MaanEet FF: Once Upon A Time... Chapter14-Page125 - Page 33

Originally posted by: Chotii

Uhm... excuse me.. did u say u didnt edit.. sorry for the mistakes???

er.. Jassi.. that was the Best part ever in this entire ff! lol seriously... this has officially become my favvvv chapter!

How adorable are they? right let me tell u my thoughts in order of when they occurred lol
firstly.. I was completely LOL-ing whilst perfectly imagining a super excited Dadi watching the news of Maneet on tv lol - she's one of us!! A full on maneet maniac + i just thought it was a greatttt little touch in the chappie!
Next..
omg even I almost blushed when Maan told geet that she looked beautiful during their dance. Now that was sucha lovely little part in the chappie girly! it was... Sparkling ;D I could picture them perfectly, n gosh they look heavenly - and be it maans actions, his thoughts or his words - he keeps on getting sexier lol
BUT...
HAwww hayyye! he said she didnt even know how to kiss properly what a naughty munda!! lol brilliant finish to their little argument.. but i was like.. omg! did he just say that to her!!

That ending, from geet playing in the snow, to maan letting her know her dress was getting transparent, to geet wearing maans waistcoat, maan being chooo chweet and getting her some tea to geet giving maan a genuine kiss on the cheek and maan doing the same to her... awwwwww sooooooo cuuuuuuuuute!!!! That was magic piled upon magic! That was sooooooo .. Sooooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuute! awwww Jassi, i Loved this part! Of course, I love ur ff to bits its soo much fun but this time round not only was it fun, but totally *dreamy*..! I'm all smiles - you've successfully swept me into Maneetland of Once upon a time.. ;)

Lovvvvvved the update!!! :D keep up the amazing work my lovely!!! i forgot to mention how fantastically written both the last parts have been too..!! Insanely great work hun!!!

xxxxxxxxxxx

Originally posted by: blessednim

awesome luv it 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Thank you sooo much Saz Di!!

I think I shuld start calling u Di

lolzz

I'm cute????

Which angle? But, anyways thanks!!!!

Right when, I wrote Wanted

I remembered you being my partner

for loving Sallu!

OMG!!! We're soooo alike!

17 is my fav number tooo!!

Thank sooo much for liking my update!

Thing will be heating up in shimla??😆

Huh? Last time i checked, it was cold in shimla

lol

you know I finally watched Dabangg!

It was sooooo Awesome!!!

Even though Wanted was better!

It's jsut sooo funny how he dances the whole movie!

And omg! He was sooooo funny in the movie

You know very time he'd call Arbaaz Khan "Makhi"

i'd start ROFLing!

What a funny name

I was calling my younger brother makhi today lol

i watched it once in theatres and then once at

home with my aunt

(the same one who i watch GEET with)

she's like my best friend!

After that, me, my older sis, and my aunt watched parts of Wanted again

lol

and then watched parts of Veer again

and today we gonna watch London Dreamss, and parts of Dabangg

Sallu Fever is on!!!!

Btw

those are my fav movies of his!!!

-Jassi

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ok i'm literally shaking from laughing u have know idea how fat the smile on my face is at the moment streching past ear to ear!!

ok another little random addition to this.. I simply LOVE Veer. That's one of my Fav Salman Khan movies Ever too! Uff I cannot even begin to say anything about it cos I will literally go on forever about it with u.. but anyways.. I dont know if u remember but there was an ff contest in the geet forum a while ago? well anyway.. for the very first time in my 4 years with IF lol I actually wrote a creative piece at the forum. Yes Maneet actually made me do it and I was inspired by.. tan ta naa... Veer. That;s the only kinda ff I've ever written.. II'm gonna post u the link but that doesnt mean u gotta read it at all 😆 but I cant help it Jas! (I dont think its a problem disclosing this either seeing as though the contest is long-over..)

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

OMG!!!

Seriously!!??
Was it really best part!?

WOW!!!! i had no idea!

Everyoen else was saying same thing!

I was actaully having second thoughts on posting it!

