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nice part dear
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i loved both parts
oh maan met with accident
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Maan woke up in a strange place

He remembered he is driving so fast

And suddenly. Past haunted him.,

And his car hit a tree

He looked sourroundings a new place

But whole thing is so pure

There is a idol picture

He came out

To see a little girl playing with a doll………….

The doll is so cute

He came and sit beside her,

She looked a tthim and smiled…….

She lookeda the maan,.,bahut dard ho rahe hay kya

He nodded no……………

Didi bolth I hay agar tume koi problem toh babajike pass joo

Aur tumara har probl lka solution uske pass hota hay…………………

Maan shocked who is ur didi……..

Who hamere didi hay,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Kyon.

She suddenly became protective for her didi

Just theb.

Are priya………………………………..didi aye haty

Kya didi aye hay lekin who toh Sunday ko ati hay na…………..

Lekin aaj.

She ran away,

He walked down…….

Suddenly he found group of kids sourrounding a girl and the girl is twirling around and playing

She is blindfolded

And she came forward and touched him

He shocked to find pari.

Pari also touched the person.and open a blindfold and said sir aap……………………….

Tum yeha.

Yeh to ashram hay……………………………..

A nd sir apke chot kaise hay.aur idar udar kyon ghoom rahe hay

Yeh apka km yaa kc nahii hay

Yeha pe ……………………………………….rules chaltaa hay

Bani maa.

Just then a 40 old woman enter

Bani maa………..yeh maan singh khurana hay'

Hamara boss………………………

Inko naa…hukumat chala na ataa hay.

Pat ahbay……………24 hours hya la pata hya…………….aur sabke nahii………….kam se kam..uinke dadimaa…….joo inee bahut pyarr karthe hyat.unka khayal nayee ayange

Bechare adi sir raat bar soya nahbii.

Adi raat ko hum nikalee inee dondh ne ke liye…..

Aur haa………..inhe se keheiyaa gaaa…………ki inko sar pe chot lagee.hayt……..aur inee jyada ghoom phir ne jarorat nahii…………………………….

Hosaktha hay yeh place inke liye uncomfortable hay.leki n doctor inko araam karne keliye kaha hya

She is not looking I nto his eyes

This made him so furious

But a thing changed

He is listening to her like a obedient childnot like before

He liked her bossing on him.

He gave a little smile

The lady looked a thim…….

As pari is speaking not looking at him and the person is laughing………………………………………

He is just looking a ther…………………………………….

She turned and gone to meet guruji…………………At the evening

He blindly followed pari.

A t the evening

He stopped a the window

On listening to the pari words…………….

Pari entered……………………………………..

Then maan realized that guruji cannot see.

But as soon as pari enter he reconised

Kaise hoo bachii.

Jee guruji………………..mein teek hoo…………………

Tere chehre pe parishaani dik rahi hay beta…………..

Sab teek hay na

Nahii guruji……..woh insaan nahii mil raha hay.

Jisko dondne ke liye meindelhi aayee thi.

Mere maanzil doondala jara hay ………………………

Kuch teek nahii chal raha hay

Yesa lagrahe hay….ke ek tofaan ayaga aur sagb kuch lekar chalegaa…………..

Mein kisko aur khoo nahii sakthe hay………………………………….

Suddenly she realized she blurted out the truth

Where maan shocked.

Then pari realized

Why I became so restless when I came to know that he is missing

I start finding for him.

My heart went to peece when I saw him……..with the priya…

What is wrong with me.

How Can I think ahea d of him.

My life is complicated and ..this is not part of my life

Pari;;;;;;;;;;;;;

What 's wrong with u……………………….

Why ………..what is happening with me……………………………..

She didn't realize that the person whom make her restless .is standing a the window and smiling.

He felt peace..

He felt light

Pari feeling for me.

Thank u bab aji……………………..

Muje kitne kushi horaha hay……

Yeh chot muje dard nahii balkii khusi d e rahi hay

And he enter into the guruji's room

He took blessings

Beta…..zindagi hamesha hame kuch nahii baat sikathi hay

Isss baatr zindagi tume apne jeevan mein agee badne ke……………………………………..salaha deti hay

Ek baar apnea gee ke socho.phir dekhna manzil khudh tume milegee

He close dhis eyes

To find pari 's ………………….beautiful smiling face

He smiled

And said

Shukriya guruji…mere manzil muje dikaii dee………………………………..

