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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
is baar mein late hogayie... 😭😭
i'll think this as AR.. coz mujhe arsh pasand nahi hai

Mujhe pata hia.. Armaan is only for riddhima... 😎

happy that all are engaged... this is the short Ff.. toh mujhe roz anaa padega.. IF mein.. sirf for reading ur FF.. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: KaSh_Deewaanie

Res!!!

Sorry Speedy I am out of country!!

Bohut mushkil se Wi- Fi mila hai wiol edit soon!!



Hhiiyyaa again!! Heyya Jini!
Ashu di I love this new concept!! Thank you 😳
Cross - Connection is a different and interesting idea!!! It is based on my friend's experience 😆

WOOHOOO for ur third!!! Thank you

Where's the party to night?? 😆 Somewhere down the road 😆

I wonder how the story will shape up!!
Do cont soon!! I will 😃

N thnnxx for da PM's Mention not

Ur's Jini !!! Love you!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

OMG !! Sabki Ashu and meri Ash 🤗😳 My new name? Thank you 😳started a new fic.. 😲... You are shocked? well I expected everyone to be shocked as I myself was 😆

Pause..

*am i dreaming? "
*pinching myself*.. 😆 .. Ouchhh !! that did hurt hard...😭😆 Aww you didn't have to do that......U could have called me 😆


Play ...


Wohooooooooooooooo ... .yayyyyyyyyyyyy!! Hurrayyyyyyyyy!! 🥳

lalalalalala.... *dancing* *joining u in the dance*

CONGOOOOOOOOOOOO SHONGOOOO yaar ... m sure u r gonna rock this one too ... 😉😃 Thank you thank you

And you knw i was so happy thinking u gave us 3 parts all together.. but ufff ! ! jab padhe toh they were so small ...lyk an intro.. 😡😭
😆sorry yaar par time nahi hai

Mujhe LONGGGGGGGG update chahiye tha.. . Abhi la kar do..pleasssssshhhh ..*sob sob* Mummyyyyyyyy...😭😭 Abhi mil jayega 😆 aunty ko bulane ki zarurat nahi hai Sabki Ashu update de rahi hai 😆

Mera itne se pet nae bhara...Waise bhi kabhi bharta nahi hai 😆 tu mujhe ..*sniff sniff* bhuka rakhegi.. *sob sob*... Lolz bhuka rakhna padta hai...coz waise bhi veggie vampire ka pet mere updates se nahi bharta so bhuka rehana hi sahi 😆

U knw(tujhe kaise pata hoga? 😕😆😆), the concept is amazing yaar.. loved it.. Thank you And wow ! only Ridz is single amongst her group... .😳 Do, i feel something or like some positive sign coming ahead from ridz? 😉 oohhhh detective instincts are back?😉 You'll have to read to find out

Wonder wats gonna happen next ..

Cnt soon.. thanks for d pm.. Mention not

Love u loads n missd u soooooooo much Aww me too love you n missed you a lot
Ur Vinchi 😆 Sabki Ashu n urs Ash 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Prinnia

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Hey My tuti fruti🤗 My Purple Princess! 🤗

That's a great part😃 Thank you
I kinda guess that the boy would be Armaan😳😆 Haha koi aur ho bhi nahi sakta 😉😆 Main kisi ko aane nahi dungi 😆
But ye simran ka kya chakkar hai yaar???😕 You'll come to know 😉
aur why ridz feeling like "kuch garbar hai??"😕😆 You caught that? Wo bhi pata chal jayega
i am curious😳 Another detective?
Jaldi next part update kar😛 Abhi thodi der mein mil jayega Inshallah
i am waiting😍
keep continue
Thanks for the Pm😳 Mention not

love you Love you too
PP
😛 Tuti fruti

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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: nidha1983

Hi Dear Hi di!How R UM good n u?its really a mind blowing one cool one Thank you so Armaan calls her & send sms😉Chaalu na?but why she is worried Bechari ke saath pehli baar koi flirt kar raha hai 😆& i wish he is referring Simran as Ridhima Pata nahi shayad nahi 😉 plz continue it soon & thanks for the pmMention not

