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ok so guys im really sorry,but my computer broke down,and my laptop was with my brother so I didnt have access to my computer.....So here is the next part......Guys I hope you know im 17 so im not the best writer out there.......😭Koi ghalti hue toh maaf kerna mujhe aap sab!!!!!!!
here is the next part songs in this one..Tere naam and a song by strings akhri alvida!

You are my everything.

Maan sat down beside his favourite person,Geet.She looked beautiful,even without make-up.It's been two months since the Nightmare,and Geet was still out cold.For 2 months,Maan has sat beside her,reading stories,watching shows and even talking to her.He could not concentrate,everyone in the office got used to not seeing Maan.Geet's cabin was left the way it was,no one dared to enter.Maan looked up at his angel,and thought about the times she would come in to his cabin,and say something very stupid.He would get so annoyed but he would love to watch her laugh."Geet tumhain se mein bohot nara hoon,boss ko koi itna wait kerata hai?"With that he silently took out his ipod and started to look for a good song.Without looking he pressed a random song and let the music play.

Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam Ho Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam Pyaar Bahut Karte Hai Tumse Ishq Hai Tu Humara Sanam Ho Ishq Hai Tu Humara Sanam

As he listened to the song,he remebered the first time he saw geet.Her innocence had captured his heart,and for some reason that very day he promised to cherish her for ever.Gently moving geet to the left,Maan made room for himself on the bed.Without thinking,he moved geets head so it was resting on his arms,and the other hand covered her stomach.Maan felt at peace,and within seconds he was off to a land that only consisted of Geet.

After a long tiring day,Dr Priya slowly walked to Geet's room.She did not know Geet or Maan,but she knew he loved her.Reaching her room,she saw Mrs Khurana silently watching from the window.She walked up to her and put a comforting hand on her shoulder.

Dr Priya:Ma'am dont worry she will make it.I know it!God wont take her away from you or her loved ones.Though,eik baath hai uska recovery ko kuch din....Kuch saal lag saktein hein.Eik mama jab bacha koo thi hai,toh woh toot jati hai.

Dadi Maa:Apko patha hai,agar geet ko kuch hota hai toh Maan jee nai payega.Geet ke aane se woh itna badal gaya hai..Bilkul moum(wax) ki tarah ban gay haii..Usko izhaar nai kerna ata magar usko pyar hogaya hai..Yeh maan,kabhi bhi kisi se itna close nai hota.Aaj usne apni sari devaren gira ker pyar kiya hai.Uper wala inke saya ban ker rahe.Mujhe Geet ki bohot yaad arai hai

Dr Priya watched from far,as two hearts were getting ready to unite.She saw love and respect,most of all she saw protection.She knew Geet was an angel for these people.Slowly she walked into the room,when she saw Geet finally opening her eyes.She was happy to know someone would be sheding tears of happiness today.Quickly she ran to Maan,trying to save both of them the embarasment."Maan utho,woh uth rahi hai."Maan slowly kissed her head and got off the bed.Dr Priya was in awe,if only love was this great.

Running out of the room like a little kid,Dadi watched her son beam with excitment."Dadi woh uth rahi hai,cheiln na..."With that Maan pulled his Dadi Maa into the room.

Entering the room Maan and dadi were met with the most heartbreaking scene.They watched as geet gently rubbed her stomach,with tears streaming down her eyes she looked at the women who had become her dadi."Dadi Maa,mera jism itna khali khali kyon feel ho raha hai!Mera bacha toh theek hai na!"Geet suddenly sat up quickly,looking for her duppatta.Maan thought about ways to tell her,she was no longer carrying a child.He watched his love,frantically look around for a sign that her baby will be okay.

"Maan sir aap hi batein,mera bacha theek hai na" Geet jumped of the bed,and walked up to Maan feeling very dizzy.

"Geet...woh"Maan watched as Geet's eyes filled with realization.He watched her slowly make her way to her bed.

Geet knew the worst had happen,she knew that she lost her baby.Even the mere thought of losing her baby made her flinch,but now it was her reality.She silently sat down on her bed and gazed outside.She watched as the sun slowly dissappeared behind the mountains,and the traffic slowly became more busier.She forgot that there were people in the room,waiting to talk to her.She couldn't help it though,she didn't have a reason to live.

