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Originally posted by: dimpzz


yea sure u can call me Punjabi sister!
yea....ur FF is soo nyc...tat i hav to take out time n comment on it! :D
nope i haven't seen Ek kudi punjab di.....i don't even noe wt is it?! :P
actually i dunno much of punjabi n stuff......:P
i know itz wierd but i hav not stayed in punjab from d time of my birth.....
so tatz y....

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Navpreet

LOL
No point of calling you Punjabi Sis
but, I'm gonna anyways!
Hey even I wasn't born there and doesn't live there
I was born and live in Canada
I've only went to India 2 times in my life, and I stayed in Punjab
I really like it there!
BTW: i live close to HoshiarPur!!
We're pretty alike
except I keep up to date on Punjabi moviezz as well as Hindi!
'Ek Kudi Punjab Di' is a Punjabi movie
I'm not excited for it cause I don't like the guy in it
but, just wanted to know if i shuld watch it anyways
I luvvv Punjabi songs
Do You?
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Recap:

"Thanks...I really could use some." said Geet. Maan just smiled. Geet leaned forward and kissed Maan's cheek.
"You look cute when you smile." she said, not caring that she just kissed Maan. She didn't regret it at all.
"Wow...I thought I was a Dusht Dhanav." said Maan amused, that Geet just kissed him.
"You are." she said smiling. Maan leaned forward and kissed her cheek.
"You also look cute when you smile." he said and then chuckled at her surprised expression. The guy was done making the tea. Maan went and got it for them. He gave one of the cups to a shivering Geet. She took a sip.
"Mmmmm...Tea never tasted better!" she said. Maan smiled at her cuteness, then drank his tea. They returned the cups.
"Aap dono saath saath bahut ache lagte hain." said the tea guy who was observing the two.
"Thanks!" said Maan. He went back to the car and started driving, wishing the car could go faster.
"Stupid Car!!" yelled Geet. The car jerked a few times then halted to a stop.
"Argh! Now what!?" she asked angrily.
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Once Upon A Time...

Chapter 8



"Argh! Now what!?" she asked angrily. Maan tried starting the car but, it just wouldn't work. Geet was freezing. Her clothes were wet, and icy cold. She was lucky to have Maan's warm coat. She started shivering. Maan looked at her concerned.
"What happened?' he asked checking her forehead. She caught a cold.
"Seriously Geet! Was it necessary for you to go running in the snow?!" he asked angrily.
"Put the coat on properly!" he yelled. She cuddled in his warm coat. Maan tried starting the car again. He was getting tired of trying. He got out and once again, opened the bonnet of the car. he came back in. His tie was loosened, his sleeves were rolled up, and his shirt wasn't tucked in anymore. He sat down, and tried starting the car again, putting the heat higher after seeing Geet shiver some more. The car finally started but, the next second it halted making the wierdest noise ever. Geet sighed.
"Hey look! There's a small cottage there!" said Maan suddenly noticing a cottage. They got out of the car and walked over to the cottage. They entered. It was empty with stacks of hay all over, and some wood.
"Let's just stay in here the rest of the night. I'll fix the car in the morning when there will be some light." said Maan. Geet was still shivering. Maan lit a fire. Geet and Maan sat around the fire. Geet was cuddling in the the coat shivering. Maan took his shirt off. He was wearing a vest underneath.
"I'll go outside, you change into this. You'll get more sick if you sleep in those wet clothes." said Maan.
"No!" said Geet instantly. She wasn't going to wear only his shirt.
"What do mean no?!" he asked angrily.
"I am not wearing your shirt!" she said firmly standing up ready to argue. Maan stood up too.
"Yes you will!" he said taking the step towards her.
"Noooooooo!!!" she said angrily. He held her wrist and pulled her close smashing her against his body.
"Shut up and wear it! Else, I'll make you wear it!" he yelled furiously. He left the cottage slamming the door behind him, hard! Geet stood there dumbstruck. 'What the hell did he just say!' Geet had no choice but to change. But, it definitely did make her feel way better even though she was still shivering. Geet wished the shirt could go lower. I was an inch above her knees. She shyly went to open the door. Maan came in. He tried not to stare at her slender legs but, was tempted to look a few times. They once again sat down around the fire. Geet was again cuddling in his coat. Maan thanked god that she was holding the coat in a way that it covered her legs otherwise, Maan would loose control. Geet got up and stood near the window admiring the snow. Maan who was sitting was tempted to go to Geet. He stood directly behind her.