He came out.

Tere manzil muje pata hay beta

Par…………..thoda parishaani utanii padegii………………………….

Kuch sach……………………….kuch.pariskha.uske baat hii.tere manzil tume milege………

Tum dono ek doosre ke liye bane hoo………

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Lovely Update
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loved the update...
waiting to know abt pari
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At the evening

Maan and pari leave the ashram

He then observed that the whole ashram is very much familiar to her

She talks to everyone

Pata hay sir

Yeha ke bachee kaun hya

Priya

1 saal ke thi jab bani maa use laya tha

Mumbai ke bombblast ne………priya ke mummy aur dadi ko cheena hay

Maan shocked to find the truth

Chintoo,sandeep,andothers also lost their parents in a various accidents………………………………………………

Inke dukh sab se jyada hay

Lekin phir bhi……yeh mushkurahat mein jeete hay

She is saying

He is listening

Yes.his problems is nothing in compared tothee children

And ……

He is mere a girl..

She is his past.

Due to this nor he is living his life like a normal human being………

On the other hand pari..

She gives happiness to others inspite of herown problems

Is the girl is real.

Or a girl directly from heavean……………

She thinks for all………not a meer for him,,,,,,,,

What ever she said is right he should think of dadimaa……………………..and her happiness

I will live life like a normal person…………………………………….

He then.looked a t pari.

They reached the km.

He enter

Sasha…hello mk good to see.

How are u.

And where this stupid girl is

She is so irresponsible.

He looked for pari

But she is already in her cabin………………….

He looked at sasha

Can u please stop ……………………and mind ur work

I and pari gone to visit some properties a the out skirts.of delhi

Now I need to tell u each and every thing of my business………..talks miss sahsa

Now getback to ur work

And bring me the blue prints of mr singal project

M ove now.

Pari looked at ojut

Thank god our ddj md is back………………………

Pinky came in munching chips

Acchaa pari kaise hay tumari trip

Toh tohasie baat kar rahe the ke hum kisi kaam pe nahii

Balke date par gayee

Hearing this

Pinky laughed like a manic

Date toh aur msk……………………………………..

But pari.didn't smile

Date with him.,,,,,,,,,,,……

She is busy in thoughts

Didn't notice that ………………………….

On the other ha nd

Adi hell shocked to hear lie in the mouth of msk………….

He smiled

How he handled the situation

Lagtha hay.pari ka asar hay..

He smiled

he enter km

and hugged her dadimaa

sorry dadimaa…………………..i need to go out for some important work

don't worry maan beta

adi ne phone kiyabetaa

tum aur pari……………………………kisis………………..kaam ke wajah se shehar se bahar gayee the urgent probk

he smiled seeing pari……..s plan

how she manage s all these……………..

at the eveining……………………………………….

Maan is busy in thefile

Then pari forgot some important information and she need to tell maan

So she called km…………………………………………

Dev lifted the phone

Hello…………………….

Hello can I speak to maan singh khurana……………………..

Jee nahii mein unka bhai baat kar raha hoo

Sorry sir……………

This is pari…..unke secretary baat kar rahe

Sir ko ek important kaam…………..hay maansir se baat karne hay………………………

Just then maan took the phone……..

He said hello

Pari why are u calling on landline why are u not calling to my mob

Sir I tried

He looked a tmobile to find 10 missed calls

He is so busy in his file …….no thoughts.

Sir…..

Kaha koh gayee aap

Tere khaloyoo mein………………………………he smiled

Not observing that dev is seeing him smile…

Sir………………

Maan sir

Pari replied

Yes………………..

There is a problemat the construction site near Mumbai

I thought ofinform

Ok pari book tickets………………………….we

Are going

We.

Yes

Call adi and inform that he along with sasha looking………………….noida project

Where me and u are going to mumbai

Ok sir……

Pari.and I In Mumbai

\he smiled…………………………….

Bhai smiling…………………………………….

Pari.interesting………………………………..