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Four days after her discharge from the hospital,Geet became a stranger to everyone.She would go out for walks and return only to sleep.Everyone was shocked to see her state,but they were not suprised.Only a mother who had lost a child could understand her pain.

Maan was sulking,blaming himself for what happend to Geet.Nights seemed to be even more longer without any rest.His thought were occupied by a certain lady,who he missed very much.Maan had often watched Geet sitting by the harbour.Few months ago,the thought of a quite Geet would make him laugh.Today he could only wait for the day she would finally be her bubbly self.Thats when he realized that she was all he wanted...SHE WAS HIS LOVE.His true love,Sameera seemed like a highschool crush infront of his love for geet.He had to do something,maybe make her fall in love...But How?

Geet finally returned from a long walk,taking off her shoes she made her way towards the kitchen.Geet caught a glimpse of herself while walking to the kitchen.She looked different,something about her was missing.Putting her hair in to a messy bun,she realized that life could not go on like this.She grabbed an apple,and slowly made her way to Maan's office.

Knock! Knock!

"Come in" Maan yelled out,knowing it was Dadi Maa.

"Sir...woh"Geet walked in looking tired but determined...

"Geet,are tum..aao na...baitho kaisi ho?Sahi ho?Kiya hua? Maan asked in a breath while sitting up straight in his chair.

"Sir main yahan se jana chati hoon....Yahan per itni yaadein hain jinko main bhulna chahti hoon.Eik nayi zindagi shoro kerna chahti hoon.Aap nai mere liye bohot kuch kiya,mujhe bachaya,werna main bhi maar jati.Main aapko bhoolongi nai.Bus aap mera resignation letter accept ker lein.Aur yeh kuch saman hai apka.Isko bhi rakh lein.Dadi Maa soo rahen hain,unko mera pyar dena.Main aaongi wapas..Kab,yeh shiad main nai keh sakhti per main waada kerti hoon!Aa ker apko eik nayi GEET..Handa...I mean Geet milegi....Nakul mera bag rakhne gaya hai taxi main..Main apko boolne doongi toh time lag jaye ga.Bye Sir" Geet walked up to a shocked maan and gave his hand a squeeze....

"Tum chor ke ja rahi ho,toh yeh tumhari ankhoon main kis cheez ka inteezar hai"Maan slowly grabbed Geet's Hand and pulled her in to his arms.

"Main kisi ke inteezar main nai hoon sir"Geet tried hard to pull out of his iron grip,but she couldn't.Looking into his eyes she saw pain and tears.

"Tum mere dil ki darkhan nai sun sakthi,tum paas ho ker bhi meri nai.Geet tumain meri ankhon main kuch nai nazar ata.Jab tum mera paas hoti ho tumain kuch mehsoos nai hota.Tum nazrein chupati ho,magar tumhari kamoshi sab keh deti hai.Tum mere se pyar kerti ho magar,izhaar nai!...Answer ME Damn it!"Maan slowly let go of Geet and slid to the ground.

"Sir? Kiya hua?Oho Im sorry maine kiya keh diya!Eik to main bhi naa"Geet slowly cursed her self...

"Jao yahan se!Jao!Tum nai samjh pao gi.Chali jao yahan se!Kabhi na ana wapis!"Maan yelled in agony,but quickly realized his mistake....

Within seconds,Geet had left,but as she walked out the door she dropped her anklet.She left Maan and the house for ever!Maan on the other hand got up and ran after her,but he stopped when he heard the taxi pull out of the drive way.He drove Geet away!He had to find her!

dhadkane khaamosh hain, kuch kehti nahi
yeh aakhari alvida na ho
chaahate aankhon se behti nahi
yeh aakhari alvida na ho
iss dard dil mein, dil mein rehne do
jo khauf hai aankhon se, aankhon se kehne do
dukh ki nadi chup chaap behne do
jo kehna hai tum dheere se keh do
yeh aakhari alvida na ho
Edited by Noori93 - 14 years ago
shreya satish thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
very nice story...... heart touching...... loved it... pls include me in ur pm list
Noori93 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
hey sherya,thank you hun!
I surely will:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nahhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
ye kya kiya maan uff ab kya hoga plzzzz update karo fast
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 update.ut she cant leave him.unite them.do pm me the next update.thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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So here is the update!I had it typed out an hour ago but I went for a walk at 1am...lol dont ask!

