Zee's GM FF- You're Always With Me...UPTD PG 22! - Page 15

wow...we have triple update...what more to ask for...

Grr... 2 more weeks. Btw enjoy ur bday:-)

Thanx for back to back three updates

awesome update!!

cant wait for the next part!!

pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM

uffffffffff triple update!!!! yay!!! butttt... u'v left on the biggest cliffhanger yet, zee!!

I reeeeeeeeeallly hope maan follows her too, simply to find out what made her get all scared - and then of course, being the gorgeous hero he is, save her life - once again! ;)

I love love loved that you had Geet performing to "mujhe sajan ke ghar jaana hai" - i could picture it so perfectly.. awwwwwww and zee, it actually made me all emotional with those lyrics evoking all those past memories to come forward on Geet.. aww bless her! Really well constructed point in the chappy!!!

Although pretty silent, Maan was just a shadow of sexiness that Geet saw everywhere.. hayyye i'm sooo glad that they were both present in these parts and actually had a mini confrontation - they're defo meeting again after this, to sort things out properly, if anything! Also, just a question - does Dadi hold bad thoughts of Geet cos she's the reason that Dev's in jail - u described her as without much emotion on seeing Geet, suggesting she's unbothered by her appearance.. hmm just an observation.

Excellent Excellent EXCELLENT three parts !! I have to tell u though, the length off the 3 parts put together is the length I wish for each and every of ur Single updates to be! Still, these were absolutely AWESOME parts love love lovedddd them, only makes me want ur parts to never come to an end!

Enjoy your birthday weekend lots and lots and LOTS hun!!!
Cant wait for the next update - gonna be a killer wait but it'll be worth it, for sure!

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Oh my ..now whos this Mano saab...??? Gawd...pls no...another villian....!!!😆😆😆

hey,

lovely updates👏👏👏👏

Awwwwwww Zeeeeeeeee thnk u...........finally got to read.........so much mystery..........cnt wait 4 the nxt part

sorry 4 d late comments....was a li'l busy.... but i read it.....n d parts were gr8888888888😊 n thnx 4 d tripple update..... d storyline is seems to b really interesting.... m waiting 4 d nxt one....😛