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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...loved it......precap:very interesting😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Every1 Thank u so much For ur Lovely Lovely Comments on Part 31 nd Support Till nw. I m really very Happy that u liked that Part nd Specially that Poem. I was really very nervous during Writing of dat Poem but Thank God u all like it. now Here's d Part 32 of My FF. Hope u all like it Too. Pls Feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it.😊

PART 32:

After having some snacks every1 has resumed d Game nd dis tym Geet spins d Bottle which stops between Armaan nd Savy with d open end towards Armaan.

Savy: Yes! This is wat I want. So Bro Truth or Dare?

Armaan: Dare

Savy: ok Bro! I dare u to confess ur Feelings for the Person u love. The Person who has became ur life in front of all of us

Armaan: But Savy'.

Savy: Y? if u can Ask Geet to share her Poem she has written for Maan then u should not get scared for confessing ur Feelings

Armaan: ok F9. u have to pay for dis in future

Savy: whatever. First complete ur dare

Armaan gets up from his place nd goes where Shilpa was sitting. Every1 was watching dem smiling. Every1 over dere knew swat they both r Feeling for each other but the fact is dat that neither Armaan nor Shilpa is ready to confess their feeling. But now Armaan has to confess his feelings. Armaan helps Shilpa to stand up nd brought her aside. Everone gets up from their places to see their confession. Shilpa's Heartbeats r getiing Faster nd Faster by each nd Every moment. Finally Armaan is going to propose her. the day for which she was waiting for so long. Armaan sit on his Knees holding Shilpa's one hand nd started Confessing her Feelings

Armaan: Shilpa, I don't know how to Say, from where to start. I m good in poems like Geet if I was den I would definitely express it through dat nor I know those Filmy lines like Savy. All I know is dat my Heart Beats for u. u came to my Dark life nd has spread d light of Happiness nd once again given me courage to live, to Laugh nd most importantly to Love Again. Usually Guys have Ring or some kind of Flowers at the moment of confessing their feelings but I dnt have either of these rite nw but still I m going to confess. I LOVE U SHILPA I REALLY DO ND WILL LOVE U FOREVER. U R MY LIFE SHILPA ND I CANT LIVE WITHOUT U. DO U LOVE ME? WILL U BE MINE FOR FOREVER?

Everyone was looking at both of dem mesmerized. A drop of tear fell from Shilpa's eyes. She smiles nd let Armaan to Stand up.

Shilpa: Armaan, I LOVE YOU TOO. I Don't know since wen but I feel nice wen u r around me. U made me believe to those stupid Love stories which Di use to watch or read nd den cries. I cant imagine my Life without u. I want to be yours forever. But dere is one problem

Everyone including Armaan got tensed wen Shilpa said d word Problem

Armaan: wats dat Shilpa?

Shilpa: I don't know hw to Cook neither I can do those household works which ladies use to do after marriage

Everyone including Armaan laughs at Shilpa's Innocence.

Armaan: Its ok. I'll manage with Burn Foods nd messed up Home nd moreover I'll never let my Princess to do any work. I can cook for u for whole of my life neither I would mind being "Joru Ka Ghulam"

Shilpa: Really?

Armaan: yes

As soon as Armaan said Dis Shilpa Hugs him Tightly to which Armaan responded back. The Gang clapped nd smiles at the Happy Couple. Every1 is Happy for dem Specially Geet wen she sees her Sister has got a Perfect Match.

Geet(To Herself): Thank God! Atleast Someone's Love has got its Destination.

But Armaan nd Shilpa seems to forget their Sorroundings so someone has to bring dem back

Savy: Ahem! Ahem! Guys I think u both have forgetten that u r not alone we all r also over here.

They broke d Hug nd looks at every1. Everyone congratulated Armaan nd Shilpa on their Happiness with lots of Hugs.

Maan: Guys! I Think we should Leave both of Dem Alone nw.

Savy: No but game is still incomplete.

Maan: Stop Behaving like a Kid Savy. Leave dem alone. Dey needed sometime for themselves.

Armaan: Thanx Maan for being so understanding

Maan: Anytime Dude.

Everyone except Armaan nd Shilpa headed inside d House giving some Privacy to the couple.

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Geet was standing at the terrace thinking about Armaan nd Shilpa nd their Confession. Hw happy they looked with each other. She and Maan can also be Happy in d same way if she havent behave so immature but nw nothing can be done. She has to live without Maan because nw Maan's Happiness is wid Savera. All these thoughts were running in her Mind wen Savera joins her.

Savy: Hey Geet! Wat r u doing at the terrace that too in dis much cold

Geet: nothing Savy just thinking about Armaan nd Shilpa. Dey were so Happy wid Each other na.

Savy: Ya dats rite. Both Look so Good Together. I wish they always be like dat only. But Geet y I feel that there is something else also which is bothering u.

Geet: No Savy, nothing like dat.

Savy: C'mon Geet Don't hide it from me. Tell me Pls.