Can we start all over again?

Kehtein hain kuch pane ke liye kuch khone perta hai.Mistakes are only made by humans,but how could MAAN SINGH KHURANA make a mistake?Maan drived to the station at a speed that could not kill others but kill him.What did you do Maan?His thoughts were not letting him rest,clutching the steering wheel he waited for the light to turn green.He turned on his radio only to be tortured by a heartbreaking song.

main tenu samjhawan ki
main tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baju lagda jee
tu ki jaanay pyar mera
main karaan intezar tera !
tu dil tuhi oo jan meri

main tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baju lagda jee
hayaiii
tu ki jaanay pyar mera
main karaan intezar tera !
tu dil tuhi oo jan meri

main tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baju lagda jeemain tenu samjhawan ki
main tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baju lagda jee
tu ki jaanay pyar mera
main karaan intezar tera !
tu dil tuhi oo jan meri

main tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baju lagda jee
hayaiii
tu ki jaanay pyar mera
main karaan intezar tera !
tu dil tuhi oo jan meri

main tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baju lagda jee

Yeh radio bhi nai chaine se jene deta,magar sahi toh keh raha rahat fateh ali khan.Main tumhain kaise samjhon geet,mere guse ka hal tumhara pyar hai.Reaching the station he reached the front desk and asked the man about geet,showing him a picture of his princess.

"Sir,woh idher hhi hongi kahen.Abhi unki bus chali nahi hai."The old man looked at Maan and gently smiled

"Thank you"Maan gave him a nod and left to find geet.

Meanwhile sitting on the bench,was a young female with her hands clutching her dupatta and her hazel eyes adoring a child from far.Geet watched the two year old desperately try to eat her ice cream before it melted.She smiled at the child and watched as the father came and tried to tease his daughter.Maan bhi ase hi bachon se pyar kerta hai.WAIT!!"Why did I just mention Maan?"Geet said out loud.

"Kyon ki tumhein meri adadt ho gayi hai"Maan said kneeling down infront of Geet.

"Aap yahan"A utterly shocked Geet responded.

Maan slowly looked up in to her eyes and took a deep breath.He needed words to make her stay,most of all he needed to say sorry.He gently pulled geet of the bench and in to his waiting arms.The only thing he could do was hug her tightly and pray for her to understand,but he knew that he needed to say something.

"Geet,tumhein pata hai meri zindagi main eik larki hoti thi Sameera.Usne shaadi ke din mujhe bataya ke woh Canada se shaadi ker keh ayi thi.Hum bachpan ke dost the,magar jab woh 17 saal ki thi woh Canada chali gayi.Ushe waaqt main aur woh date ker rahe thee,humne long distance relationship carry ki.3 saal baad woh India ayi,dadi ne sari shaadi ki arrangement ker li.Woh chup chap sari rasmon main shamil hui.Mandak main jab saath pehre lene ka waqt aya.Woh rukh gayi.Geet mujhe kuch samjh nai ati thi! Aaj 3 saal baad kisi se maine yeh share kiya hai.Geet main shiad ise sher main sabse wealthy hoon,per dil se bikul poor.Magar agar tumhara saath hoga toh main sambhal jaon ga.Tumhari inhe ankhon se har ansoon mita doon ga.Tumhare labon pai apni kushi saja doon ga.Tumhare sare ghum apne ine khande pai le loon ga.Geet mujhe kuch hogaya hai.Geet mujhe eik pagal si larki se pyar hogay hai.Main kisi ke intezaar main khud ko bhool gaya hoon.Pata hai woh kon hai?Main batao?Tum meri jaan.Agar dar lagta hai duniya se toh ajao meri bahoon main.Agar koi shikwa hai,toh jitna chaho mar loo.Per mujhe chor ke na jana.Geet agar tm gayi toh mujhe kon time se coffe de ga?Kon mujhe khana kane ko yaad kerai ga?Kon mere zakhm ko marham lagaye ga?Tum meri jene ki waja ban gayi ho."

Geet was speechless,koi itna dukh kaise deh sakhta hai.Who bhi Maan ko?Wiping her tears she gently pushed maan away from her,and made her way to her bag.Maan felt like he would break down any minute.

