QSS thread # 3 part 149 posted on pg149on 6/1/11 - Page 93

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hopefully

Hey Shardha..

I came across ur ff last week and im completely enjoyin it. Its title was interesting and has been proving that destiny always has its way!!👏

The basic thing which held me in this ff is its simplicity, i mean v have all others explaining out of d world situations plotted which is however far from reality..

But this ff is jus a simple portray of our own daily lives' nd of course has ur sweetness engraved.. hats off sweety!👍🏼

Carry on d gr8 work and eagerly waiting for more updates

Take care

Prarthana😉



Hi prarthana,
Welcome to QSS. It's always so nice to hear from a new reader. It boosts my morale. I don't know if every writer has this doubt but I keep wondering if people really like I write. I keep hoping I don't disappoint them with mediocre work. Thanks for the wonderful compliments and hope you'll keep commenting regularly, pointing out both good and bad things. love Shardha

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 149


A: Achcha Riddhima, is weekend par hum bua ko kahan le chalein?


When there was no reply from her he said "Ok bua aapko Kochi guma laate hain. We'll go on Saturday morning and return on Sunday evening. Ok Riddhima?" She distractedly nodded in assent.

Soon it was time for dinner and after some TV watching all of them went to bed. Seeing Riddhima sulking Armaan asked her "Kya baat hai Riddhima, are you not keeping well? Why are you so quiet from the evening?" She said "Kuch nahi, I'm ok," and lay down beside him but his words, "that was your first birthday after our marriage, so naturally I had to give you some surprise. Surely you are not expecting it every year," kept playing in her mind as she fell asleep.

She was woken up my Ani crawling over her and calling out chweetly, "mama, mama" and that was followed by a 'pa' from him. She opened her eyes, pulled him beside her, cuddling and kissing him. He gurgled with laughter. Suddenly she wondered how come he was on the bed and so asked him"Tum bed par kaise aaye?" "aap ko bappy bilay kehne" she heard Armaan mimic his voice and suddenly the lights came on, blinding her for a minute. When she blinked and finally opened her eyes, there was this trolley in front of her and pointing to it Ani was saying "Ani mum mum". It was way beyond his reach or else he would have helped himself to it.

Suddenly all of them, Armaan, Akshat, kaka, akka and Bua entered the room together, singing 'happy birthday to you.' She blew the candle, cut the cake and fed it first to the most greedy person there, the little hero, then Akshat, bua, kaka, akka and lastly her hero. Then she touched the elders' feet to take their ashirwad and they left quietly. Armaan picked Ani and asked him to give mama a 'pa' which he willingly obliged and then in a baby voice said "Happy bilday mama". "Thank oo" she also replied in a baby voice. Armaan tried to snatch a kiss in the midst but she gently pushed him away. So he started rocking the little one in his arms, to get him to sleep.

Next Akshat kissed her and gave her a pretty pink rose box and a box in the shape of a butterfly and a card. The card had four palms imprinted on it with water colours. Two very tiny and two a little bigger. When she opened it she read the following words,

My mother's the greatest that I've ever known,

I think God made my mother like He'd make his own.

Mama, we may be small but our love for you is very big.

Hold our hand and lead us on ,

Keep us in your embrace always.

Lots n lots of love,

Akshat and Aniruddh.

R: yeh words tumhe kahan se miley?

Ak: mini maasi ne computer se print out nakaal kar diya tha. Par yeh card mein apna haath chapane ka idea mera tha. Baap re yeh Ani ka chaap lena kitna difficult tha. Who poora paper hi kharab kar deta. Athai bhi pareshaan ho gayi. Dus baar kiya tab yeh mila.

She kissed both the pairs of hands and said "cho chweet. Wonderful idea."



R: My God this rose box is so pretty. Iske andar kya hai?

AK: yeh khulta nahi hai mama. It's a type of bouquet.

R: Kya?

Ak: Haan mama, iske andar sirf sponge hai jo main florist uncle se le aaya. Aur yeh roses us sponge par pierce kiya hai.

R:Yeh tumne banaya hai?

Ak: Haan mama, bahut easy hai. 1 hour mein ban gaya.

Eyes brimming with tears, she hugged and kissed him saying "Thank you sooooooo much shona."

Armaan was smiling seeing the mother 'son love. Their bond was naturally stronger because they had spent more time together than he had with them.



Then she opened the butterfly box, inside it was another cute trinket box which she knew was definitely made by him. The butterfly shape card was only the wrapping.


And inside the trinket box were these two cute pair of earrings.






R: Wow, this is so pretty, kahan se kharida? Bahut mehenga hoga na? Tumhe paise kahan se miley?

Ak: Yeh to maine apne pocket mney se Mumbai mein kharida tha, jab aap us din mall mein dresses try kar rahi thi. Matlab tab dad se paise liye the, phir yahan aakar unhe lauta diya. Aap chahe to poochlo dad se.

R: Mujhe tumpar bharosa hai. Dad se poochne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Lekin itne paise tumne jama kaise kiye?

