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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: barkha_31390


<font color="#990066">amazing post........👏👏👏</font>

<font color="#990066">very eager 2 know what happens next........update it soon......
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I shall very likely update it soon

And thnx!
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another awesome part...write more dear
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another awesome part...write more dear



Thank you! and will continue!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for the pm
great part...i hope sid comes back..cant wait to read what's gonna happen next!!!
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amazing fab FF . its 's hearttouching FF. ❤️ plz pmm me next time i m waitng for next part
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Omg Dsnt matter
ur OS does matter :P
its superb
i just love the update :)
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amazing fab FF . its 's hearttouching FF. ❤️plz pmm me next time i m waitng for next part



Thank you so much! n i will!
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Originally posted by: kiran255

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LOL! it does?! Thank you! and welcome abt the pm anytime!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aweome....I read ur FF in one go
Pls pm me when u next update
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Part 8


Part 8
''Suno kisi shayar ney kaha bohot khoob
Maana karey dunya leken merey mehboob
pyar deewana hota hai
Mastana hota hai
Har khushi seh har ghum seh
Beganah hota hai.''

It ws Sid. She spun around. Looked desperately frm one corner to the other corner. Where ws the voice coming frm. Where? She tought fervently. She searched table to table. She listened in hope to get to hear him once more.

Then it ws there again. She heard him sing but this time she spotted him in the tv screen. Singing her one of her favourite melodies. She runs to the receptionist and demands her to give her the CD. The receptionist refuses without any hesitation. Riddhima clarifies tht she is his wife bt receptionist tells her tht Sid had given clear instructions tht the CD should not be handed to anyone and should be stopped incase she does not attend her date. Riddhima sits down and absorbs the trap hole Sid had laid for her. She realises tht he ws as stead fast as she ws and this bothered her. Riddhima looks towards Rahul who ws confused yet eagerly anticipated her return. Anger, devastation and helplessness all battled within Riddhima. Anger because she knew tht the condition Sid had laid dwn for her she had to let him win. Devastation because it wsnt her loss tht bothered her, for Sid she cud lose the most precious things in life but wht devastated her ws his demand. And helplessness because there ws nothing she cud do escape the heart ache she ws abt to experience. She sat there with her head laid in her hands. She taught of all Sid had done for her and decides go through with it.

She goes to the table with obvious hesitation and turns to give the receptionist a look which said Would You Play It Already.

Date scene (Riddhima and Rahul)

Rahul: hello main Rahul hoon.

Riddhima: acha laga jaan kar.

Rahul: normal circumstances mein log khud ki introduction deytey hain.

(Riddhima fakes a smile. Nowadays she ws so use to faking a smile tht it had become a natural reaction to anyone's joke be it funny or lame)

Rahul: waisey main bhi doctor hoon. Paediatric to be specific.

Riddhima: kaam ki zaroorat hai?

(Rahul shakes his head in refusal)

Riddhima: toh phir job description kyun dey rahe ho.

Rahul: aap ache mood mein nahin lag rahi.

Riddhima: dekho Rohan main...

Rahul: Rahul. Mera naam Rahul hai.

Riddhima: sorry. Leken main....

(Before she cud continue. A waitress comes and hands her a note. She opens the note)

Note:

Aur abh meri senior doc Rahul ki dhajyan uraney wali hai. Kyun Riddhima uss becharey ki kya ghalti hai. Kaun seh janam ka badla leyna chahti ho? Waisey dhikney bura nahin hai.

(Riddhima frowns and looks up to find the screen still blank)

Rahul tries his best to grab her attention. Things werent going to his expectations. Riddhima kept disappointing him until she saw Sid face on screen singing pyar deewana hota hai. He sang it in such a besura awaaz tht everyone shut their ears except Ridzy hu ws laughing with tears in her eyes. Rahul glad to see Riddhima laughing assumes its due to his jokes.

Hospital scene (ArSh and Riddhima)

Update on ArSh: Armaan has sincerely tried every single method of getting Shilpa back but she has remained distant. He has tried every thing frm public apology to a midnight private apology. Nothing had worked bt he hadnt given up hope. Bt nw even the hope seemed bleak.

Riddhima: Armaan apney pyaar ko paney ke liye tumhey toda aur koshish karna hoga.

Armaan: main thak chuka hoon samjha the samjha the par woh maaney ko tayar hi nahin.

Riddhima: Shilpa yahan aawoh

Shilpa: Riddhima tumey kuch kaam tha kya?

Riddhima: abh kya sirf kaam ke bahaney hi hum aapseh mulaqat ho sakti hai.

Shilpa: arrey nahin Riddhima... Woh main

Riddhima: chalo lets grab a bite

Armaan: haan lets go waisey bhi kafi kamzor lag rahi ho

(Shilpa looks to Armaan who quickly adds)

Armaan: Riddhima tum kafi kamzor hogayi ho Panchgani mein khaney ko kuch nahin mila tha kya?

Riddhima: mujhe toh mila tha leken tumhari yeh majnoo wali halat kab aur kaisey?

Armaan: kyunki kuch logon ko na apni naa kisi aur ka khayal hai.

Shilpa: shayad kabhi kabar hum dusron ko itna dukh dey tey hain ke apna dard toh kuch bhi nahin

(she leaves saying shez nt hungry and Armaan frowns)

Riddhima: arrey tum toh haar maan gaye. Ussney tumhey APNA kaha Armaan apna! Iss ka matlab hai ke umeed hai aur pyar bhi.

Armaan: haan! Riddhima haan! Aur main bekaar ka majnoo bana phir raha tha.

Riddhima: unnecessary melodrama karney ki tum dono ki purani aadat nahin gayi.

(Armaan shocked to see Riddhima joke thn quickly understands its Sid who has brought abt this change in her.)

*I noe many of u expected Sid to be back in this part only. Sorry. He is on his way with a little more patience on ur side! Whts the point of making everything predictable. So keep reading!

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