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Posted: 14 years ago
hey hi muskan plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update next part as soon as u can plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz these boring weekends r killing me plzzzzzzzzzzz dear update it😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOw tht ws an amazing update... sorry couldnt comment earlier on the previous updates but i didnt receive ur any1s pms cuz my inbox was full so yah... well i caught up with all the updates & they were just fantastic as always... plz continue soon 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
good one muskaan... i nvr thought playing hide n seek could be this romantic...
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Posted: 14 years ago

geet turned & hugged him...& said caught u...
as always..he smiled..like his defeat did'nt matter anything infront of her smile..

part 111

he opened her blinds to meet her eyes..she slowly flickered couple of time & then opened to meet his..she had that naughty winning smile ..his gaze slipped over her, heating her chilled
body and sending electric bolts zooming through her blood... when their eyes met again,
he smiled slowly...she shied this time..the smile had made him look teasingly dangerous
she watched the muscles bunch in his arms... his shirt was already soaked and clinging
to his back and chest...sprinkler fell on her face and dripped off the nose..she looked away
..when maan said ghar challen..she turned to move along when the slippery grass & wet
mud gave way..& she lost her balance..a warm, strong hand gripped her arm..
you ok geet..maan asked..she looked up at him... her dark hair was in the way which he set lose
he slowly moved it off of her face..she stared at him, dumbfounded..water rolled off his
face and onto his chest..drops slipped down into the open V of his shirt... the shirt
clung to him, hugging his wet skin, outlining his muscles, geet swallowed hard...
where his fingers touched her, she felt individual jolts, as if she is been hooked up
to an electric current...her curves swelled inside her damp kurthi...
maan - geeeet..she snapped out..
geet - ji..
maan - tum teehk ho..
geet - ji..ji ..main teek hoon...(she almost forgot that she was supposed to be angry with him)
they went to the room & geet could'nt take her eyes of him..
she kept staring at him with so much of desire..maan could actually feel the intensity
she shook her head ..looked at his dress...which was all wet
geet - I will get you some coffee..
aap change kar loo..(went to pull out towel)
maan cut her a glance, wiggling his eyebrows...if you wanted me naked, all you had to do was say so... I will do anything to please you..he started openning the buttons and removed his shirt..unzipped the jeans and moved closer to her..geet ran away closing her face with her hand..he pulled her back..she was breathing hard.. he could hear her heart thud louder & louder..he turned to meet her gaze she had her hands closing her face..mujhe dekhoo na geet he said softly..she shook her head for a no..still hiding her face..he came closer..his body was warm..mujhe sharam aa rahi hain..she trembled..
he moved her hands down away from her face..she almost stopped breathing..& closed her eyes tighter & bend her head..mujh se sharma rahi ho geet..he lifted her chin..to meet her eyes..
dehko na mujhe..he said again & her face turned pink maan kissed her cheeks...geet ran away
& stood near the steps for catching her breath..& went to the kitchen..it took her forever
to make that coffee..her hand was shivering she was not able to take her thoughts fade from his
wet looks...maan smiled kya karoon main aapne pagli ka..& changed into
his tracks & vest..dried his hair..

when she back with his coffee..she noticed he was not smiling..there was some thing bothering him she kept the coffee & went & changed..she saw his phone ring again & again..in vibration
she noticed few missed calls & also noticed the person calling
before she could pick the phone ...maan took the phone
and answered the call...& walked away to the study...

geet waited for maan...she rolled over couple of times (babaji. yeh aise kyun karthe hain...aab dehkoo mujhe neind nahi aarahi hain..aur woo study main busy hain..aise koi kartha hain kya...geet..tu bhi kya kya expect karne laaghi hain unse..)...& fell a sleep..
when maan came back..& saw geet..sleeping..felt sorry for not keeping up to her desires..
she never complains..nor does she ask..so it becomes even more important for him to understand & take care of her feelings...which he failed at always...

geet got up early & was working out in gym...she looked at the clock couple
of times..maan did'nt join her..she walked out wondering wat happened..
maan just walked in..she was delighted...
geet - aap ka juice laathi hoon..(her voice was in high spirits)
maan just loves to see her happy & full of life...his day was made..perfect begining
she walked in with the juice & just hangged around their little longer admiring him

geet got ready & went to the kitchen ..maan joined in after few mins...it was 9.00am
grabbed an apple wipped it on her duppatta
geet - breakfast nahi karna
maan - I am getting late..kisses her cheek & leaves..