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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ishuKSGKAJEN

is baar mein late hogayie... 😭😭 Aww koi baat nahi
i'll think this as AR.. coz mujhe arsh pasand nahi hai Hehe ok

Mujhe pata hia.. Armaan is only for riddhima... 😎 Of course!

happy that all are engaged... this is the short Ff.. toh mujhe roz anaa padega.. IF mein.. sirf for reading ur FF.. 😊 Aww thank you soo much

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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

Bilkul! Kaise pata chala? Antaryami ho kya?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum


Bilkul! Kaise pata chala? Antaryami ho kya?

of course! when it comes to ff's, tumne update kiya, aur main pahunch gayi!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 4

"Uff!!!! Hadd hai yaar! Kitne messages bhejega ye?" Riddhima was irritated.

"Well, decision tumhara tha. Ab bhugto." Rahul calmly replied.

"Ab kya bheja hai hero ne?"

Luv is what wen a boy enters a class late. While giving explntions 2 da teachr his eyes serch 4 her lookng if she is present or not.

"Awww! Kitna sweet message hai!" Nikita said.

"Hmph! iske alawa bhi usne kai saare messages bheje hain. Aisa lagta hai ab mera inbox love messages se bharne waala hai."

"Improvement haina Riddhima! Pehle sirf companies ki taraf se aate the,"To download this wallpaper......check your love-o-meter......how will your marriage be......we have received your payment......se to achcha hi haina?" Abhimanyu teased her.

Riddhima grumbled.

"Lekin Riddhima agar tumhe itni problem hai uske messages se to delete kar do na!" Atul suggested.

"Yeah. Right! Delete kar do un messages ko." Rahul agreed.

"Oye! par un messages ko delete karne se pehle mujhe forward kar." Muskaan said.

"Tu kya karegi unka? Achaar dalegi?" Rahul who had kept his legs on the the chair adjoining his, immediately put them down and asked.

"Achaar tu dalega khote! Aur tu mujhse baat mat kar! Kal mera phone nahi uthaya tha tune."

"Guys!!! Bas bas kitna jhagdoge? Enough!" Nikita tried to make peace.

In the middle of all this nobody noticed Riddhima checking her messages and sighing quitely.
**********

At home

Riddhima kept looking at her mobile and sighed.

"Simran kitni lucky hai. Use Armaan jaisa lover mila. Jo apne busy schedule mein bhi use call karke use sab kuch batata hai. Kash mere bhi aisa koi ladka ho. Koi mujhe special feel karwaye. Koi to ho......."

She read his messages again n drifted off to sleep.

Sweet I am but honey is you
Image I am but colours are you
Flower is me but fragrance is you
Happy I am but reason is you

Gn. dear.....

Unknown to her her wishes were soon going to be fulfilled.
**********

Part 5

The next day

"Yaar mujhe lagta hai mujhe Armaan ko phone karke bata dena chahiye ki ye Simran ka no. nahi hai. Wo bechara mujhe Simran samajhkar kitne messages kar raha hai. Ye theek nahi hai."

"Riddhima ye decision tumhara tha. Tumhe jo theek lage wo tum karo. Lekin agar tumhe use message karke ye bol bhi diya ki tum Simran nahi ho aur agar usne call karke pocha ke ite dino se kyun nahi bataya to tum kya kahogi?" Nikita questioned her.

"Main use sorry bol dungi aur kya. Ab mujhse ye nahi hoga."

"As you wish"

*Beep* *Beep*

"Riddhima looked at her mobile and was shocked!

"Kya hua Riddhima?" Rahul asked.

"Uska message padho."

A trainee in MNC dialled CEO by mistake & said,"Hey snd a hot coffee 2 accounts department in 2 mins....
CEO: Do u know wid whm u r talkin?
Trainee: No
CEO: I m d CEO of d cmpny...
Trainee: Do u know wid whm u r talkin?
CEO: No!
Trainee: Thank God! & disconnected d phone & said

Aal izz well


"Wow! Usne tumhe abhi baat karte hue suna kya?" Anjali said surprised as the message suited the occasion perfectly.