Geet: Actually I was thinking about u and Maan

Savy(confused): Me nd Maan?

Geet: ya. U both look so Good together. Actually u both Deserve each other. Dekho na maine apni bewakoofi mein Maan ko Kho Diya but I m happy that he's Happy wid u. Actually......

Savy(intervenes): Wait wait wat r u saying Geet? Me and Maan? R u crazy? Wat made u think like dat?

Geet: u mean to say u nd Maan r not seeing each other.

Savy: God No. not at all

Geet: But everytym u both were together. U calling him Shona nd he calling u Princess nd today at Noon u both were......

Savy: o God Geet. Its nothing like dat. Maan nd Me were just making u jealous so that u can express ur love to him. Nd during Noon I was discussing my Plan wid Maan for the evening nd making him Assure that u'll definitely confess ur feelings in dis 2 days.

Geet: Really?

Savy: yes. Geet me nd Maan were just Good friends nothing else. I never realized hw hurt u would be due to our plan But u know wat today after d game wen u, Armaan nd Shilpa Went inside den Maan told me to stop dis Plan because he don't want to hurt u more. He said that he can wait till whole of his lyf for ur confession but he'll not hurt u anymore nw due to dis plan.

Geet: Maan said dis

Savy: Yes Geet, he really loves u a lot nd I was just helping him dats it. Geet just go nd confess ur love to him. He's waiting for u from so long

Geet hugs Savy a warm hug. She was so wrong about Savy. Savy was trying to re-unite dem nd she thought that she's snatching Maan from him.

Geet: thanx Savy. For making me realize my mistake

Savy: My pleasure Geet. Nw don't waste tym Geet. Just Go and tell him

Geet: yes! I m going

Saying dis she quickly goes from dere in search of Maan. All her moments wid Maan were running in her mind. She has decided that Today she's gonna tell everything to Maan. There will be no Boundations nw neither her Stupid Ego will cum between dem. She searched at his Room he was not dere den she has looked at d hall but he was not there too. then where he could be. then suddenly something struck her mind. Nw only one place left to find "Garden".

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Maan was standing at Garden looking at Moon nd thinking about Geet. He know that by stopping Savy to follow d plan is not good to him may be nw Geet will never confess her feelings but its ok he can wait but nw he'll not let Geet suffer anymore. He was lost in his thoughts wen he felt someone behind him. He turned around nd saw Geet standing over dere. She has tears in her eyes wid smile on her face. Maan couldn't understand her expression. Suddenly Geet came running nd Hugged Maan tight like he will be vanished in a moment. Maan couldn't understand d Situation. Did Geet just Hugged him or is he dreaming. No its not a Dream. Geet is in his Arms. He too hugged her back. Dey were in each other Arms for some moment wen Maan spoke

Maan: Geet, wat happen? Is Everything ok? R u ok?

Geet: Pls Maan dnt say anything. Let me be in ur Arms for some moment

Maan: Geet, wat happen? (he said while caressing her Back)

Geet Broke the hug nd looked at Maan's Eyes. hw much love was their for her in his eyes den y she couldn't read it till nw. Hw can she think of Maan being wid Savy. She thought. Den she places her one hand on Maan's Cheek nd started confessing her feelings

Geet: Maan, I LOVE YOU. I LOVE U A LOT. Maan I have been stupid during all dese Period to think that u Love Saver and not me. That I had lost u. that I can never be wid u now. But today wen Savy told me everything den I ralized that hw wrong I was nd den I couldn't stop myself from telling u. MAAN I REALLY REALLY LOVE YOU.

Maan(cupped her face in his hands): Geet, I LOVE YOU TOO. U know I was waiting for dis moment from so long. Nd Geet it was not ur mistake if u have thought like dis like d thing were presented in front of u ur thinking was obvious. Don't Blame urself for anything.

Geet: Tum itne Acche kyun ho Maan? U quietly suffered all ur Pain without any complaint nd wen it came to my suffering u stopped dis plan so that I dnt get Suffered anymore inspite of knowing that u r taking a pain for ur Lifetym. I always thought of my pain, my sorrows but have never seen urs that hw much u r suffering. Really bahut Buri hoon main......

Maan(puts his Finger on her lips to make her quiet): Sshhhh! Geet no. dnt say like dis. u r not at all bad. Geet u r my Angel nd hw can be an Angel be Bad. Geet I cant even tell u how much I love you all I know is dat I cant live without u not in my Worst Nightmare I wanted to be without u. U changed my Life Geet. U told me hw to live Life, hw can we find Happiness in Small things. Wen a Person can leave such a excellent Impact in someone's Life den hw can that Person be Bad.

Geet: But Maan......

Maan: No Geet! Just forget Everything. Just Forget that we ever had a fight. Forget that we were ever got Separated. Lets Start a New Beginning from Today. Our Journey of Love which will Last Forever. No Matter Hw much we'll Fight but That Fight will never Change our Love. Just feel dis Moment which has brought u nd me Closer which has broken every Walls between us

Geet: But u have to make one more Promise

Maan: wats Dat?

