MARS (mjht) part 11 (pg 111)

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RICHA

@ar_sajan4evr

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

heyyyyy awwwwwsum..
realy vryyyyy interstng
cont soooooooooon
n
thnx 4 d pm

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itzMYattitude

@itzMYattitude

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: jes_jade
Its really lovely start....
Continue it...
Thanks for the pm...
& pm me next time when u update it..😊

i will obviously pm u dear

literally i was not expecting this sentence from anyone

thnx for reading it dear

thnx a lot

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itzMYattitude

@itzMYattitude

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: dolly18
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ps= sara u never disturb me with pms samjhi????

oh God

phir sy reserve

i knew that u will never ever edit this comment

not this time

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: chilluppp

i know dear

even i was not expecting ur comment

thnx for tolerating it

nahii yaaaar!

Not tolerating!

I liked it alot!

bas abhi bada comment nahi de sakti!

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itzMYattitude

@itzMYattitude

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: SajanRox11

nahii yaaaar!

Not tolerating!

I liked it alot!

bas abhi bada comment nahi de sakti!

its ok dear

samajh to aa gya na???

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XDevilsDesireX

@XDevilsDesireX

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Edited

Sara🤗finally you started an FF.i was really waiting fto read an ff from your side cause i already bet that your FF will be one of the best.Firstly the starting is really nice.And all the four are travelling in a forest.Interesting!I loved Gunur,s entry😆hmm and Mayank and gunjan are the only one who are giving the most interest in their journey.I like they awy you descrbe the area where the 4 are currerntly sitting and wow water fall!i really like water falls😳thanks for including it.Laslt brilliant update!Do pm me when you will update the nest part.

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Ash

Edited by ash_sajan - 15 years ago

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maria

@marisol45

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

interesting story
really unique
looking forward to their journey
thanx for the pm
and do pm me whenever you update 😊
maria

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Fiza

@mayurian-artian

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

OMG dear

dis ff is soooo awesum

its sooo mysterious n suspenseful

i cant w8 de mysteries 2 unfold

do cont soon

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

hi dear

Congrats for ur new ff
beautiful start

loved gunur entry
loved sayank also
but from ur first part i dint get any idea abt the story
yah- its seems really very interesting

keep it up
update next part soon

all the best