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Posted: 14 years ago
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DR: you guys look so much caring for each other. watching Maan pulling chair for her. "why you guys being so careless "
Maan: what Dr
DR: you are a very careless husband Mr Maan .
Geet: woh yeh tou
Maan: mein business trip pa tha aur iss na apni yeh haalat bana lee ha... he stared at Geet who had tears in her eyes.
Dr: ok Mr Maan as you are back now i think you will take care of her properly . this is her medicine prescription & her diet chart you should make sure she eat properly,rest & stay happy.
Maan: ok i will Dr
Geet feeling embarrassed . Dr woh...
Dr: got what bothering her ."i will ask nurse to give injection to your husband she will bandage it"
Geet: felt more shy.
Maan looked at her blush face Mahi... .. nurse gave him injection Geet closed her eyes as if she was having pain... a smile came at his Maan lips.
will cont if you like

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved this part 2....really nice

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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg he is actually accepting everything for her..so sweet..please update soon...please pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: desigurl953

omg he is actually accepting everything for her..so sweet..please update soon...please pm me


ok i will pm you i will add 1 more part before Geet is on aired ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was gr8.loved ur scenes.plz continue.n plz pm me when u write it.plz n thx again.it was gr8
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yaar all the Parts are Awesome
Loved it..................
Pls continue Dear
Will be eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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read all parts.
awesome parts.loved them.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet: will will go to out house she got up from bed
Maan: grab her hand" i will not eat you . can't you rest"
Geet: "maan chora mera haath muhje ko daard horaha ha"started crying
Maan: shouted stop crying i can't see tears in your eyes. heard foot step he let her free.
Dadi : back with Maan breakfast... beta eat this
Maan: rub his tummy as he is full. "dadi woh"
Geet: dadi i will eat this omelet ..she took it from her hand.
Dadi : again check her forehead to Maan"beta iss ko abhi bhi bokhar ha "
Maan: looked at her he regret how rude he is with her."dadi mein geet ko hospital la kar ja raha hoon"
Geet:" nahi mein theek ho"Maan: stared her in anger with finger ask her to remain quiet.
Geet : choke started coughing .dadi :rub her back
Maan became worried "why she is so imp for me?"to himself. "get up let me take you to hospital there you will have full checkup" offer his hand She hesitated but grab it as she didn't want to create scene in front of Dadi.she was feeling weak in her knees not able to walk .he picked her up in his arms Dadi :smiled "made for each other
part2
*****
in car
Geet: pehla aap meri baat suna then i will go to DR
Maan: hit the break car stop with a jerk but he but his arm in front of her. " chup aik dum "
Geet: held his arm . oh phir khoon nikle raha ha ( it is bleeding again) she grab his hand he try to remove it but her grab was tight this time" aagar aab ko meri parwa ha tou phir mujhe ko kyun rokta ha aap " (if you care for me why you stop me to take care of you) a tear drop at his palm . he closed his eyes. she wipe it with tissue paper." mein aik sharat per jao gai Dr ka paas aagar aap bhi bandage karwa ga"
Maan :nod ok he started car she still holding his hand

