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Posted: 14 years ago
just awesome
thanks for pm
update the next part asap

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome!!!
Geet in gusse ka avatar!
Simply superb!!!

Baby's one liners are again a big hit👍🏼

Looking forward to the next update😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am mostly enjoying the Baby's comment regarding his parents.... Poor guy... his father doesn't know that he exit and Geet always taking her anger out on him.

Please just tell Maan and everything will be more for you guys.
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update pls cont soonnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update dear, totally fida😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
hayeeeeee superbbbb.loved geets angerrr!!!!!
and her throwing te mugss
aww cnt wait 4 moreee
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update!!!

cant wait for the next part!!
pls cont.soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved part 9 & 10...Geet is one crazy girl! Can't stay away from Maan...😲

-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry am late to comment i was caught up with h/w. Update was great loved it. Seems dat maan got harder work to do. Thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 16

sasha calls daadi
sasha - hi daadi
daadi - hi beta
sasha - I think aapki palpetation ka solution milgaya
daadi - wat r u saying
sasha - MK's new secrtary Geet..I think there is someting!!
daadi - I have met her...
sasha - pyari hain na!! lekin MK ka kuch karoo..he is ignoring her
daadi - let me see...do one thing send her home with some files to meet me
sasha - ok...daadi

latter in the afternoon sasha goes to meet geet
sasha - hi I am sasha...Khurana construction ki head architect
tum geet hona

baby ~ papa ki girl...friend!!!!he he😆
geet - ji Geet Handa
baby ~ hi main aapne papa ka cute baby😳 ..geet ~ tu chup kar
sasha - take these files to Khurana mansion & get Savithri devi's signature
geet - why do I have to do?
sasha - these are impt papers..if I was free I would have gone myself
geet mumers..pura samya unke saath romance kareghi to time khanha hoga

geet takes a cab & reaches Khurana mansion...she walks straight into daadi's room..hugs daadi
geet - how are u feeling now daadi? aap ne afternoon wali medicine lee?
daadi - umm!! feeling much better now..(daadi sounded little worried)
geet - wat happened why are u looking so worried
daadi - ghar main engagement hain & I don't have any help..uppar se meri health
geet - engagement??? ji !!!kis ki engagement?
daadi - humare pootahe ke
geet really got upset & disturbed...but pretended to be fine
baby~woo girl...friend nahi ...mangetar hain😲..
daadi - can u help me with the shopping & other arrangements please
geet - ji main..woo lekin woo..maan..kaise!!
daadi - maan se main baat karloonghi..
geet mumers..yeh aacha hai..unki mangni ka arrangement daadi ko muje se
hi karwana tha...babaji..aap yeh sab mera saath kya kar rahe ho???

daadi gives her some sherwani & asks her to get the matching shirts from maan's
cupbard also get the buttons it will be in the dressing table drawer...
geet goes to the outhouse & looks for the shirts..
baby tu bada lucky..aab papa ka engagement bhi dekhlena..baby not very pleased
she arranges the shervani on the bed..walks to the cupboard & looks out for the shirt
geet - yeh wali..nahi nahi yeh wali..
maan - nahi yeh waali..guides her hand to the white colour shirt...
she turns litterally into his embrace..
maan slowly lifts her chin..tum abhi bhi naraz hoo?
she shakes her head for a no & moves back...
geet - main woo ..daadi ne shirt select karne ko kaha tha..
maan - umm (moves closer pinning her against the wall)
geet gasping..ji woo buttons..& escapes away to the dressing table..
she opens the right drawer...
maan - left waali mein hein..
geet arranges the shirt & the buttons next to the shervani..
use itna shant deehk maan confuse ho gaya..kuch bol bhi nahi paya
maan watches her restlessness for a while & makes her sit on the bed at once
maan - kya baat hein..?
geet - ji kuch nahi
maan - phir tum office mein itna gussa main thi aur ...
geet - nahi woo..I am sorry about that
maan wondered wat happened to her suddenly
geet - I did'nt know then that...sasha maam aapki mangetar hain
maan smiled..
she gets up to leave...maan pulls her back & pins her on the bed...
maan - so..
geet tries to escape his grip...maan holds her hand firmly & puts his legs over to hold her down..
geet - aap yeh kya kar rahe ho..
maan - maine tumse kuch poocha
geet - kya?
maan - sasha meri mangetar hain to tumhe bura nahi.... he paused
geet looks away - nahi..woo..aap ne to kaha tha ki aap ko waise ladkhiyan hi
pasand hain
..maan moves her curls...tumhe such much farak nahi paadtha
his lips slowly fanning her face...geet turns side ways...
maan cuddles up from back...slipping his hand around her waist..
maan - tumhe such much farak nahi paadtha..

baby~padtha hain...!!!bhut padtha hain😡
geet - mujhe kyun farak paadhaghe...U will still hate me right!!!
I am sure sasha will definitly not approve of this
..& she gets up..
maan pulls her back..& kisses her neck...wat if she approves..moving down..
geet - aap kya bol rahe ho? (breathing harder..& his lips burning her skin)
maan kisses on the other side ..& moving back up to her lips...
she felt that moment..when his lips touched her lips..softly..
her hand passed through his black hair almost lossing giving into that moment..
maan pulled back & fell back on his back..looking at her
she shied & rested her head in his chest...maan wispered...waise sasha meri
mangetar nahi hain...
geet innocently looked up at him..phir mangni?
maan - meri choti bhai dev aur meera ke mangni hain
geet smiled ..& hugged him..baby~dancing..mera chachu ki mangni
uski is muskan pur to woo aapni puri duniya loota de
geets smile fadded...she got up at once & started waking him..
maan - kya huwa geet??? geet stop it stop it!!
she takes the glass from the side table & throws at him...
maan manages to doj that..maan - GEET.. shouts at her
she goes to pick up the next thing..that was a jug..
maan holds her...hands...kya kar rahi hoo
geet - agar woo aapki mangater nahi thi tho aap uske saath kya kar rahe the?
maan - kuch nahi kar raha tha...
geet - kuch nahi...phir blinds kyun band thi??
maan - GEET!! in stirn voice
geet - I don't trust u...aap kya bharosa?
maan - tumne mujhe samjh kya rakha hain??
geet - aap ke aur mera beech yeh samjh khanse aagayee???
maan - kya matlab??
geet - pata nahi aap kya karthe rahe the hoo?
maan - itna hi samjh payee ho?(lifts her chin..)
geet - kahan samjh payae hoon aap ko?
khabhi samjhne boojhne ke gunjashi hi nahi thi..
bus thi to..yeh madhoshi..khabhi woo madhosh too khabhi maan madhosh tha..
yah..too khabhi dono hi madhosh the!!!

precap
geet still angry!!!

aab beechara maan kya kare!!! thanxs for all ur comments....love u for that!!!hope this
part is upto ur expectation...please plesae to comment
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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