FF: EHSAAS-THE FEELING Thread 1 - Page 28

OOps so Geet has a past han....no wonder she behaves all matured type...nt believing in luv or marriage ............awwww my MSK getting affected by Geets feelings ..

Am soo loveing this patr but am soo sad buz maan love her but geet but geet still make maan her friend thanks alot for pm

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hi aakriti

Hi Aakriti,

oh.. it would have been good if Maan had read Geet's diary...

sorry!!!!

phele comment nhi kr ski.....no net for past 2 weeks....:(:(:(

just read all da parts!!!!


finally....both maan n armaan realized....their lovE!!!!

awsummmmmmmm.....loved iT!!!


update soON!!!!

nice update ... thnks 4 the PM ...

waiting for the next update 😊
Update soon 😊

Hi every1 thank u so much for ur overwhelming Love nd Support so far. i knw i used to say dis everytime i update but i cant help it because without ur Support i couldnt be able to reach till here so for dis no matter hw many times i thank u all would be less only. Now here's d Part 13 of my FF. Hope u all like it too. pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it😊

Part 13:

Maan comes back to Mansion wid a smile on his Face. The novel is still in his hand but he was Lost in Geet's Thoughts. Savitri Devi was walking restlessly in d Living Room

Waiting for Maan to come as he has gone out without even taking d Breakfast but wen she saw him smiling she understands from where is he coming.

Savitri Devi: Wat happen Maan? Aaj aap kafi muskura rahe hai?

Maan (tries to hide his smile): hmmm.... nahi to Dadimaa.

Savitri Devi: Dnt hide it from me Maan. Hum aapko bachpan se jaante hai. Waise aap ye Shatabdi Express ki speed se gaye kahan the.

Maan: wo Dadimaa, Geet ek problem me thi aur main.....

Savitri Devi: bas.. ab aage kuch bhi kehne ki zarurat nahi hai. hum samajh gaye .

Maan: Dadi....

Savitri Devi: Maan I m really happy for u. finally u knw hw to live ur life. (den looks at his hand) wats dat in ur hand?

Maan: oh dis? It's a novel geet has given me to read.

Savitri Devi took d novel from him nd looks at its title den looks at maan nd gives a mischeivious smile.

Savitri Devi: So since wen Maan Singh Khurana has started reading romantic novels.

Maan: Dadimaa, u r getting wrong. I brought dis Novel because Geet has insisted me to read it thatsy

Savitri Devi: its ok maan. I haven't ask for any clarifications. U carry on.

Maan: Nahin Dadimaa.......

Savitri devi smiles nd headed towards her room. Maan looks at d novel nd den smiles too.

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At nite Geet as usual reading her novel wen her cell phone rang. She saw Maan's name flashing over dere.

Geet(to herself): So Mr. Maan Singh Khurana finally u read d novel.

She picks up d call.

Geet: Hello!

No reply from dat side.

Geet: Hello maan u dere?

Maan: ya..... Geet

Geet: wats wrong maan? R u fine? (she could sense dat maan's voice was normal. It sounds depressed)

Maan: ya geet everything is fine.

Geet: No maan something is wrong...... Wait! U read d novel rite?

Maan kept silence on dis

Geet: Maan, its not bad if u cry after reading dis nd u can share wid me. Tumhare Share prices gir nahin jayenge.

Maan: Hw do u know that I was crying?

Geet: Maan I can tell by ur breath dat in wat mood u r?

Maan: really?

Geet realizes wat did she just said.

Geet: ya Maan, afterall I knw u from such a long time.

Maan: ya, waise u r rite the writer truly loves his love.

Geet: I told u.

Maan: Waise Geet u haven't been in love before?

Geet: yes I m.

Maan was not expecting dis answer. He thought that there was no one else except him in her lyf.

Maan: oh! Who's it?

Geet: Hai koi? Secret hai

Maan: Geet pls tell na.

Geet: Maan bolo na secret hai.

Maan (irritated): pls tell me geet or I'll not talk to u.

Geet: ok if u r insisting I m going to tell his name to u. his name is Parth.

Maan(getting serious): Parth! From hw long u both were in relationship

Geet: uummm.... From 4 years.

Maan: nd u haven't told me yet.

Geet: u haven't asked me yet.

Maan: where is he nw?

Geet: he's in US.

Maan (nw getting almost shattered): What does he doing over dere?

Geet: Completing his studies

Maan: wat kind of studies? Is he also doing Architecture?

Geet: No no, he's in Nursery.

Maan: oh ok! (Wait wat did she said just). Wat? Wat did u said just nw?

Geet: ya he's in nursery.

Maan: Nursery? Geet of whom u r talking about?

