares for her
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aslamualekum,
abhi abhi tumhari FF parhi .............
buhat achhi lagi isse pehly bhi parhi thi lekin jab comment nahi kerpaie thi tu i miss
but now ab jab k poriparhli aur her her move and emotion is ka buhat khoob hia ............aur beyaan bhikhoob kiya hiatu please when you update next please please pleasePM me
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Posted: 14 years ago
cute the way they care for eachother awesome pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was sweet of Maan to stay there even when it's very difficult for a man to resist at such a stage.Thanks for the PM and update soon!
cheers,
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Posted: 14 years ago
woww
awesome part
totally loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
loved the way they both know eachother.........
cant wait for da next part
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr888 update.
Maan is veryyy sweet.
Continue soonnnn.
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Posted: 14 years ago

he then picked her up in his arms and made her sit on the bed leaning against the bed post
maan sat next to her and looked her in concern

Together Forever
Part 14


geet:aap ko kya hua?
what happened to you?
maan:tum nay vomit kia tou... ab hum doctor k paas jaey gay
you threw up so.... now we'll go to the doctor
geet: doctor k paas janay ki zrurat nahi hay ye pregnancy may normal si baat hay
there's no need to go to the doctor this is normal in pregnancy
maan didn't looked satisfied
he was still worried about her
maan:may abhi aya aur tum yaha say hilna mt
i'll be back and don't move from here
he took out his phone and dialed a number and went out
geet waited for him but he didn't come inside
geet stood up from the bed and went out to see where maan had gone
he wasn't outside the room
geet saw him going down the stairs
she went behind him and had only taken a step down when she started feeling dizzy
maan looked behind him (didn't knew the reason) and saw geet holding her head
maan ran up to her and held her by her waist before she could fall down
maan supported her by her shoulders and took her to her room
he made her lay down on the bed after giving her some water
maan:may nay tum say kaha tha na yaha say hilna mt.. agar may pichay murr ke na dekhta tou tum tou gai thi na aaj.. tum hamesha meray kahay ka upta kyu karti ho?
i tod you not to move from here... if i hadn't turned around to see then you would had been a gonner... why do you always do the opposite of what i say?
geet: aap ko bohat dair ho gai thi tou may nay socha aap office ja rahay hay isi leay bahar ai thi

aur may nay aik barr kisi ka kaha mana tha tou apni puri zindagi barbaad kr baithi thi....
you had gone for long so i thought you were going to office thats why i came out and i listened to someone before and ended up ruining my life....
maan:geet tumhay mujh pe bharosa nahi..? abit disappointed)
geet don't you trust me?
geet: hay na... khud say bhi zyada
i do... more than myself
maan cupped her face
maan:tou aisi batay kyu kar rahi ho?
then why are you talking like this?
- and hugged her pulling her into a tight embrace as if he was fearing of losing his most prized possession- his geet
geet returned the hug trying to assure him and rested her head on his shoulder
maan didn't realize how long it had become
he tried to move back but then noticed that geet had fallen asleep
he removed her hands from his back and then carefully made her head rest on the pillow
maan didn't wanted to go away from her
and texted sasha to cancel all his meetings and do the all the necessary work that wold be required
his cell rang
maan quickly cut the call so geet might not get disturbed
but his phone again rang
maan got frustrated at the caller and recieved the call
sasha:MK kya aap ki sari meetings cancel karni hay?
MK should i cancel all the meetings?
now maan got really angry at her
maan:sasha tum parhna bhool gai ho kya? agar tum usko purho tou tumhay SAAF SAAF likha dikhay ga k may nay tumhay saari meetings cancel krnay ko kaha hay aur jo important kaam ho usay dekhnay ko bhi
sasha have you forgotten how to read? if you read then you will see clearly that i told you to cancel all the meetings and if there is some important work then handle it
sasha got really scared
geet who was still sleeping, had her hand on maan's lap and had started rubbing against it
(ab tou sotay huay b maan k mood swings ka pata hay 😉)
maan was still on call with sasha and was getting turned on
his harsh mood suddenly softened by her touch
maan:geeeeet!
maan moaned her name and kept the phone down on the side table after ending the call
he removed her hand from him and put it on her stomach
as soon as he did that he remembered when geet told him about her pregnancy and wanted to know what really happened
he wanted to rip that man apart who had his hands on HIS geet's body
maan:geet may tumhay kabhi nahi choru ga
i'll never laeve you geet
he decided to ask geet about her past
maan rested his head beside geets
he was lying with his legs hung down the bed
he held geet in his arms and didn't knew when he dozed off


sasha in the office was fuming
sasha:maana ke geet aur MK nay engagement kr li hay laikin is ka yeh matlb tou nahi na k geet MK to patana shuru kr day.. is geet ka kuch tou karna he paray g


it was 1 pm now
dadi asked nakul if geet went to the office or not
nakul replied with a no
dadi then went to the outhouse because she wanted to talk to geet and talk about last night
but when she saw maan and geet in that pose her mouth dropped open
she closed her mouth
she didnt knew maan could do this
she wanted to talk to geet but then thought of talking to maan first
she went upto him and shook him a little by his shoulder
maan woke up and stood up when he saw dadi standing there
dadi motioned him to come outside
maan thought what would dadi be thinking of them
maan went outside with her.... worried


heyy
so how was it??
what will dadi say to maan???
and wat will sasha do..??
do comment guyz 😃
and thankyou for the motivation i got from your previous comments
love to read them
eagerly eaiting for more
@ Tishuu i started writing this SS when geet told maan that she was pregnant and maan kept avoiding her next day in the office. so yes maan knows about geet's pregnancy. hope this clears ur doubts
love
Noor
p.s i'm really busy these days wid college and also at home..... my brother has come home and will go after eid... so m really busy.... regular updates after eid that will be after 18th (i cant promise but will try)
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

that is really nice....loved it

great read and do keep writing

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update yar...

thanks for the pm....


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