MARS (mjht) part 11 (pg 111) - Page 3

Originally posted by: amira_saeed

Awesome...

Originally posted by: ash_sajan

REs Sara you never disturbed me with your pms AAinda kaha na then surely you will be a dead meat

Originally posted by: mayurian-artian

OMG dear

dis ff is soooo awesum

its sooo mysterious n suspenseful

i cant w8 de mysteries 2 unfold

do cont soon

Originally posted by: marisol45

interesting story
really unique
looking forward to their journey
thanx for the pm
and do pm me whenever you update 😊
maria

Originally posted by: fariaa70

hi dear

Congrats for ur new ff
beautiful start

loved gunur entry
loved sayank also
but from ur first part i dint get any idea abt the story
yah- its seems really very interesting

keep it up
update next part soon


all the best

Originally posted by: sharma.nat

WOW wonderful-2222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222

DIfferent concept, different story I am in it aur agar mujhe pm nahi kiya to main tujhe mystery bana doungi samji

Wrote beautifully

Continue really soon

Originally posted by: kajen14

hey awzom strt !!!
luvD it !!!
and thx 4 d PM and plx kEEp PMin me cauze i luv getin disturbDD..! 😆😆

Originally posted by: chilluppp

thnx for ur precious comment dear

thnx for reading it

u dont know how much nervous i m