Zee's GM FF- You're Always With Me...UPTD PG 22! - Page 9

Hey Zee...I just came thru this ff...!!! I have to say..nice storyline it has...!!! Pls add me to the pm list...!!!😃

amazing update!!

cant wait for maan's entry!!

pls cont.soon!!!

just read ur ff - 3 years that is sooo long! Looking forward to their meeting.

awesome update.............eagerly waiting for maan to enter............plz continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: Chotii

no, no chapal or talwars, i'll throw my words at u for the time being!!!
ZEE TOO SHORT! urgh!!! u NEED to be punished, and we all need a treat - i say, u update with FOUR lengthy parts in one day next time! hahahaha!!! ;)

you do know why we're all complaining about the length all the time though right? its cos the parts are AWESOME and then it gets cut off at a point where u think ahhh wots gonna happen lol damn zee..!

loved the entire description of the scene. There whereabouts, geets thoughts, pari's house ;) (the thing about it looking like something geet had seen in a book when she was younger? that was a really sweet touch! loved it =D) ..little paro, pinky + geet.. all lovely! and of course.. the mention of maan.. hayyye! i'm sure my eagerness for maan to enter this ff can match geets anxiety of seeing him after 3 LONG years..! haha

now wow, 3 years..thats lonnngg! i wonder how you're gonna describe the moment she sees him / when / if they come face to face..! i wonder whats gonna happen!!! damn, i can just imagine him looking alll fiiiine and smoking hottt! lol
uff we're edging closer to getting maan in the track so cant wait for more..!!! altho i know the update aint coming so soon lol but i'll be waiting like the good wifey this time i should think ;)
aah man, AWESOME part still!!!

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Amazing update! The relationship that Geet shares with Pinky and all is so heart-warming......really good! Geet is gonna meet Maan.......am soooo excited.....lolz.......do continue real soon.....and please make the updates longer......lolz......

zeeeeeeeeeee

ZAAAAAHRRRRAAA why was it sooo short 😡 i kept on scrolling down for more 🤣realy nicely written !!! maan entry in next one please!!! keep rockin!! luv ya x

Finally..more than a para.....😆

No precap..??

Still not long enough Luke😆...but i liked it. Waiting for Maan's entry now...u're not trying to keep him all for yourself are u...remember sharing is caring😉.