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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
heyyyyy awwwwwsum..
realy vryyyyy interstng
cont soooooooooon
n
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: jes_jade

Its really lovely start....
Continue it...
Thanks for the pm...
& pm me next time when u update it..😊

i will obviously pm u dear
literally i was not expecting this sentence from anyone
thnx for reading it dear
thnx a lot
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: dolly18

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ps= sara u never disturb me with pms samjhi????

oh God
phir sy reserve
i knew that u will never ever edit this comment
not this time
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: chilluppp

i know dear
even i was not expecting ur comment
thnx for tolerating it

nahii yaaaar!
Not tolerating!
I liked it alot!
bas abhi bada comment nahi de sakti!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: SajanRox11

nahii yaaaar!
Not tolerating!
I liked it alot!
bas abhi bada comment nahi de sakti!

its ok dear
samajh to aa gya na???
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

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Sara🤗finally you started an FF.i was really waiting fto read an ff from your side cause i already bet that your FF will be one of the best.Firstly the starting is really nice.And all the four are travelling in a forest.Interesting!I loved Gunur,s entry😆hmm and Mayank and gunjan are the only one who are giving the most interest in their journey.I like they awy you descrbe the area where the 4 are currerntly sitting and wow water fall!i really like water falls😳thanks for including it.Laslt brilliant update!Do pm me when you will update the nest part.
Love
Ash
Edited by ash_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
interesting story
really unique
looking forward to their journey
thanx for the pm
and do pm me whenever you update 😊
maria
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
OMG dear
dis ff is soooo awesum
its sooo mysterious n suspenseful
i cant w8 de mysteries 2 unfold
do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
hi dear

Congrats for ur new ff
beautiful start

loved gunur entry
loved sayank also
but from ur first part i dint get any idea abt the story
yah- its seems really very interesting

keep it up
update next part soon


all the best

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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
WOW wonderful-2222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222
DIfferent concept, different story I am in it aur agar mujhe pm nahi kiya to main tujhe mystery bana doungi samji
Wrote beautifully
Continue really soon

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