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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 123pritha

loves it

please add me to your pm list

you're added dear and thanx
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow.....that was awesome....really great update.....
so loved it...do keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwww
too romantic..............
love it
totally love this part😳
do continue soon
thanks dear for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Noor, you write really well. Really romantic. Loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Noor 🤗

update awesome 👏
👏👏👏
loved it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Maaneet r soooooooooooooo romantic❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
eagerly w8ng for next part
plssssssss cont soon

Luv u
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Posted: 14 years ago
just read chapter 11 and 12...
loved it... it was just awesome.... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

she smiled and turned to see maan lying next to her
geet snuggled in maan's chest and closed her eyes and fell asleep
maan kissed on top of her head and rested his head on hers and closed his eyes

Together Forever

Part 13

maan woke up next morning to find geet sleeping peacefully
he could not remove his gaze from her
she looked beautiful even while sleeping
maan moved in and gave a light peck on her lips
he moved back and smiled to himself to see that geet was even blushing in her sleep
he was about to get up but found their legs tangled
he did not wanted to embarass geet if she got up and found herself in this stuation
maan carefully pulled his legs so geet might not wake up
he got up from the bed wore his shirt and went to the mansion without looking at geet because he knew that if he would look back at her he might be a ble to go
he walked inside and bumped into dev
dev: bhaiya aap itni subha subha kaha say aa rahay hay?
bro where are you coming from this early?
maan:wo... umm..... may wo
dev: ohhhh tou aaj raat aap nay apni mangetar k sath guzari hay.. not bad bhaiya
ohhhh so you spent the night with you r fiance.... not bad bro
dev said while smiling his devil smile
maan:(stern voice) aisa kuch nahi hay dev aur may bahar walk kay leay gya tha
its nothing like that and i just went out for walk
dev: acha bro
maan went for his workout and after that took shower, got ready for office
he went downstairs and found dadi maa sitting on the dinning table with dev waiting for maan
maan went to her and kissed her on the forehead
he was going outside when dadi called
dadimaa:maan beta aap nashta tou kar lijeay
maan beta atleast eat your breakfast
maan: umm nahi dadi maa may office may he kr lu ga
umm no dadi maa 'll have it in office
dadi maa:per maan beta...
maan: dadi maa please
dadi maa:acha yeh tou batatay jaey k meri bahu kaha hay?
okay justtell mae where is my bahu?
maan: dadi maa wo apnay kamray may hay
she's in her rom dadi maa
dadi maa:acha thek hay beta

maan went outside and into the outhouse
he went to geet's room and found her sitting infront of the dressing table brushing her hair and making a plait of them
maan went to her and stood behind her
he removed her hands from hair and opened the plait
he then took the brush and brushed her hair
geet looked at maan through the mirror
maan then put the brush down and let her hair fall on her back
he then looked at geet in the mirror and saw her looking at him
maan smiled at her
geet stood up and faced him
maan:tum aisay aur khubsurat dikhti ho
you look even more beautiful like this
geet blushed to a deep shade of red and looked down
maan:chalay?
geet: ji
maan took her hand in his and they went downstairs
they were about to step out of the outhouse when maan remembered something
maan:geet tum nay nashta kia?
did you have your breakfast?
geet loked at him first and then looked down
geet: nahi...
no....
maan beacame angry
maan:geet tumhay apna zra tou khyal rakhna chaheay.. agar apni nahitou kam az kam us nanhi jaan ki tou kuch fikar karo jo tumharay undr hay
geet you should take care of yourself.... if not your than atleast atleast take care of that little life inside you..
geet felt really bad
maan:tum nay nashta kyu nahi kia? huh??
why didn't you have breakfast? huh??
geet: wo meri aankh late khuli tou time nahi mila aur mera dil nahi kar raha tha.. nausia feel ho raha tha
wo i got up late and i wasn't feeling like having it.... i was having nausiatic feeling
maan:baat tumharay dil chahnay ya na chahnay ki nahi hay.. baat uus bachchay ki jaan ki hay... us ki hay jis k leay tum nay apna sab kuch chor dia.. aur jaha tk sawak tumharay nausia ka ka hay wo us waqt theek hoga jb tumhara pait bhra hua ho ga... chalo ab tum baitho may tumharay leay nashta bna kr lata hu
its not about your feeling... its about that child.. that child for whom you left every thing behind.... and as for your nausia eat something then it'll be okay.... sit down i'll make some breakfast for you
geet: aap rehnay day may khud hi office may kr lu gi
leave it... i'll have breakfast from office
maan:geet ab meray sath behas na karo aur chup chap yaha baith jao
geet now dont argue with me and sit here silently
geet didn't say anything to him after that and sat on the couch in the hall
maan went to the kitchen and made an omellete and put the bread in the toaster
after five minutes maan brought geet a plate of omellete with some toasts with it
he sat on the couch with the plate on his lap
he made a bite out of the plate and took it in front of her mouth to eat
but geet refused to eat and took the bite out of his hand
she held it infront of him to eat
geet: app nay bhi tou nashta nahi kia
you didn't hav it either
maan:tumhay kaisay pata..?
how did you know..?
geet didn't answer cuz even she didn't know how
geet smiled and maan ate from her hand
both maan and geet fed each other and were about to leave when geet turned around and ran upstairs to her room
maan became worried about her
what had happened to her
he followed geet to her bedroom but didn't find her there
then he heard some sound from the washroom
he looked at that drection and saw the door ajar
he looked inside and saw geet bent on the sink and... vomiting
at first maan didn't understand what was happening but when he understood he quickly went inside and held geet's hair and supported her forehead with his hand
when geet was done he made her wash her mouth and gargle
he then picked her up in his arms and made her sit on the bed leaning against the bed post
maan sat next to her and looked her in concern


thankyou guyz for the comments and waiting for some new comments so do comment and press the like button
and i wont be updating for a while... well may b a loooong while.. m aloooot busy wid college and at home too.. so regular updates after 12th nov (i cant promise but will try)
love
Noor
link to part 14
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update....totally loved it
and do keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
loved the way they both know eachother
hope geet is fine
cant wait for da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

great part👏👏👏👏👏👏
superb⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
update asap
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