Geet: parth, my nephew nd Vindhya Di's Son (den she broke into laughter)

Maan: Geeeetttttt......

Geet: kyun Maan? Tumhe kya laga?

Maan: Geet, u have almost killed me. For a moment I thought that u r really in love wid someone.

Geet: Maan relax! U r behaving like a typical fiance. I was only kidding. U only think if I would have been in love wid someone else then Y should I get engaged wid u?

Maan said nothing. He thought that Geet is rite if she was in love then their relationship will never be at d stage where it is nw. Geet is not in love wid anyone has brought Smile nd Relief in his Face.

Geet: maan u dere?

Maan: ya. By d way y did u tease me.

Geet: it's a revenge! Remember that day at office u played a prank on me.

Maan: oh! U have to pay for this Ms. Geet Malhotra.

Geet: We'll see mr. Maan Singh Khurana.

Maan: Acha Geet, its very late nw. u should sleep nw otherwise again tomorrow u'll get infection.

Geet: Maan, u care so much for me?

Maan: I have to Geet. Afterall I m ur Fiance (he chuckled)

Geet: ya ya I knw mr. Fiance.

Maan: good nite. Sweet dreams.

Geet: good nite maan. Aur haan Ab rona mat warna tomorrow it'll be d front page Headlines of every newspaper.

Maan: I knw dnt worry I'll nt cry nd I was nt crying also. Wo to I just got a bit emotional.

Geet: Maan, u knw wat? U cant say lie so dnt try it ok.

Maan: ok baba, waise bhi tumse baton me kabhi jeet paya hoon.

Geet: ya aur jeetoge bhi nahi. Chalo good nite.

Maan: Good nite.

She hang up. For d first time Geet didn't mind Maan Calling himself as her fiance. She dnt know why but she likes his Company. She likes to get dependant on him, talking to him endlessly. She likes wen he care for her so much.

"Is he getting more den a friend to me" She thought but den she didn't find any answer for his question.

Geet(looking upwards): Babaji! Yeh sab kya ho raha hai? mujhe to kuch samajh nahi aa raha, aap hi kuch batao.

Saying dis she went to sleep

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1 week has been passed Since Shilpa returned from Lonavala nd since she returned she is not d same as she was before. She has changed. Since d day Armaan has told her about his past she felt an unknown attraction towards him not as a friend but something more den that. She dnt know what to called it but there is something unusual feeling den friendship nd Geet is nw at d same stage where once Maan was, in d diallema about her relationship wid maan. This much she was sure dat Maan is becoming more den a friend to him but still she is not ready to accept dat she can Actually fall for anyone.

Its been 2:00 pm nd Geet is in Maan's Cabin. They were discussing about the Chopra's Project but Geet is hardly listening to anything. She is lost somewhere. She didn't concentrate on any word wat Maan says.

Maan: Geet, Mr. Chopra has called dis morning. He says dat he'll be going to London after 2 weeks so in his Absence his Nephew will handle dis Project. So I was thinking that.......

Den he looks up at geet who seems to be lost somewhere. Sadness can easily be noticeable from her face. Maan couldn't understand wats d reason is.

Maan: Geet

She still didn't respond.

Maan(raises his Voice): Geet..... R u listening?

She came back into senses.

Geet: ya Maan....... Sorry wat were u saying?

Maan: wats wrong Geet? R u feeling fine?

Geet: ya Maan. I m fine (she tried to smile Fakely)

Maan gets up from his chair nd came closer to her. She was looking downwards. He raises up her face through chin nd notices d tears in her eyes.

Maan: Geet...... Wat happen? Y these tears?

Geet: oh! Nothing Maan. I guess something has gone in my eyes.

Maan: dnt lie Geet. I knw u. tell me wats wrong?

Geet: trust me Maan. Nothing is wrong. I just go nd wash my eyes ok den catch u in Discussion.

By saying dis she left from dere nd rushed to Washroom where she cried a lot. On d other hand Maan in his Cabin was getting worried wats wrong wid her. As far as he know her laptop is nw working nd he cant think of any other problem also. Den wats wrong. Did she had a Fight wid Shilpa? Then he thought that its not possible as they both love each other so much.

"May be Shilpa knows d reason" He muttered. He started dialing Shilpa's No. but it continuously comes Switched Off. So he decided to call Armaan.

Armaan: Hey Buddy! Wats up?

Maan: Nothing much Armaan. Is shilpa over dere?

Armaan: Oye hoye. Today asking about ur Sister-in-law. Nice!

Maan: Armaan pls be serious. I m not in a mood of joke.

Armaan: wats wrong Maan. U sound worried.

Maan: ya Armaan (den he narrates d whole incident to him). I m not able to understand Armaan wats wrong wid her. Datsy I tried to call Shilpa but her Cell is been switched off so I called u.