Thanks soooooooooo mcuh Saz Di for ur wonderful comments!!

I feel soooooo happy noe and I actually feel liek updating

now so i'll get ur great comments!

Love You!

-Jassi

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Thanks soooo much Punjabi Sister!!! LOL! Can I call you that!?? I enjoyed reading your wonderful comments! I'm happy you took out time to comment on my part I hate when people read and then

don't comment or press like tab!

Thank a ton!

By the way did you watch Ek Kudi Punjab Di

if you did tell me if it's good!

-Jassi

Originally posted by: princess_xaini

hey when r u updating?

Originally posted by: Chotii

OMG!!! I LOVE WANTED AND VEER!! 😆

ok i'm literally shaking from laughing u have know idea how fat the smile on my face is at the moment streching past ear to ear!!

Basically, I've jsut pointed at my screen laughing + saying omg me too like so many times! I lovvved the way he danced throughout the whole movie - be it the 'mera hi jalwa' or anywhere else!! 😆 and about "makhi!" omgggg how Hilari-amafy-ing-ly Hilarious wasss that???!!! No seriously..! thats just toooo funny! Also, I so prefer Sohail over Arbaaz in the movies esp, and esp as Sallu's lil bro onscreen, I always feel Sohail looks better but this time round, i totally felt no one could have looked better than Arbaaz.. his role was of the annoying brother na, so it suited him, as well as it being slightly lovable.. one of the bits i abbbssooolutely loved was near the end.. u know when arbaaz is tied up with the massive gun in his hand, and that mask over his face and sallu's about to shoot him but realises its him.. and screams.. "nayyyy vo makki hai..." dont shoot kinda thing.. that was the only time makki didnt make me laugh but i actually had that lump in my throat as if i needed to scream + cry.. ok, lemme cheer us up abit.. remember when he slaps makhi?? 😆 and omg.. what about that chotu?? - u know.."Bhaiyya ji.. *ishmile!!!!*" LMAO ok i'm gonna keep talking bout the film now lemme shut up! lol

awww man, i'm giving u the tightest *virtual hug* ok!! 😆 (randomly)

and aww Jas! u dont have to call me Di at all! ur my pyaari si little Jassi so i dont mind whether u add the Di or not.. hey i think ur the 1st who'll be calling me Di tho.. awww bless ya lil heart soo cuuuute - and in repsonse to ur question - From ALL angles of ur messages ur cute! 😆 ok! u cant argue with me! 😆

its sooo sweeeeeeet that u n ur aunt are sallu fans and watch geet together awwwwww!! she is super cool for loving them both too ;)

ok another little random addition to this.. I simply LOVE Veer. That's one of my Fav Salman Khan movies Ever too! Uff I cannot even begin to say anything about it cos I will literally go on forever about it with u.. but anyways.. I dont know if u remember but there was an ff contest in the geet forum a while ago? well anyway.. for the very first time in my 4 years with IF lol I actually wrote a creative piece at the forum. Yes Maneet actually made me do it and I was inspired by.. tan ta naa... Veer. That;s the only kinda ff I've ever written.. II'm gonna post u the link but that doesnt mean u gotta read it at all 😆 but I cant help it Jas! (I dont think its a problem disclosing this either seeing as though the contest is long-over..)

Entry No.7 Just Do As I Say

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1475923/geet-ff-contest-voting-last-day

hayyye.. Salman.. and hayyyye maneeeeeeeet!!

Originally posted by: Chotii

Definitely! well.. according to me it defo was! I realllllllllly Loved this part! Like I said.. towards the end it really just became so magical. There were a lot of different elements in this 1 part alone which made it so lovable! I cant believe u had second thoughts bout posting it!!! 😲 I shall reiterate for ya.. its my new fav part of the whole ff.. lets see when u top this one 😉 ur a great writer Jas, plz dont ever doubt that! Love you too - like lots! Jassi ji... *ishmile* 😛 xxxxx

Originally posted by: chubzy

Thank u so much 4 ur update n pm thank u,thank u,thank u 4 a beautiful update plz update soon