Geet: That u'll not do that again u know dat Jealousy Plan nd all dat u calling Savy Princess etc etc. I cant share u with Anyone u r mine only Mine

Maan: I promise Geet even I cant share u wid Anymine u r also just Mine but u have to promise one thing to me.

Geet: wats dat?

Maan: That from Now if any of us will have any kind of confusion or Misunderstanding then we'll first clear it wid each other before going into any Decisions

Geet: I promise Maan. Acha By d way Tell me one thing y did u gave Rite Answers Today?

Maan: y? u don't wanted me to give Right Answers

Geet: No, nothing like dat but if u have given Wrong Answers then I had a chance to punish u but u have given every answer Right except one

Maan(Confused): Which one?

Geet: the Last one, in which u have to tell d names of d Persons because of whom I can leave my Stubborness.

Maan: No Geet I have given rite Answer

Geet: No u have not. Its not 3 People its 4. Vindhya Di, Vansh Bhai, Me Myself nd 4th one is U Maan.

Maan(amazed): Me?

Geet: yes Maan, Even I don't know wen I have given u dis Right but for u I can leave everything. I can Do anything for u.

Maan: den y didn't u tell dis there?

Geet: Because I don't wanted to Prove u wrong in front of Everyone

Maan: Geet, tum sach mein Paagal ho. But Still Rules are Rules u should punish me

Geet: No Maan I wont punish u.

Maan: U have to or else I'll punish u

Geet: o Really How?

Maan: u'll Cum to know Soon

By saying dis he came closer to her. Geet didn't moved an inch. He slowly places his Hand around her waist nd Pulled her towards himself. Geet's Geart has started beating fast but she didn't Protest him. He caressed her face with his hand nd den cupped it between his hands. He leaned in towards her nd tenderly kissed her forehead. Geet Closes her eyes. she was melting in his Arms. Then he kissed both of her eyes. then he Leaned in to Kiss her soft lips, the Lips which he was dying to kiss. Both r Loving d Affect they had on each other. Finally he kissed her soft Lips, feel its softness. Geet Circled her Arms around his neck, brushing his hairs with her hand. Maan felt a Shiver through his Spine due to her Touch. Finally he was kissing his Angle nd she too responding him back. Every Boundation, every Hurdles r over nw. Nw there is only Love present between dem. They seemed nowhere to stop but before their kiss can be turned into a Passionate one both hear a voice addressing Geet which make dem came back to their Senses. It was Shilpa calling Geet.

Shilpa: Di! Where r u? its so late

Geet (To Maan): Shilpa is coming I have to go

Maan: Wat if I didn't let u go (he said holding her Wrist)

Geet(Trying to free herself): Maan Pls. Let me go

Maan: on one condition.

Geet: Wat?

Maan: u have to meet me tomorrow wherever I say where there is only u nd Me

Geet: Ok I'll come but nw let me go. Shilpa will come

Maan: ye Saali bhi na

Geet(angrily): Maan

Maan(humbles): Arey I mean that Sister-in-Law wala Saali. Not dat one

Geet: Better. Acha nw I m going

Maan: ok Go but don't forget ur Promise

Geet: ok I'll come. Bye Maan.

She said nd Kissed his cheeks nd quickly Ran away from dere. After Sometime Maan Too got inside d House. Both lost in each other's Dream nd waiting for d Next day eagerly.

Precap:

Some romantic moments


So guys hope u all like dis Part. hit d like Button if u all like it nd Do leave ur Comment/criticism. its necessary nd 1 thing i wanna tell u all my next update will be after 1 week because i m going out of town tonight for Some Official Work. Pls Forgive me for d delay nd co-operate wid me.

Luv Aakriti
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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was lovely update
finally they confessed their love for each other.
waiting for next one....
continue soon....
& thanks for quick pm.
Edited by cutee987 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Kya baat hai Aakriti??
Do do updates???
Love them both yaar...especially the poem...it was peaceful!
Thanks a heap for being back
Love you,Shaila
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ahem I realy love this update nice to see geet till her love to maan wooow it's was breathtaking thanks for the pm and plzzzz update the next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow finally they confessed it's so beautiful part.............
plz continue soon.........
Edited by my_maan_geet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
aakrtiiii
thanks a ton sweetheart for the awesome update ..
cant wait for their romantic moments ☺️
love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwwww maan n geet both confessed their luv
tht was soooooo dreamyyyyyyyy
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Posted: 14 years ago
They confessed they confessed they confessed.....both couples confessed!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wooooooooooooooooo love it love it love it
awwwwwwww nw the lovey couples will want alone tym n poor savy will be alone 😆 unless of course u find her a munda tooo - ooooooooooooo that would be awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!
hehehehe
cnt wait for next week now
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Posted: 14 years ago
dont yu worry we wait thanks for give us another update finally they confess there love four of them party 🥳🥳🥳 fabulous pls cont soon when yu come back have a nice trip

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