Ak: Mere paas the na. Mere birthday par, dadu aur athai ne jo rupaiye diye the, woh main bachake apne money box mein rakhe the. Aur Dadu jab purana paper raddhi wale ke paas dete hain, usmein jo paisa aata hai, woh mujhe dete hain. Unhone kaha tha ki woh mera pocket money hai. To main usey bhi apne money box mein rakhta hoon. Unhi paison se kharide. Aap ko pasand aaya.

"Bahut bahut bahut pasand aaya," she replied placing it against her ears and looking in the mirror. By then the little one had slept. Laying him in his cot Armaan and taking Akshat by his arms said, "chalo beta, tum bhi sojao, kal school bhi jaana hai na."

Akshat went along with him mumbling in an envious tone, "Haan, aapke to mazey hain every Saturday chutti rehati hai." When Armaan returned after tucking Akshat in bed, he saw Riddhima already in bed. asked him "Aap ka gift kahan hai?"

A: I've given you two wonderful sons what else do you want?

R: Achcha yeh baat hai? What about a daughter now?

"Sure, why not? Whenever you are ready for her, we can get her," he said pulling her near and kissing her. "Happy Birthday sweetheart" he added.

Riddhima was surprised as she was expecting a negative answer. Seeing her puzzled face he continued "Whenever you are ready, we'll go to Chandigarh and adopt one of the Nahi Paris." She shook her head and said "What if I want our own one?" "No way Riddhima, let's not get into that now, please." Before she could say anything further, to divert her from that topic, he got up. "Naraaz ho gaye?" she asked pulling his hand. He gave her his dashing dimpled smile and said "Nahi, sweetheart, just a minute." Then picking up his briefcase, extracted an envelope from it and handed it to her saying "This is my birthday gift to you, hope you like it."

The cover had MSHC stamp on it and was addressed to her. She pulled out a letter from it and read. It was a letter accepting her as an intern in MSHC, and promising her of a job on her successful completion of the internship and the post graduation. She couldn't believe it till she had read it at least 3 ' 4 times. Then she hugged him tight and showering him with kisses n both his cheeks alternately said "thank you, thank you, thank you so much. This is the best gift you could have given me." Then laying he head on his chest said "Now I can be with you all thrugh the day also. When do I begin?"

He pulled her up and holding her face in his palms asked "how about next week?" She nodded as his mouth descended to claim hers. He kissed her so sensuously and passionately, moving from her lips to her neck, her chest and then they were lost. He knew how to take her to the peak of ecstasy which left her moaning for more. A hoarse "Armaan" was the only sound which left her lips. It was dawn by the time the two lovers fell asleep.

He woke her up with a kiss, just a few hours later once again wishing her a very happy birthday. When she just snuggled closer to him, he whispered in her ears, "kapde pehen lo, Ani uth jayega." That made her eyes open wide and she hastily pulled on her clothes just in time the hero was also awake. When Armaan picked him and handed him to her she complained "I had managed to wean him, now I'll have to do so all over again."

A: It's ok you can wean him when he's feeling better. Now he seems to want only your feed all the time.

R: His mouth is quite ok now. He can take solids. Once he starts taking my feed he doesn't want to take any other food. Akka says as the child grows, breast milk becomes thicker and tastier, so they do not like to give it up. That's why I weaned him in the first place, so that he'll take more solids. After the infection he's avoiding solids. He won't gain weight if he does that and he'll also end up with all sort of mineral deficiency.

A; And you'll be away for the whole day when you join MSHC.

"Chalo, I'll go and get Akshat ready for school and drop him," he said, as left to Akshat's room. After she fed him, she went and handed him over to akka and went to have her bath. When she came out she saw a pretty blue suit laid out for her on the bed. She picked it up with a smile, knowing who had left it there and a pair of familiar arms hugged her waist from behind. Putting his chin on her shoulder and nibbling her earlobes, he asked "pasand aaya?" Turning to the side and kissing his cheek she asked "Aap laaye aur humey pasand nahi aaye, aisey ho sakta hai? It's very pretty. Chalo, hato, let me wear it, Akshat aata hoga. Aur tum bhi jaldi se naha lo. We'll drop Akshat at school and go to the temple."

She went into Akshat's room and saw him all set for school.

AK: Mama aapko yeh dress bahut suit karta hai.

R: thankyou. Aur dekha maine kaunse earrings pehne hai?

Ak: Haan, aur yeh aap ke dress ke saath exactly match bhi ho rahe hain.

R: yes shona, tumne apne dad ko earrings pehle hi dikhaye honge na, isliye unhone uske matching dress liya hoga.

"Galat, earrings saath le jaakar match karwake kharida hai." They heard Armaan's voice from the doorway. All three of them got into a hug and then went to have breakfast.

Kaka had prepared badam halwa, and akka had prepared masala dosa and sambhar. All her favourite dishes, for breakfast. Akshat was sulking because he was the only one who had to go. But when he came to know that his parents were dropping him, he was very happy.

The temple was quiet and serene though there were quite a number of devotees, it being a Saturday. Armaan spoke to the Pandit and asked him to offer a special pooja for Riddhima as it was a birthday. As usual after the pooja, the priest offered kumkum to be put on her maang and a string of flowers and gave them an apple as Prasad. As they finished making parikrama of the temple, they met an old couple who lived in their colony. They gave them a nod and a recognizing smile and went away.