geet quickly grabs her laptop & drafts a mail...& gets busy with her usual routine

Maan reaches his office & checks his mails...to his suprise his first mail was from geet

he checks the time..9.05 am..on the mail he smiled & could stop loveing her again...
it was simple..it just read...MISS U ALREADY...

maan replies.. I DON'T MISS U ATALL..!!! (9.10am)

he carried on with his meeting & checked other mails..
geet replies with a 😃 (smily)...maan expected her to get angry..for his suprise she smiled..(9.30am)
maan - u r not angry....(10.05am)
geet was busy krish's school work..she checked his work & was opened her mail after a while
she smiled looking at his mail & replied
why should I be?? (10.40am)
and carried on with krish's new work sheet..
maan came back after the clients visit & read his mails..he replied
because I said I DON'T MISS U ATALL...(11.00am)
he went to the conference to discuss about Mr.Chopra's project..& kept looking for geets reply on his blackberry..
geet completed krish's work sheet & was about to mail krish..she noticed maan's mail
she promptly replied...
geet send a 😃 smily again..& added a note I am glad u don't miss me ATALL!!!(11.20am)
maan promptly checked his mail & was little restless now...did'nt reply
he felt bad that his not missing her did'nt bother her..
geet waited for maan's reply then
she mailed again - itna gussa kyun ho rahe ho??? (12.00pm)
she went on to make lunch
maan loved to see her mail again..& that she knew his mode
he asked- how do u know??? (12.01pm)
geet tried checking her mail from her phone...
and replied - 😃 smiled again (12.15 pm)
maan was fed up with her smilies..
bhaut hasi aarahi hain??? ok I MISS U !!(12.20pm)
geet finished her work & saw his mail & laughed out loud..and replied
U cannot miss me...(12.45pm)
maan was about to finish the conference...completes the meeting & on the way to his room
types - wat do u mean??? why can't I miss u???(12.50pm)
he was disturbed why geet said that...he kept checking the mails..
she does'nt reply...
he was in his cabin..on his laptop...he really missed her...her replies..
I am missing U now seriously (1pm)

how can that be????(1.01pm) she wispers in his ears...
he was excited & delighted to see her...
maan - wat are u doing here
geet - thought of taking u for a lunch date...since u said u miss me!!
maan - actually have some meetings lined up (he did'nt want to turn her down)
geet - so u don't miss me???
she pretend to be annoyed & walks towards the blinds...
maan - geet I am really sorry...I know I have been little busy since last week
(geet slowly closes the blinds..but still pretends to be angry)
geet - so u don't miss me!!!
maan - please sweet heart try to understand..I have a meeting in...geet kisses his lips
& sits on his lap...maan realized she actually closed the blinds..& the door was bolted


geet - I know u have a meeting in 15mins...(looked into his eyes)
so lets have her lunch date here...

she pulls lunch box she packed...maan smiled...
they shared their lunch..while geet was comfartably sitting in his lap..
geet - aap aaj kal aapna khayal nahi rakthe
maan - tum jo ho...uske liya...

precap

maan twisting geets hand..yet again!!!!

thanxs for all ur replies...hope this one is long enough..
please do reply...love u all
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
cute and adorable😉
muski i loved it because my philosophy is
"The most important thing in life is to learn how to give out love, and to let it come in."

Edited by simzzzzcool - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanxs sweetheart
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Posted: 14 years ago
I know i haven't commented your last one.. was busy with Eid dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago
very cute............ did anyone tell u that u're very romantic person????....i think CVs should take classes from u... they can make all maaneetians go crazy like u do...
Edited by smiliey - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome.lolz love their mail convo mayb u shud include more of those. lolz. oooh oooh I also demand a chat convo of maaneet. plz plz plz? pretty please? u can put it in between let's say geet is at work and maan is at work too and missing each other then they chat. that wud b so cool lolz.
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks a lot sis yu are lovely on updating amazing way thankssssssssssss.

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