At hospital
Maan at reception
nurse : patient name.
Maan: looked at Geet who was standing at next to wall twisting her duppata. "Mrs Maan" he held his head..to himself "i have to help her out even i hate her"
Dr peon called "Mrs Maan"
Geet: looked at Maan . he didnot looked at her .he moved in room
part3
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DR: hi mr & mrs Maan .. may i help you?
Maan: yes she is having temperature looked at geet who was still standing Maan pull her hand to sit.
Dr: any other prob.
Maan: she is .. paused
Geet: no i am fine .. he has cut his hand see this she pull his hand & showed it to DR ... see how deep it is . it is bleeding since yesterday
DR: smiled as he was looking at Maan face who was feeling bit shy at her crazy act ( they were at gyne department) ."will you come with me Mrs Maan"
Maan: pagal ha yeh larki bilkul ...
Dr: back .. bit worried
Maan:"is she ok ?"
DR: bit angry ."mr you are not taking care of her. her bp is high plus she is very weak.she has to go for some more test"
Maan: was ready for that as he knew she is not at all taking care of herself. busy with office etc." you guide me i will take care of her"
Dr: is this your first child? looked at Maan.
Maan: yes i that is my first child
Geet enter shock what he said
part4
*****
DR: you guys look so much caring for each other. watching Maan pulling chair for her. "why you guys being so careless "
Maan: what Dr
DR: you are a very careless husband Mr Maan .
Geet: woh yeh tou
Maan: mein business trip pa tha aur iss na apni yeh haalat bana lee ha... he stared at Geet who had tears in her eyes.
Dr: ok Mr Maan as you are back now i think you will take care of her properly . this is her medicine prescription & her diet chart you should make sure she eat properly,rest & stay happy.
Maan: ok i will Dr
Geet feeling embarrassed . Dr woh...
Dr: got what bothering her ."i will ask nurse to give injection to your husband she will bandage it"
Geet: felt more shy.
Maan looked at her blush face Mahi... .. nurse gave him injection Geet closed her eyes as if she was having pain... a smile came at his Maan lips.

part 5
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Geet walked with him to the car
Geet: why you said you are my husband?
Maan : why you said you are my fiance ?
Geet: so you are helping me
Maan : looked at her as he did not had answer to her question.
Geet: i can take care of my self i dont need any kind of sympathy.
Maan : who was about to start car turn towards her " tum apna aap ko kya samjhti ho Geey jab mein tum se duur jao to tum mujhe ko rokti ho .aur jab karab aao tou. ... he stared in her eyes there was only pain and concern nothing else
Geet: aap meri baat suna phir jo dil mein aaya kara
Maan: mein na soch leya ha ka mein tumhari ... looked at her
Geet: kya aap?
Maan: kuch nahi ..he received a call from dadi..."jee dadi . sub theek ha dr asked to take rest we are coming home"he closed the call and started car .
Geet: "abhi meri baat khatam nahi hoai ha
Maan: "per meri hogai ha "
Geet: "stop the car i will not go with you "
Maan: did not listen her as he knew she is not well and there is some thing drastically wrong with her past.

they reached home
Geet : i want to go to out house
Maan: drove the car to out house
nikul: sir dadima shifted madams things in your room ...they saw him locking the door.
Maan :what yeh dadi bhi naa.
Geet: looked at him he was angry she prefer to stay quiet .
MaaN: walk in to mansion
Maan: dadi dadi ..shouting
Dadi kya baat ha beta.
Maan: yeh kya ho raha ha?
dadi: beta i trust you both i think it is not right for geet to stay alone in out house .
Geet: per mein tou phir bhi akele hoon ..whisper .. maan heard her ...(recollected dr .. she is depressed that is not good fro her health)
Maan: theek ha dadi she can stay in my room. he walked in .
Geet: felt bad she walked in behind him " woh sorry mein nahi chatee aapka kaamra mein rahan per dadi"
Maan: was pretending he was reading working on his laptop. " sub kuch waisa nahi hota jaisa hum sochta ha zindagi mein"
Geet:" i promise i will go from here as soon as i am well." whisper babaji pehla mein na inn ko out house se nikala ab yahan se ..nahi nahi nahi ...ab nahi she feel weak in her legs she sit on bed .
Maan: was watching her he walk to her " you need rest go to sleep i will see you in night " he walk out of room.
Geet: looked at him going.
Maan :came back ..."kahin jana nahi "...walked out .

want more if yes do tell me i will add small parts
i am back tuning myself for *simply love* as my head is rusted.
give this topic a name plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plzzz add more parts after updatind simply love and name i suggest is 'di ki dor' i knw lil flimy i guess it will suit !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thats Fabulous Dear
Loved it
U r giving us a Big Treat...........
Thanq so much for that
"Eternal Love"--

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