Geet felt his presence and turned around. Maan was standing there, extremely close. Geet immediately backed away but, couldn't go far as the window was right behind her. She looked downwards. Maan was mesmerized by her beauty. He moved her damp curly hair behind her ear. He put his hand on her cheek caressing it with his thumb. Geet closed her eyes taking the moment in. He caressed her cheekbones and then her eyes. He kissed her cheek passionately. Geet heartbeats raised as Maan shifted his weight onto her leaning closer hiding his face in her hair. Geet leaned against the wall for support. Maan kissed her hair. He used his hand to move her hair to the side brushing his fingers along her neck. Geet shuddered. Maan smiled, his face still in her hair noticing the effect he had on her. His lips dropped down towards the nape of her neck. He kissed the nape of her neck. She gasped silently. Maan brought his face up and looked into her eyes. He slowly leaned forwards and captured her lips in his. Maan kissed her deeply and passionately. Geet mimicked every one of his actions and finally learnt how to kiss. After a long time they parted. They gasped for air. Geet was breathing heavily. She realized what just happened and backed away as much as she could totally embarassed. Maan was angry with himself. How did he always loose control over his actions whenever he's with Geet.
"Geet...Don't start balming me now. You didn't stop me either" said Maan out of the blue, remembering how she slapped him the other day. Geet looked downwards.
"And ya...Don't expect me to say sorry." he said clarifying that he's not going to apologize.
"And you kissed me back too, so you shouldn't be getting angry." he said. He was waiting for her to burst at him but, at the same time telling her reasons not to.
"Oh my god!!! What's your problem Maan Singh Khurana! Did I blame you? No! Did I ask you to apologize? No! And did I get angry? No!! Why the hell can't you just shut up! I'm like trying to avoid this upcoming fight for once but, you just can't keep your mouth shut!" she said really annoyed. Maan looked at her furiously.
"And don't touch me ever again!" she added, as she saw him come towards her.
"And I don't want to either! Miss Touch Me Not!" he lied. She looked at him angrily.
"By the way...Any rules on kissing?" he asked mischieviously. Geet gaped at him.
"Haww! Just shut up! Mr. Dus Sar Waala Raavan!" she said angrily.
"You are such a Jungli Billi!" he replied.
"You're such a Dusht Dhanav!" yelled Geet.
"Chup! Bilkul Chup! Ek aur shabd nahi, warna-" he started saying.
"Warna kya!?" she asked angrily placing her hands on her hips.
"Warna main tumhe touch kardunga!" he yelled angrily.
"Now just shut up and go to sleep!" he said lying down on one of the stacks of hay, leaving Geet to fume. After some time Geet also went and lied down on a stack of hay.

Next morning the sun was out and the snow had melted. It wasn't that cold. Geet had caught a cold because of the last night. Her dress was dry now. She looked around. Maan wasn't there. She looked out the window and saw Maan fixing the car wearing his vest. He was looking so hawt! His muscles were flexing every now and then. Geet's eyes widened everytime his muscles flexed. She stood by the door so no one could come in and started changing. Geet picked up his shirt and coat and walked outside. She had sneezed like 5 times that morning already. She walked out and sneezed again. She went and sat on a rock beside the car yawning.
"Aapki neend puri ho gayi Geetji?" he mocked. It was 11:00. Geet rolled her eyes and threw his coat and shirt at his face. She sneezed twice. Maan looked at her angrily and threw the coat back at her.
"You better wear it!" he ordered. Geet wore it because she was feeling cold. She sat there for 5 minutes waiting patiently.
"Hurry up!" she pleaded impatiently.
"Why don't you just fix it Geet!? I'm sure you'd do a better job than me!" he said sarcastically. Finally, the car powered up. Geet ran and sat on the driver seat and locked the doors.
"What the hell Geet?" he asked angrily.
"I'm driving! And if you don't sit on the passenger seat i'll drive away leaving you here!" she threatened. Maan made the most Sadu face ever, and sat on the passenger seat angrily.
"That's like a good Sadu boss!" she said pulling his cheek. He jerked away her hand.
"Shut up and drive!" he yelled furiously. She started the car and drove as fast as she could. Speed was 160. She turned the radio on with full volume. Maan gave her another one of those 'You'reSuchAPagalJungliBilli' looks. Maan didn't mind. He loved driving fast too. The song 'Shut Up And Drive' came on, coincidentally. Maan and Geet started laughing at the wierd coincidence. Geet honked and cut passed every single car.
"Oye!! Kya kar rahi ho! Pagal ho!?" asked Maan seeing her lousy driving.
"What!!?? I'm just trying to get us to the hotel fast!" she clarified. Maan rolled his eyes.
"More like your just being the Jungli Billi you are!" he corrected.
"Ya, Ya...Whatever!" she said honking and cutting past some more cars. They reached the hotel in like 5 minutes. Geet sighed as she hit the brakes.
"Tum ek dam pagal ho!" he said while getting out.
"Toh??" she said not caring.
"At least we'll get to the meeting now!" she said. They went into the hotel.
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Geet wore a long navy blue sweater. It was full sleeves. She wore black skinny jeans and long black boots. She tied her silky, shiny, and curly hair into a ponytail, leaving out her straight bangs, and a few curly strands of hair. The ponytail was big, curly and upto almost her waist. Maan wore a black shirt, grey tie and grey waistcoat. Maan waited for Geet in the parking lot with a different car. Geet finally came, swinging her black purse behind her. She ran to the car.
"Sorry!! Took me an hour to find a sweater!" she said and sneezed. She was still sick.
"Did you take some medicine?" he asked sitting on the driver seat.
"Yeah." said Geet as she sat in the car. They drove to the building where the last meeting they had to attend was held.
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I sat in the business meeting fiddling with a pen. For once in my life, I actually missed Sasha. I had no one to throw the pen cap at right now, except for the god damn idiot that keeps staring at me dreamily. What was his name again? Oh ya...Bunty Grewal, son of Ranjit Grewal, who they were doing this deal with. Uggh!! I wish Maan sir hadn't stolen all my gum! Oh! How are you all to know? Well, actually Maan sir ended up being a thief! Before we entered the meeting, he grabbed my purse! OMG! He grabbed a girl's purse! No manners at all! He stole all of my gum and returned my purse to me. How rude! I glared at Maan sir who was talking to Mr. Grewal interestedly. Yahan main boredom se mari jaa rahi hoon, aur woh! I sighed and turned around and caught that Bunty idiot stare at me again! I plastered a smile on my face, then looked away.
"Miss Geet, what do you think about this idea?" asked Mr. Grewal. Damn this buddha! Did he really think I was listening to his chappar chappar!? Maan sir, looked at me and raised his eyebrows. He knew, I wasn't listening at all.
"Oh! Uhh...It's great!" I said fake smiling. Maan sir rolled his eyes looking at me. I shot a few daggers at him.
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'It's Great!' She wasn't even listening! What is up with this Bunty idiot! Why is he staring at MY secretary! I looked over at Geet. Her head was lowered as she was looking at some documents in front of her. I turned back to Mr. Grewal, only to find him staring at my Geet! WoahWoahWoah! MY Geet?? What's wrong with me?? He was still staring at Geet with adoring eyes! Dono baap bete pagal hain! I know Geet is gorgeous! But, that doesn't mean they both aankhein phaar phaar kar stare at her! I coughed to get there attention. I coughed again.