R: yeh kitne cute couple hai na? They go everywhere together only.

A: Yes, everyday they go for a walk early in the morning. When I go for my jog, I see them returning from the walk, holding each other's hand.

They automatically proceeded towards the water tank in the temple, where everyone threw puffed rice for the fish. They went and sat side by side on the steps of the tank.

R: It's so peaceful out here na?

A: hmmm. Aaj bhagwan se kya maanga tumne?

"Maangna kya tha? You get me everything even before I feel its need. I only prayed He should keep you always by my side," she said slipping her arm through his and resting her head on his shoulder.

"Like that uncle and aunty?" he asked teasingly. She slapped him on his arm, and grumpily said "tumhe to har baat mein mazak soojta hai." Putting his arms around her he said "Sholly sweetheart, no mazak. Main bhi yahi chahta hoon. You and me not just in this birth but in all our rebirths also.

Edited by ssh57 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
dhan tana
tana nana, tana nana

Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!
lo meri hat trick poori ho gayi, i am the first to comment in a row thrice, yippee!
baaki comment part padhke😃

*edited*

hayyee di, part padhke mazaa aa gaya
it was just soo really amazing
Riddhima's birthday ki shuruwaat is too too too good,
loved each n everything to the core,
awesome,
n see, congrats in advance,
nayi thread ka bhi time aa agay, wow,
QSS 4,
sunke hie kitna grand lagta hai,

thank u so much for everything

love
pooja

ps - di, aaj sabse pehle padha bhi maine, like bhi maine press kiya, n comment bhi maine hie kiya, hurray!
Edited by kweetrockstar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

dhan tana
tana nana, tana nana

Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!
lo meri hat trick poori ho gayi, i am the first to comment in a row thrice, yippee!
baaki comment part padhke😃

*edited*

hayyee di, part padhke mazaa aa gaya
it was just soo really amazing
Riddhima's birthday ki shuruwaat is too too too good,
loved each n everything to the core,
awesome,
n see, congrats in advance,
nayi thread ka bhi time aa agay, wow,
QSS 4,
sunke hie kitna grand lagta hai,

thank u so much for everything

love
pooja

ps - di, aaj sabse pehle padha bhi maine, like bhi maine press kiya, n comment bhi maine hie kiya, hurray!



Heartiest Congratulations on the hatrick!! 👏👏👏

You've also kept up your promise of commenting on each part till you are at home. Even I can't believe I'll be writing the fourh thread. When I had started reading ffs, when I used to be in awe when I used to see the thread numbers of those writers. I'mm really happy to be there today. Once again I say, all credit goes to all the wonderful readers like you.

P.S. Maine bhi tumhare comment ka reply first kiya.


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Edited by ssh57 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hayee!
Kitna cute part tha!
Itni achi family bonding, ridhima ka bday , gifts and the everprevailing love!
Sab perfect!!
Cont soon..
thanx 4 d pm!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Shardha.... very nice update... i love AR like so much thy have the best understanding n the love & respect they have for one another is just something i really look upto.... Akshta's bday gifts wer so cute... n Ani aww he's a darling n he so so loves cake ehehhe.... such a adorable kid... waiting for the next update n thnx for the Pm :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey! i am really sorry for not commenting for the last few parts.. have been keeping busy! but i enjoyed every bit of all your updates.. i felt bad for poor Ani baby when he fell sick.. but i loved the caring father that Armaan is.. i really wonder if men like this exist in the real world?!
and yay! this time its Riddhima's birthday! cool surprise for her.. its the oldest trick in the book.. put the person off track and then give them a surprise.. but it always works.. i am sure Riddhima will agree..

one more thing that i noticed was how Akshat 'makes' his presents on his own rather that just buying them.. it shows that he is ready to go out of his way, work hard and do something to bring a smile on the faces of the people he loves.. and that counts more than the utility or price of that gift.. that was a basic value that we learnt in school when we were asked to make cards and gifts for diwali or parents day or teacher's day instead of buying them.. a pleasant reminder that! 😊
Thanks for all the PMs..
i always look forward to reading your updates.. or i at least bookmark them and keep if i dont find time..but i surely do read them! waiting for the next one already! 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Shradha.
Really beautiful part. So the b'day bonanza started 😉 ha ha loved it where you wrote the first piece of cake gone to little hero. Loved Akshu's gift. He is too good yaar. I personally love all hand made gifts. The message to Ridhima was very nice and the earrings. God he started saving also. He's a gem .. Where you found him???

Hurrrrey Ridhima will do the internship under Arman... Hope it will bring back all old memories....
Continue soon.... Thnx a lot for PM ..
Heartiest congratulation for the new thread....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awwww .... cho chweet. Akshat is gem of a person. Bhagwanji aise bache sabko de :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was such a sweet part di...
loved it alot........
soooo cute....akshu's gift was amazing...
n so was armaan's....
awww...mela sweetu baby ani.....soooo cute....awaking her to wish her...
n greedy....waiitng for the cake to be cut n he can eat...
thnx for the pm..........

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