Zee's GM FF- You're Always With Me...UPTD PG 22! - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww wow love it...
plz do update soon n add me to pm list! x
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thnss for the wonderful update..

simply fab
plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow beautifully written but toooooo short yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ohh, zee u write it so nice👏
Och i am so late, all our gang r already here😎, & see, no one dared to inform me😡
Zee, add me on ur PM list😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Zee

This is awesome so far... i cant wait to read more of it.. please add me to the PM list...

PS keep up the amazing work.. And update soon!

Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it...but hoped for a longer update..
nevertheless awesome as always...
and when is maan entering...
loved pinky...such a darling..
hope to see maan in next update..
do keep writing..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting part Zee 😛
Geet and Pinky's friendship is sweet
Look forward to the next part
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wow. great story. plz add me to ur pm list
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nice one dear.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Important Note!!!
Hiya girlies!!!!😃
Right so uhm....there's a few things i have to say before I post my chapter!😳
1. Please please, before asking to put your name on my pm list...that YOU CHECK YOUR NAME IS ON THE LIST!!!😡😡 Some people have requested it and I have already done so before! It gets really annoying when i add your name and realise you're already there!🤢 so please, check! Thank you!😊😊
2. Uhm I was supposed to post this chappie for two of my friends yesterday, as it was their birthdays on friday and yesterday. Fatima aka cool82d and Humz aka sonu4eva, I was real busy...so sorry girlies for posting this late!😳😳 Hope you both had a great day though!😉😃
3. I usually update every weekend, but next weekend I will not be able to!😭 sorry girlies!!!😕😕 Hope this chappie will last you for two weeks!😃
Also check out the chapter index on Page 1 and my creations thread!!! You'll get a surprise!!!😳😳
Thanks to Mara!
Chapter 4
Geet looked around the large entrance hall of Parineeta's childhood home and her eyes widened in admiration and shock, "She calls this a house? More like a big palace!" she muttered to herself, making sure Paro was right next to her, holding her tightly. From the outside it looked smaller then Maan's home, but from the inside it was big as his! She wished Uncleji and Adi were here with them, but Uncleji was resting in hospital and Adi was resting at home. She bit her lip, turned to face Pinky only to see Parineeta standing right there, looking at her seriously.
Pari's face turned suddenly smiling at her and saying hi to Geet before looking down at the little girl, who had gone behind her mother's legs, clenching the skirt of the sari Geet wore and peeked out from behind them. "Tut, tut! Geet, why didn't you come find me in Mumbai earlier! I would have said hi to this gorgeous little angel here!" crouching up on her knees, tilting her head slightly to see Paro and smiling gently, "Hey there, gorgeous girl. My name is Parineeta, but you can call me Pari! What's yours?"
Paro peeked from behind her mother's legs and seeing a happy, smiling face in front of her she moved from her place and shyly smiled, saying in a quiet voice, "Me Paro. You are a Pari!" Smiling more broadly at Pari, before tugging on Geet's skirt to get her attention, who looked down at her, stroking a hand across Paro's hair gently, "Yes, my angel?" "Mummy, she's a Pari, isn't she?" And Geet's hand stopped, flashbacks of her time in Delhi and what Pari had done to try and get Maan and herself together. She shook her head slightly before smiling back at Paro, "Yes, beti. She's a Pari," before making some excuse in getting away from Pari, and took Paro with her.
As soon as Geet had turned away, taking Paro with her, a tall, stylishly dressed man in a simple black shirt, black trousers and jacket had come straight over to Pari and asked her, "Are you doing your fairy work once again?" and Pari looked at him innocently before shaking her head and said, "I'm sorry, I didn't think you were actually coming. I found out that she had moved here to Mumbai and then...well invited you as well!" Maan stared at Pari sternly before nodding quite dejectedly before looking in the direction Geet and Paro had left. "I wish I hadn't said those things when I found out that is were Dev who betrayed and ruined her life like that. He's my brother for goodness sake! I was just in shock that it was...Naintara would have persuaded him to do something like that anyway. Why didn't I see it???" turning back to Pari, who smiled at him sympathetically.
She said to him quietly, "This is your chance to make things right now, don't you think?" And Maan looked even sadder and said, "Things have changed in the past three years, it's too late," before walking away towards Dadimaa who greeted him warmly, holding to his arm gently and then eyeing everyone else, but most especially Geet as Dadimaa had noticed her as soon as she had entered the house. Pari looked at them and just said, "Well this may just speed things up!" before clapping to herself quietly and then started looking for Pinky.
So uhm....it's really short haina??? 😳😳
And this is going to last two weeks....at least Maan entered!!!😃
*ducks chappals and talwars thrown at her*
TWO WEEKS GIRLIES!!! *runs away*
Edited by Zee89-Maneetfan - 14 years ago

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