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Posted: 14 years ago
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its 2 gudddd,,,,pls add soon n many of them
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: revav

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thanks for this...........loved it.....

reva


shy shy shy shy thx dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 6
Geet: yeh Maan sir bhi na pal mein kuch pal mein kuch kabhi meri samjhe mein nahi aata ha...she walk to bed saw his shirt thrown on floor pick it up " maan sir bhi na" .she was feeling drowsy she walk to bed hug the pillow and went to sleep..

dev : Bro is not back ,let me check his room . he walked in there was all dark he felt someone was sleeping on Maan bed. he turn on light. shocked to see Geet sleeping peace fully at Maan bed ..he removed his glasses and rub his eyes "aaj kal mujhe ko haar jaga Geet kyun nazar aati ha. " he pinch him self ,saw her hand hanging down she was holding Maan shirt .he was about to touch it Dadi entered
Dadi: dev aap yahan?whisper
dev: who is she ? pointed at Geet
Dadi: Aap kai Bhabi she walk to bed placed her arm carefully smiled "pagal hain yeh dono aik dosra ka leya" she pushed out DEV and closed door.
Dev:kon?.. he just thinking he was dreaming.
DADI: aap kai bhai aur Bhabi.. dekha na Maani na office se Phone kiya ka hum Geet ko check kara
her cell started ring again.
Dadi: Ha Maan ..woh theek ha so rahi ha aap ki shirt ko pakra hoai... laugh
Maan: dadi main na iss leya tou Phon nahi kiya tha... felt shy
Dadi: tou kis leya ....she laugh pagal ha aap Maan..
Maan: dadi i called to tell you i will come to have lunch please make chicken paniree for me with paratha .
Dadi: since when you have started eating Indian food Maan
Maan ; for a change dadi... he closed the call.. Dadi bhi na
at home
Dev: dadi yeh ?
Dadi: Geet was Maan sectary . she does not have anyone .Maan gave her permission to stay in Out house . they both love each other.
Dev: no one ..thinking she had a big family how no one.he walk out
dadi where are you going
Dev; i have to talk to bro.
Maan was busy in office
DEV: hi bro
Maan: you in office ...
Dev: yes i am here to talk to you about some thing personal
Maan: looked at his serious face..Have a seat.
DEV: bro i have done a sin
Maan: who was reading a file stared at him.. "what are you saying ?"
DEV: bro for money i committed a sin i played with some one Feelings
Maan: why are you telling me go and sake forgiveness.
DEV: bro i am not getting how to ?
Maan; did you asked me before doing a sin? bit angry
Dev : no
Sasha entered ... Maan?
Maan: sasha why you are here. you dont have manners to knock the door.
Sasha: woh i am here to tell you Geet didnot came to office
Maan: she is sleeping ...it was slip of tongue.. i mean she is at home.
Sasha :made a bad face.. "Sleeping my foot."about to walk out ...
Maan: sasha next time never enter my office without knocking it is not a playground or railway station........mind you
Sasha: bang into tasha.as she was trying to hear what is happening in office
Tasha: sasha what happen where is Geet
Sasha angry
Tasha:sorry Ma'am
Sasha :she is sleeping
Tasha: sleeping?
Sasha : yes Maan ...what is your prob why you are following me?
tasha : oh sorry ma'am.

Maan; yes Dev where were we i am really worried about Geet health..and this sasha
Dev: inquisitive what happen to Bhabi...
Maan; i dont know about her past but i just know there is some thing that hurt her .
DEV; what about her family
Maan: they disown her ...
Dev: murmur ..because of me
Maan: come again what you said .
DEV: bhai can i ask you one question ?
Maan: yes sure.
Dev : how imp is bhabi to you?
Maan she is my life ?
i have learn from her how to smile in pain? .
how to make other happy? .
how to be happy with what you have?
she had transform me into a loving person...
Dev notice Maan had a smile and his eyes was sparking ..
to be cont

it is a short ff "Love Hamesha"...as "Eternal Love"-- is a FF at other forum dont mind dear friends as i didn't keep the name you suggested ...it is a very short FF as you all liked it i am adding few more parts.. i have to complete *FF Simply Love". ..opps again love ...in title 😳
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Awesome part!!!
Nice name given
Continue soon!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
awesome update.loved it.
wow maan openly declares his love .............
maan told dev how geet changed him.....
maan told right thing to sasha.
sasha deserve it.
update soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
yay i like this way too much. U hav me hookd. Good luck with completin simply love, i was wonderin whre u disappeared? Lol keep on goin. Luv da title =} dnt 4gt to pm me update plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Tishuu

yay i like this way too much. U hav me hookd. Good luck with completin simply love, i was wonderin whre u disappeared? Lol keep on goin. Luv da title =} dnt 4gt to pm me update plz


thx dear it is your support that drag me to the forum to write.
dear my net was 😡 out of order that why i was not able to come online.
life & its prob that sometime make us totally helpless.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
heyit was sooo sweet naddiya plz update simply love don't test my patience
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Hey Naddiya


plssss cont soon

Luv
Naina
Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fabulous .....superrb......amazing........brilliant

plzzzzzzzzzz update soon
want to read more
reva

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