Zee's GM FF- You're Always With Me...UPTD PG 22! - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
OMGGGGG Zeeeeee / Saaaashaaaa! šŸ¤— šŸ˜†yayyyyyyy you've started your very own FF!
And i'm soo soo late! Sorry kaan pakring 😳
Just read the intro and i loved it! 😃 Looking forward to reading the parts which i will do right away!
Erm i read ur note.....my uni's opening soon too šŸ˜† but if no-one's offered yet i'm more than happy to help šŸ˜›.....i'll do the pms for now if u want...but if i'm not able to do them later i'll let u know.....
how's that sound? 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
Hehe just caught up with the 2 parts!
You're a brilliant writer Zee! šŸ‘
And hmm your FF seems a bit mysterious...or is it just me? šŸ˜†
I'm liking it..how you're enravling everything bit by bit! šŸ˜›
Aww Parooo how cute! <3 Hehe i love Adi!
I wonder where Maan is....?
Do continue soon..eager to read more! šŸ˜›

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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
Zee it was short agn
Liked the update
Geet stills loves Maan
N Im missing Maan in updates
Liked teh way Adi was enjoying wit Paro
Paro is sweet heart yaar
Loved Pinky's anger n her convo wit Adi
It was nuice update
Update soon n longer parts plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
šŸ‘beautifull FF yaaršŸ‘plz add me to ur PM list😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
Hey Zee,
That was cute part..short but so much apna-pan btwn friends!
I hope Maan is invited to wedding...
-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76

Hey girlies!!!😃😃

I just like to say thank you to everyone who wished to help me out in pming my list!šŸ¤— However I would like one more person to help me out because to be honest I don't think i will be able to pm anyone😭...so if any of you who has free time on sundays, pm me! I'll be ever so grateful!😳😃
Also I would like to tell you that come next weekend, those who recieved pm's off Saz aka Chotii, will be replaced by Ree aka Sireesha. This is due to saz's uni workload and stuff...so i guess that's it!😃 Onto to chappie 3!!!šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
CHAPTER 3

Geet and Pinky looked at the closed door in front of them, before looking at each other and Geet tutted before turning around and making sure Paro was nearby, whereas Pinky started muttering underneath her breath some certain...curses that shocked Geet! "PINKY! Paro is nearby remember?" glaring slightly at Pinky, who smiled back sheepishly, cleared her throat and said "Shall we go then?" And started walking off down the path, towards the gate, only to be dragged back by Geet's hand on her shoulder, "Pinky, I need to ask you something?" Pinky turned back with a questioning smile, which quickly disappeared after hearing Geet's question.

"Geet, listen to me, okay?" Geet, who was looking at Paro playing, looked back at Pinky, and she grabbed Geet's shoulders gently and said, "Don't worry okay? He won't be there, this is for bride's side only, remember?" smiling slightly in comfort before patting Geet's shoulder gently and then started walking down the path towards the gate, while Geet called for Paro and they both followed Pinky towards the gate, and out towards the main road to grab a taxi. Once Geet caught up, Paro was walking in between them, one hand holding Geet's and the other holding Pinky's and as they walked, they would swing Paro up and down singing a little song.

As they were sitting in the taxi, Geet was praying to Babiji to not see Maan again at the Mehndi, even if her heart was hoping to see him. She closed her eyes tightly, and held onto Paro tightly hoping her prayers would come true but her heart was winning, because it knew today would be the day she would see Maan again after 3 years away from him. Her whole being was telling her mind that it would and praying to Babaji would not help at all because he was the one in control of her destiny. She felt a tap on her shoulder and opened her eyes to face Pinky who smiled at her quite worriedly and whispered to her, "We here Geet. Come on."

Pinky looked at her once, searching for something before getting out of the taxi and paying the driver. Geet smiled faintly at Pinky and then watched quite distantly as she saw Pinky get out of the taxi, wondering why she was wearing a really nice pink and white sari while Pinky was wearing a lilac salwar kameez, with gold and silver sequins sown on into a pattern of flowing and connecting leaves going around the edges and meeting in the middle of her stomach. She had small high heels on about two inches, so she was nearer to Geet's height, she looked pretty in her own right, but against Geet she looked....dull and Geet felt guilty that she looked so beautiful.

Geet shook her head slightly, before climbing out and grabbing Paro's hand, who was about to run off to the large house and Geet got a first look at Pari's house and she had a sudden flashback to the first time she visited Maan's mansion when she went to visit Dadimaa for her next job, as Maan's secretary again which she didn't know at that time. She jumped as Pinky tapped her shoulder once more and said quite exasperatedly to her, "Where is your mind at today, Geet?" Geet smiled sadly at Pinky, not able to give an answer and looked back at the house.

It wasn't big as Maan's home, maybe three stories maximum with roughly 10 rooms altogether judging by the number of windows she could see. But it was beautiful how it was set out, like one of those old English Victorian houses in the countryside she saw once in a book when she was at school. Sighing she started walking to the entrance of the house, not knowing that today she would finally meet Maan once more and this time, he won't be leaving her side ever again!
You know what to do! Press the like button if you like it!😃
Erm...I hope it's long enough for you!!šŸ˜•šŸ˜† please don't hit me with your chappals and talwars!šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Edited by Zee89-Maneetfan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
šŸ‘awesome dear send next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

High time Zee

Give Maan's entry i really wish its in next part
Liked teh part
Geet was really playing hard that Maan dosent cum tehre but looks lik u planned sumthg else
Loved Pinky's care for her
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
hey,

lovely update.....waiting for maan...........plzzzzzzzz update soon and make it a long update plzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
no, no chapal or talwars, i'll throw my words at u for the time being!!!
ZEE TOO SHORT! urgh!!! u NEED to be punished, and we all need a treat - i say, u update with FOUR lengthy parts in one day next time! hahahaha!!! ;)

you do know why we're all complaining about the length all the time though right? its cos the parts are AWESOME and then it gets cut off at a point where u think ahhh wots gonna happen lol damn zee..!

loved the entire description of the scene. There whereabouts, geets thoughts, pari's house ;) (the thing about it looking like something geet had seen in a book when she was younger? that was a really sweet touch! loved it =D) ..little paro, pinky + geet.. all lovely! and of course.. the mention of maan.. hayyye! i'm sure my eagerness for maan to enter this ff can match geets anxiety of seeing him after 3 LONG years..! haha

now wow, 3 years..thats lonnngg! i wonder how you're gonna describe the moment she sees him / when / if they come face to face..! i wonder whats gonna happen!!! damn, i can just imagine him looking alll fiiiine and smoking hottt! lol
uff we're edging closer to getting maan in the track so cant wait for more..!!! altho i know the update aint coming so soon lol but i'll be waiting like the good wifey this time i should think ;)
aah man, AWESOME part still!!!

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Edited by Chotii - 14 years ago

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