"Should I get you some water sir?" asked Geet politely. Okay, she just wants to get lost from here! Oh well, maybe I should let her leave. Maybe then, these two idiots will diver their attention.
"Ya." I said. Geet got up and left the room. Both namoone just stared at the door she just exited.
"So, Mr. Grewal, Do you think we should build this factory in Dehli or Mumbai?" I asked getting his attention. He looked at me finally, and started discussing the project again. Geet entered with some water. She gave it to me. I put my hand on top of her and took it. Her eyes met mine for a fraction of a second and then she went to sit back at her seat.
"Geetji, Mind if I ask you a question?" asked the buddha I felt like murdering right now! How dare he just completely ignore me to start conversation with Geet!?
"No, not at all!" said Geet. Pagal ladki! Why couldn't she say "Yes! Now shut up ,stop staring at me, and never talk to me again!"
"How old are you, and where are you from?" asked the Idiotic Buddha. Why the hell does he want to know!?
"I'm twenty years old, and I'm from Canada. But, why do you ask?" she asked curiously. Buddha totally ignored her question and went on.
"Oh! You know Bunty is just three years older. He's 23!" said the oldie. Is this a business meeting or what!? Geet just nodded.
"You know I was just thinking...That you and Bunty would make a good couple." said the Buddha. Geet looked up instantly. Oye!! Kya kaha isne!!?? Okay! That was more than enough!!
"Really!?" I asked getting up and walking towards Geet. She stood up.
"But, Maan and Geet make a way better couple!" I said angrily. I held Geet's hand and walked out the room.
"Deal is off!" I said before slamming the door shut.
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"Maan sir!!?? What the hell is wrong with you?" asked Geet annoyed.
"Why did you call the deal off? What's your problem?" she asked. I pulled her by her wrist and backed her up against the car.
"Tum ho meri problem Geet! Because of you I can't concentrate on anything else! Because of you I can't control my anger! I can't control my feelings! I get jealous when you talk to someone else! I'm not the same anymore! I'm changing!" he yelled staring into her eyes with intense anger. Geet lowered her eyes not being able to look into his fierce eyes. Geet didn't know what to say.
"I'm Sorry..." she said innocently, not knowing what she's supposed to say in a situation like this. He let go of her and moved back giving her space.
"Don't be..." he said in a way softer voice. They sat in the car.
"By the way...Sorry for touching you...Miss Touch Me Not." said Maan trying to lighten up the atmosphere. Geet glared at him.
"We're going back to Dehli. We don't have to stay another day because the deal has been called off. Go pack your stuff, I'll wait outside your room." he said when they reached the hotel. Geet nodded and went to her room, while Maan went to his. He packed his stuff and went outside Geet's room. Geet opened the door. Maan took her bag, while Geet picked up her purse.
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Precap:
"Sorry...You guys can't go further due to the landslide"

Okay Guys...
I hope it was satisfying long!
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i loved it as always the cottage scene and the meeting scene it makes me feel nostalgia😍awesome part cont soon please!👏👏👏👏
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wonderful update i cant wait the love to blossom soon between Maaneet thanks pm pls cont soonnnnnnnnn

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