Armaan: Dude! The thing u were telling to me d same I noticed wid Shilpa also. She was also lost somewhere since Morning. Didn't able to concentrate neither on briefing nor on any patients. Infact she got Scolded by Dr. Kirti Also. I tried to talk to her but she didn't said anything.

Maan: I don't understand wats wrong with these Sisters. Chalo Armaan I m hanging up nw. Geet is coming. If u comes to anything den do let me know.

Armaan: Sure dude.

Maan hangs up as he saw Geet coming inside his cabin.

Geet: Ya Maan tell me wat r u saying?

Maan notices dat Geet eyes were red. She must have cried a lot in washroom but he have to be normal wid her until he knows d reason behind dis. He knows very well that Geet will not tell herself. He has to find it out by some other way.

Maan: huh..... nothing important Geet we'll discuss it later. Y don't u just go to ur cabin nd rest for sometime by d tym I'll finish wid one of my important Call (he said while looking at his cell phone).

Geet: ok, inform me wen u'll be free.

Maan: ya sure.

Geet left from dere nd maan started walking restlessly in his cabin. He don't know how to figure out Geet's Problem. Suddenly he reminds of Something.

"Vindhya Di" He muttered nd started dialing her no.

Vindhya: Hello!

Maan: Di! Its me Maan.

Vindhya: Maan! Wat a pleasant Surprise! Hw come u called me today?

Maan: Di I need to talk something imp. To u

Vindhya: is Everything ok Maan? Is Geet fine?

Maan: ya Di Geet is perfectly Fine. Actually its related to her only (den he tells her everything happened in Cabin) Di I couldn't understand wats wrong.

Vindhya: I knw Maan, Why is she sad today

Maan: Y di?

Vindhya: Actually Maan today is Geet's Dad Death Anniversary. She considers dis day as d worst day of her life. She was so much Attached to her Dad nd dats d reason y is she sad today.

Maan looks through d glass at Geet who was struggling hard to wipe away her tears nd tries to concentrate on her work.

Vindhya: Maan.... u dere na?

Maan: ya Di! I'll talk to u later. Thanx for telling.

Vindhya: ur welcome Maan. Take care.

Maan hangs up. Now he understands y geet was upset since morning. He has to do something to cheer her up. Suddenly he thought of a plan. He headed towards Geet's cabin. Geet got surprised to see Maan in his cabin.

Geet: Maan, y did u came here? Anything imp.

Maan: ya Geet, actually dere's an urgent meeting wid Mr. Chopra so we have to leave Rite nw. I m waiting for u in d car. Come fast ok.

By saying dis he started heading outside d office. Geet tooks her bag nd started following him. On d way to Downstairs Maan informed Armaan wat he came to know From Vindhya. Nw Armaan also thinking some way to cheer up Shilpa. As soon as Geet sits in d Car Maan started driving. Dey didn't share a word during journey. Suddenly Maan Stops d car near a park. Geet couldn't understand y Maan stops here.

Maan: Wo... Actually Mr. Chopra will be late so I thought instead of waiting somewhere else y not spend sometime in d Park.

Geet Agreed to it nd gets down from d car. Dey both headed towards Park nd sat on d bench. Maan doesn't know from where to start d conversation. Suddenly he saw an Ice-cream Stall.

Maan: ice cream?

Geet: ok. But....

Maan: I know Butter Scotch flavour

Geet: ya.

Maan goes to take d Ice-cream nd Geet was still sitting on d bench. Suddenly she saws a Kid Playing wid his Father nd she remembers her time wen she use to go out wid her Dad. This again brings Tears in her eyes. She was still crying wen Maan came to her. He looked towards d direction where Geet is looking nd he realizes what makes her cry once again.

Maan(to himself): Park me aane ka idea hi bura tha. Ab kya karoon?

Maan: Geet.....

Geet wipes her tears nd looked at him.

Geet: Maan lets go from here. I mean Mr. Chopra must have arrived.

Maan: ya sure.

Dey Both again headed towards car. Nw Maan dnt know where to take her where she feels better suddenly one more place came into his Mind so he started driving towards it.

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In Sanjeevani Shilpa is standing on terrace alone. She needs sometime to be alone to cry so that no one can see her pain but she didn't know that someone is their who cant see her in pain. It was Armaan who was searching her in whole Hospital finally he came to know from a nurse that she has gone towards terrace. He reached their nd saw Shilpa standing over dere. He could feel her pain. He started walking towards her. Shilpa didn't realize dat Armaan is standing behind her.

Armaan: Shilpa......

As soon as Shilpa heard his Voice he quickly wipes away her tears nd brought a smile on her face nd turned towards him.

