FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet thread 4 - Page 15

Wah ! Me Gusta so u gonna hit the century .. so hope thr will be some lovely moments btw our maneet :) n i hope u'll update today :)

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hey muskan its great waiting for a dhmaka🥳 and plzzz the 100 part should be long as its a dhmaka waiting for 100 part 🥳dear update as soon as u can and thanks dear😊

Nice update

hmm maan trying to tell geet what to do lol of course she is gonna go now. Geet trying to seduce him into letting her go hehe but he still wasn't fazed. The scene in the house was great too, esp when maan said kanha to geet's challen.

great update

great yaar

Gr8 part

sorry i couldn't comment earlier...was on a long trip, 4 whole days without ur ff!~

geet - aacha main chalti hoon..
maan pulls geet from her waist..tum chandni chok nahi ja rahi..samjhi tum
call me when u are done..I will pick u from here..
she walks few steps away & shouts..main chandini chok ja rahi hoon...
driver ko behjdena..& runs away..

part 100

maan - yeh meri koi baat kyun nahi sunthi..maan drives to his office
& calls the driver to pick geet from chandini chowk

geet meets up with smriti, kavya & pooja
geet - i need to tell u all something impt
pooja - we don't want to talk to you
smriti - ranbhir waited all this while for u...
geet - main use..kavya intrupted geet yaar wat is this college ke baad u don't spend
time with us..
pooja - koi boy friend ka chakar hain kya..ki Maan Khurana mil gaya tha?
geet - can I say something..
smriti - no no...we don't have time..we have to go to chandini chowk now..
on their way..smriti shows her the jewelry design that she selected
also showed the lehnga parttern wat she wanted
kavya told her about the guys who came to see her..geet was little disturbed

Maan reached office & continued with his work..he had some meetings lined up
it was 7pm...maan came back to his cabin...he noticed some restlessness in the
office ..he called adi
maan - wat happened
adi - sir there is been few blasts in crowded areas of delhi inculding chandini chowk
maan heart sunk..he switched on the tv & saw the news..
he tried calling geet her phone was not reachable...maan panicked
he called her driver..
maan - tum ne geet ko pick kiya
driver - nahi sir
maan - I told u to pick her
driver - I spoke to her at 4pm..she asked me to come to chandini chowk at 7pm
lekin main yanha traffic main phasa hoon..not able reach there
maan - slammed his phone & rushed to the spot..
on the way he called IG & got special searching team arranged..
he reached the place the sight was unbareable pool of blood..people injured & burned..
the whole place was in a mess..maan could'nt stand the sight..there was flush spread
on the road people crying in pain & grief..maan tried looking around for geet

the cops caught up with him & got the details of geet
cop - wat was she wearing
maan - blue top & dark blue jeans(his eyes was moist already)
cop - she is alone
maan - no she is with 3 other friends..they came for some wedding dress..lehenga..
(geets voice was echoing in his ears)
mean while another cop..sir us taraf ek lehnga shop main kuch lash mili hain
matches quite to his discription(maan held the cop from his collar his eyes
filled in pain & anger)
cop - sir aap please over react muth kariya..u will have to calm down
& co-operate with us..
maan - nahi she is fine..its not her...
half heartedly he went to the spot..the shopkeeper had small injuries..
cop - did any group of 4 girls vist u today..
shopkeeper - yes ..they were shopping for one of them ..then there was this
sudden blast..I had gone in to pick up the colour they asked..
so I survived & when I came back I saw them all lieing in the pool
of fresh blood & flesh..
maan sat down in disbelief...his phone rang...
krish - dad maa kanha hain..unka phone kyun nai lag raha hain..
maan(his voice fumbled) - i will call u back..geet..(maan cut the call)
maan pulled out geets photo from his purse & asked if she was among the 4 ladies
who were there...
shopkeeper - suit main jo ladkhi thi..she did'nt look like her
others were wearing jeans..I am not sure...
maan urged the cops to look at those bodies...
cops guided him to the hospital those bodies were taken to ..
on the way to the hospital..he remembered the last time he saw her..
the way she turned away..tum meri baath kyun nahi sunthi geet..
maine tunhe mana kiya tha na...sab meri galthi hain..mujhe use jana hi nahi dena
chahiya tha..I should'nt have let her go at the first place..
oh god use kuch nahi hona chahiya...it should not be her..
maan reaches the hospital..
cops take him to the doctor who attended those girls
doctor - sorry non of those girls survived..
they were at the center of the impact...very badly burnt
doctor asked to check the body at the morgue..
maan did'nt have the strength to walk till there..he dragged himself
there was a distinct odd smell..the place was cold & too many bodies..lieing around
attended opened each body & showed it to maan..he could take the pressure..every time
he hoped it was not her..the bodise were sadly disfigrued & could barely make out any thing
nothing could relate him to the bodise..confused & hopefully he left the place when he
noticed a similar bracelt in one of the bodies..he broke down & cried...
he could'nt believe wat he just saw..all his hope just shuttered down..
geeeeet he cried & cried out loud...
tum mujhe chod kar nahi ja sathi geet...he holds the rim of the strecher..
cops had to pull him out ..of the morgue..he wanted to hold her & touch her all over but attended suggested not to..sinc the body was really damaged already...
doctor - Mr.Khurana..we will do the final bid of postmorten & confirm it to u..
is there any specific..
maan could'nt answere..he walked away..he turned immidiately & said...
kidney..yah..she does'nt have her right kidney..she donated to krishna & he cried ..
doctor - we will confirm the details & u can claim the body tomorrow morning..
maan goes & sits on the bench...
inspector - Sir ..u please go home & take care of things there
we shall co-ordinate it from here...

maan walks to the car..& there was a sudden down pour..he removed his
coat & threw it inside the car..his phone kept ringing he did'nt answere..
he walked & hit the car roof & walked & walked...the rain soaked him wet..
the only thing that was running in his mind was geet...
he was shattered ..defeated ..yet again by fate..

precap
new beginning..new ehsaas!!

have just come across your fan fic... i must say ur gifted everything is so good....wow 100 parts already... not a easy job...it is so beautiful.. i am totally loving it..geet and maan so adorable...