"Lagta hai Armaan stalker bhi hai!" Muskaan burst out laughing.

"Ye to antaryaami lagta hai yaar!" Atul said n hi-fived Muskaan.

"Isse kaise.........." Riddhima was interrupted mid way when an announcement boomed through the locker room.

"Sabhi interns nurse station par report karen."

"Kya hua hai yaar?" Muskaan wondered.

"Lagta hai aaj kisiki shamat aaayi hai." Abhimanyu guessed.

They reached the nurse station and were greeted by Dr. Kirti.

"Good morning ma'am!" They said in unision.

"Good morning. Maine aap sabko yahan isliye bulaya hai kyunki........"

Pee loon! Tere neele neele nainon se shabnam. Pee loon!

Riddhima was horrified. She had forgotten to keep her mobile on silent. Others looked at her with wide eyes.

Dr. Kirti who had her back towards them turned back with a stern expression.

Riddhima fished out her mobile and was trying to switch it off when

"Dr. Riddhima! Kya mujhe aapko Sanjeevani ke rules waapas batane honge? Kya aap nahi jaanti ke yahan mobiles switch off karke rakhe jaate hain?"

Pee loon hai peenay ka mausam

"Ma'am main........"

Tere sang ishq taari hai
Tere sang ik khumari hai
Tere sang......


Dr. Kirti looked at her enraged.

She cut the call.

"Sorry ma'am."

*Beep* *Beep*

Muskaan slapped her arm on her forehead.

"Aaj Ridzi ki shamat aayi hai."

"Dr. Riddhima?" Dr. Kirti stretched her palm forward.

Riddhima gulped and handed over the phone.

*Beep* *Beep*

Nikita acted as if she would faint. Abhimanyu held her and straightened her.

Dr. Kirti turned back and looked at the message.

"Dr. Riddhima! Aap apne boy friend ya mangetar se kahiye ki wo aapko is waqt disturb na kare. She handed back the mobile.

Itz so cmmon hearin "how r u?" "wht did u do 2day?"
So lemme ask u smethng diff 2day.
"Did u smile 2day? if nt den do now. U look good wen u smile......

Love.....Urs Armaan........

The gang who had hovered around Riddhima smiled then returned to their respective places immediately when Dr. Kirti said

"Interns! Maine aapko yahan Dr. Riddhima ke messages padhne ke liye nahi bulaya hai. Maine aapko yahan yebatane ke liye bulaya hai ke aaj hume 3 naye doctors join karenge. Unmein se 1 senior doctor hai. Wo Panchgani Sanjeevani se aaye hain aur ab yahin join honge. I hope aap unse achche se pesh aayenge. Wo 1 ghante mein hume join karenge. Main aap logon ko phir bulaungi. Now, get back to your duties."

She walked a few steps when she turned and said,

"And Dr. Riddhima, aap apna phone ya to switch off karke rakhen ya main use dust bin mein daal dungi."

"Sorry ma'am."

"Wah wah wah! 'Did u smile today? If not then smile now, you look good when you smile.' Kya baat hai Riddhima?" Abhimayu said.

"Wo sab chaddo yaar! Pehle ye socho ki ye jo naye doctors aa rahe hain unka kya kiya jaaye?" Muskaan asked with a twinkle n her eyes.

"Ragging ki jaaye ya chod diya jaaye.....Bolo unke saath kya suluk kiya jaaye?" Atul grinned wickedly.
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Lolz hope you liked the parts. Guys main pehle bhi kaha abhi bhi keh rahi hun, mere paas time nahi hai 😭 Isliye updates short hain par jaldi mil rahe hain na? Khush raho 😆 Sorry! Par main ye FF issi hafte I guess 1-2 din mein khatam kar dungi. Sorry again! *kaan pakad kar*

Take care
Love,
Ashu


Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res.............sone jaa rahi hoon, baad main edit kar dungi......
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luvved it though!
~Sheena

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