Arre,aap kaise admi ho?Aapki dilruba itne heavy bag otha rahi hai,aur aap dekh rahe ho."Geet turned around with tears streaming down her face.

Maan suddenly ran to geet,and hugged her with full force.As the couple slowly turned to look in to each others eyes,they started to smile like teenagers.Suddenly both Geet and Maan heard cheering and shouting,turning to the crowd they saw everyone watching them with pride."Are ise maan ne toh srk ko peeche chor diya" someone shouted.With that Geet nudged Maan and said."Oye hero mujhe ghar le ker nai jana.Bus thori si neend arai hai.Aur apko toh patha hau mere boss ko job pai late ane walei log bilkul pasand nai."With that she walked to the parking lot leaving a very smug Maan behind.

Reaching his car,Maan opened the back door and put the lugage in.Running to the passenger side he opened the door for his GEET.Sitting in his own seat he turned the car on,and looked at Geet."Tumain main hero lagta hoon"Maan said with amusement,while trying to hold his laughter.Geet stuck her tongue out,and turned the radio on.Shutting up any further conversation.

Boy:
Teri Ek Chuan Se Jaaga
Ye Kaisa Ahsaas
Pehle To Mehsoos Hui Na
Mujhko Aisi Pyaas...
Pehli Pehli Baar Baliye
Dil Gaya Haar Baliye
Rabba Mainu Pyaar Ho Gaya
Hai, Dil Ka Qaraar Ho Gaya
Hai, Dil Ka Qaraar Ho Gaya
Girl:
Pehli Pehli Baar Baliye
Dil Gayee Haar Baliye
Rabba Mainu Pyaar Ho Gaya
Hai, Dil Ka Qaraar Ho Gaya
Hai, Dil Ka Qaraar Ho Gaya...
Boy:
Khole Teri Soni Soni
Aankhaa Mastaniyaan
Pyaar Ke Liye Ye Dengi
Laakhon Qurbaniyaan
Kar Ke Ek Baar Baliye
Dil Gaya Haar Baliye
Rabba Mainu Pyaar Ho Gaya
Hai, Dil Ka Qaraar Ho Gaya
Hai, Dil Ka Qaraar Ho Gaya
Pehli Pehli Baar Baliye
Dil Gayee Haar Baliye
Rabba Mainu Pyaar Ho Gaya
Hai, Dil Ka Qaraar Ho Gaya
Hai, Dil Ka Qaraar Ho Gaya...

Maan's face slowly lit up,this song was exactly how he felt at the moment.although to his disappointment Geet turned the radio off.Looking at her face,he noticed a faint blush on her cheeks.This made his smile grow even bigger."Abhi toh bohot romantic ho rahi thi,ab isko kiya hua?'Maan thought.

"Waisey Geet,kitna acha song hai na yeh?"Maan said in a teasing tone,knowing the effect he had on Geet.

"Ha..an,I mean bilkul bakwas song hai"Maan watched geet struggle to form a sentence,this made him laugh out loud.

Slowly he moved towards her,gently placing his hands under her chin.Forcing her to look at him,Maan looked in to her eyes and found his answer.She loved him,but needed time to understand those feelings."Hmmm toh batao na geet yeh gana kyon bakwas hai,kahen yeh tumhare dil ki baath toh nai keh raha..Tumhara to kuch nai pata...Per pehli pehli baar geet,dil gaya haar....Rabba mainu pyaar hogaya."Geet looked away but gently wishpered "Mujhe bhi Maan"Maan looked at her with adoration and placed a protective kiss on her head,he knew that kissing her on the lips would be to bold for her."Hmmm lagta hai Maine apne charm se geet handa ko jeet liya!"Geet hit his arm and he laughed at her shyness giving her a peck on the cheek,they finally made their way home.

Im off to bed guys!:)😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
thank youuuuuuu for the comments,I will try my best not to dissapoint anyone.:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18

so here is the two songs from this updatee

Dil ka qarar
Mein tenu samjhawan ki
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
soooooooo sweet plzzz continue soon honey
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Kahani badi Filmi hai..................tumhara to pata nahi baki readers, par main to dil haar gayi...rabba mainu is ff se pyaar ho gaya 😊

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