Shilpa: Armaan! Tum kuch kaam tha. O ha there must be an emergency. Lets go!

Armaan: Shilpa! U were crying?

Shilpa: nahin to. Who said?

Armaan: den wat r u doing at terrace?

Shilpa: oh dat! Actually I was in a bad mood. I m habitual na getting scolded by anyone except Di. Thatswhy. Nw I m fine. Lets Go!

She was about to go towards Door wen Armaan stops her by holding her hand. Shilpa didn't turned back to look at him because she knows that she couldn't able to hide her pain from him. Armaan started walking towards her nd turned her face towards him.

Armaan: Shilpa! U consider me as ur friend?

Shilpa: ya Armaan wat a stupid Question?

Armaan: den y r u trying to hide ur tears nd pain from me?

Shilpa looks at Armaan. She was surprised to know that Armaan can read her pain.

Shilpa: Because I m used to of it Armaan. Hiding my pain from Di, From Mom, from everyone. Because I know if I cry in front of Di then She'll be shattered. After Dad's death she has never let me feel his absence nd if I let her know about my pain to her then she'll blame to herself for it. Nd that I cant see.

Armaan: Shilpa, u can share ur tears nd pain wid me. I'll always be there for u.

As Armaan completes his sentence Shilpa couldn't control herself from stop Crying. She broke into tears. She didn't realize wen she hugs Armaan. Armaan too hugs her to assure her that he'll be always be there for her. They hugged each other for sometime den Shilpa realizes what is she doing. She broke d Hug nd looked at Armaan. Armaan wipes her tears nd asked if she was feeling fine den shall dey go back for their Duties. Shilpa agrees to it nd dey both headed towards their Duties.

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Geet watches Maan Driving towards d Beach. She didn't understand Maan's Behaviour Today so she decided to ask him.

Geet: Maan where were we Going?

Maan: Geet I talked to Mr. Chopra. He'll take some more time to come so I thought to spend some time at Beach. Waise bhi its near to the Venue of meeting.

Geet: ok.

Maan stops d Car nd dey both get down to car nd started heading towards beach nd get themselves Seated on d rock. Geet was looking endlessly to the sea waves. She didntsaid a word nd Maan cant tolerate dis. He gets used of her nonsense Bak-Bak.

Maan: u know Geet..... Wenever I feel low I use to come over here nd watch these waves like u r watching rite nw nd it relaxed me very much.

Geet looked at him.

Geet: so today u r feeling Low?

Maan: wen did I said dat?

Geet: den y u came here?

Maan: Because today u r feeling low nd nw dnt start ur mellowdramatic Dialogues " Nahi Maan aisa nahi hai. bas kaam ka pressure hai isiliye" because I knw whats wrong wid u.

Geet: Maan tumhe kaise pata....

Maan: Geet imp ye nahi hai ki mujhe kaise pata imp yeh hai ki tumne mujhe nahin bataya. Kyun Geet? Cant I stand anywhere in ur life?

Geet: no maan its not like dat.

Maan: den wat?

Geet: Maan actually I didn't want to share my pain wid anyone. After dad's death I had made myself stronger enough to control myself. I was 8 years old wen Dad has passed away nd after dat I never realized what my childhood is. All I know is my responsibilities towards my Family nd dat makes me even more stronger nd I never shared my pain wid anyone nt even wid Vindhya Di to whom I share everything.

Maan: den hw come u sharing it wid me?

Geet (looking towards him): i dont know Maan, but i felt like sharing it wid u.

Maan was listening to her quietly. He cant imagine that geet can talk so maturely. The girl who always use to talk useless is actually a mature girl. She's really different from other girls of her age who just use to talk about fashions, boy friends nd all dat stuff. He wanted to take all her pain away from her.

Maan: Geet, u can share ur pain wid me. Aur waise bhi its not bad if u cry in front of me. Tumhara bak-bak karne ka Stamina kam nahin ho jayega (den looks at her)

Geet reminds of something nd started smiling nd den again started crying. Maan didn't stop her this tym from crying. He wanted her to wipe away all her pain which she has hidden in her heart from so many years so that she'll feel light. He wrapped his arms around her. She hid her face in his chest nd cried. Maan closed her eyes nd holding close to her. He wanted to tell her that she's never be alone. He'll always be there wid her but not a single word came out from his mouth. He knews that his Gesture said everything to her. At that tym it seems dat if dey were the only two peoples that exists. Slowly d sun starts to set but Maan didn't want to let her go from his Embrace. This is d first time wen Geet has shared something close to her heart from him nd he cant let this moment go.

Maan(slowly): Geet, u r not alone. I m wid u always.

Precap:

the beginning of new feelings

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