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Pari….closed her eyes

She looked at arhaan…………………………….

The boy of her sister

The person of her life………………………………

Mumbai.the place where I donot want to……………

But even I got Informatio n there

I lost ur mom at the place.

The whole incident took over there……………………….

Even u also lot ur mom.arhaan………………………………………..

But I never leave that person.

Just then.

Her phon e ring

Rishi.are u crazy ur going to Mumbai u know na people ar e looking for u…………last time the person is one of the local gunda of………………………Mumbai

They are dangerous

I can't de nyh the fact rishi im working,

And it is emergency

But I promise I will take care of myself..and be careful……….i came to know rd and others r In delhi,,,,,,,,,,,,somehow they missed me\and if rthey got u.and u know rd she will make u……………………to tell the truth

Why wer need to hide the truth

The people we are dealing are clever ……..

And I don't want others to Involve and making arhaan life in danger I can't dothat

Be careful.rishi………………………………………..

Let us talk after wards….

I want to wink next morning is a flight

At the night maan can not sleep……………..as he not stop thinking about pari…………………….

He smiled…how this girl filled his life…

She is the beautiful word……………………….of his gloomy world

He went back to the room………………………..

And open the door……………………….

A young boy photo…………………

Smart and handsome.

Yes he is maan singh khurana………………………..

The most adorable……………………….boy off the college

Girls used to die for him,

His sweet smile…………………………………………………….

His gesture…………………….

Everything.

Then one day .she enter…………….

She is the famous model..niharkaa kapoors daughter

Avantika kapoor………………………….

Hot ………………sizzling …………………beauty crown of college

Fall for him on first sight

He also fall forher.

She is his dream……….

He invited her to dinner………….he also introduce to his…………………..brother …and also to his best friend

Rahul…………………….mehra…………………………..

After some days.

Dadimaa decidedto meet niharika…………………….to talk about maan and avantika 's wedding………

The news reached him,

He is on top of world……….he drived to her place to receive a biggest shockin his life

She is in some another ones arm………………………….

The other shock hitted him.where the other person is………………….his best friend Rahul mehra……….

Hai baby why are uafter maan……………………….

Oh poor chap…………didn't know that it is ur mummy sake ur after him…………

Uyes mama wanted me to marry maan.som that my lifeis settled…………………….

Even though I 'll enjoy with u

Who will marry thata person which thinks moral values and all rubbish.

Aand who will love……………….

U know he is one of the idoit in this world.and how ccan he manage………………………….khurana empire

Butanyhow……………………dear just few days I will convince him for marriage and after 2 yrs……….we will fly with his money……………………..

She smiled evily

The beautiful and innocent face has that cruel intensions………………………………

Her smile……

But he saw.avantikaa.

Ur the girl which make me to hate all the lady speicies in this world……………………………

But u forgot that thery are some people in this world.whoi will feel moral values and respect

And sanjoy had met me with the most important person and beautiful person not only feature abut also heart………………………..

And she is the person whoi also rule my heart.and also my world.

Now u no longer exist in myh world………..

Goodbye and also goodbye.tour hatredness……………………..

With that he took all the belongings.

And throw them,………………………………….

And burned.

There is another person seeing this smiled wiidelly.

Yeh god jis ne bhi yeh kiya hay na..usee duniyaa ke khusi de de

Aur agar hosake toh…mere maan ko bhi de de………………………………………

Aur mere maan.kom pari dede…………………………………………..

She prayed.to god……………………………………………

Just then.rain drops fall on him.

He open the eyes.

Dadimaa want tos top them,but shocked to see drenching in rain………………………………..and smiling happily.he twirled lilke pari.used to do……………….

He is just dancing………………………………………………

Dadimaa lost in him.

And she went back to the room.filling with smile.

Next da y morning. A fresh look on maan s face.

And he greeted nt and dev.

Dev looked at shock………………………………….

Just then…………………………….

He gave a kiss t o dadimaa………………….

She smiled.

Nakul breakfast lagaa do……………………………….

Just then his phone ring………………………………

He gave a different smile made nakul almost drop the plate………

Haa pari bolo…………………………………..

He said in a sweet voice..

Dadimaa chukled.where dev and nt aree in shock…………………………….

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