MaanEet FF: Once Upon A Time... Chapter14-Page125 - Page 27

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Hey!

Thank you sooooo much!!

You know u really do make me feel my FF is special😳

cause I seriously don't think it's all that good

Thanks soooooo much!

Your comments are giving me strength to update!😆

I'll try updating soon

maybe monday - but i don't want to give u false hopes

that depends if i get less homework!

Thanks again😳

Love You!

-Jassi

glad to noe tat i really do make u feel ur FF is special!
ur welcome for tat.....but i won't take bak my statement...tat ur FF is amazing....n m juz saying it coz itz d truth so b confident enough to feel tat ur FF is rocking sweetie!
ohk.....hope u can update on mon.......
if u get too much homework...mayb both of us could plan on murdering ur teacher who gives u d homework so tat v can get r updates n u will b rid of ur homework :P
hehehe...lol joking.....
will b waiting for d update!
Love u too!
Navpreet

Originally posted by: ayeshaaa.

when are you updating? please updt today!

Originally posted by: dimpzz

glad to noe tat i really do make u feel ur FF is special!
ur welcome for tat.....but i won't take bak my statement...tat ur FF is amazing....n m juz saying it coz itz d truth so b confident enough to feel tat ur FF is rocking sweetie!
ohk.....hope u can update on mon.......
if u get too much homework...mayb both of us could plan on murdering ur teacher who gives u d homework so tat v can get r updates n u will b rid of ur homework :P
hehehe...lol joking.....
will b waiting for d update!
Love u too!
Navpreet

please tryyy! atleast a short one with maaneet scenes only.

Originally posted by: ayeshaaa.

please tryyy! atleast a short one with maaneet scenes only.

I wanna see what happens next..

Recap:
The flight was over. Maan got there bags and they got out of the plane. They had reached Shimla. They were inside the airport. I wasn't cold inside. They were walking. Geet was walking slowly cause of her heels.
"Can you walk any slower!?" asked Maan sarcastically. Geet frowned.
"Ya...Want me to!" she retorted angrily.
"Shut up! And walk faster!" he yelled. She speeded up and nearly slipped, but Maan steadied her by her wrist. Geet blinked and looked into Maan's eyes as he steadied her to make her stand straight.
"Do you not know how to walk! Always stumbling!" he said, and started walking again. Geet pouted and walked faster. She stumbled again because of her heel. Maan sensed that Geet was falling and turned around to catch her by her waist, before she could fall. Geet's one arm was around Maan's neck, and other was just hanging. Maan's one hand was around her waist, and other was on her back. Geet opened her eyes and saw Maan staring at her intensely. Maan pulled her up and let go of her. Geet held on to her lugagge. Maan looked at her angrily.
"Choti bachi ho!? Kya karu!? Tumhara haath pakad kar, tumhe chalna sikhau?!" he asked angrily. Geet frowned. She tried walking.
"Oww!!!" she yelled in pain.
"Kya hua?" asked Maan instantly.
"My ankle!" she said.
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I didn't edit
so sorry for any mistakes!
Once Upon A Time...


Maan sighed. Why was this girl always getting into problems. She looked at him apologetically.
"Sorry...It's not my fault!" Geet said.
"Ya...Ya...Whatever! Just wait here while I put the bags away. I'll be back soon. While then, just don't move!" he said picking up both their bags. Geet nodded. She waited for five minutes. Maan finally came back.
"Do you have a sweater with you or in your bag?" asked Maan.
"Umm...No..." said Geet.
"Geet! This is Shimla. It's cold here! How smart of you to not bring a sweater!" he said angrily. He took off his waistcoat.
"Wear it! It's freezing." he said. She quietly took it.
"Abh chalo!" he said. He watched her struggling to walk. He held out his hand. She hesitated then took it. She hopped with one foot. Everyone was staring at her. Maan looked at her angrily.
"What the hell are you doing?" he asked looking at her wierdly.
"I can't walk! My ankle is twisted!" she said defending herself. Maan sighed and put her hand on his shoulder and snaked his arm around her waist. Geet looked at him. He blinked his eyes in an assuring way. Geet got lost in him. He helped her take little baby steps. Everyone looked at the two in awe. Some reporters spotted them and noticed that the it was 'The Maan Singh Khurana'. They rushed towards him with there cameras.
"Mr. Khurana! Is it true that your next project is in Shimla?" asked one of the reporters.
"Mr. Khurana! Are you dating?" asked a different one. Maan glared at him.
"Mr. Khurana! Who is this girl? Are you two dating?" asked another one.
"Excuse us!" said an angry Maan, and then he shooed away all the reporters.
"Stupid Press!" muttered Geet.
"Exactly!!" agreed Maan. Geet smiled. This was the first time Maan ever agreed with something she said. They got out of the airport. Geet shivered in the cold, even though she had Maan's warm waistcoat. In one second, Geet found herself in Maan's arms. He lifted her up as if she didn't weigh anything. She held on to his shirt as he walked towards the car he ordered. Geet was just staring at Maan. She was starting to feel for Maan. He put her down on the passenger seat, and sat on the driver seat.

They checked in at a hotel. Geet put ointment on her ankle. She could walk properly now. Later on, they attended one of the meetings. The clients were throwing a party that night. Dadi was hapilly watching Maan and Geet at the Airport on the news. Sasha was fuming when she saw the news. Maan and Geet were driving back to the hotel after the meeting.
"Ewww! Business meeting are such a bore! I don't want to go!" she whined.
"I'm sorry Geetji, lekin aapke paas choice nahi hain" he mocked. She glared at him.
"Do I have to go!" she said whining again.
"Yes!' said Maan.
"But, I don't want to!" she started again.
"Geet! Will you please just shut up!" he said irritated. Geet pouted.
"I hate you!" she said frowning.
"Feeling is mutual." he said amused. Geet sat with her arms crossed over her chest.

At like 7:30 Maan was ready wearing a black suit, with a white shirt underneath, looking dashing as usual. he had been waiting out Geet's door for the past 15 minutes. He got tired of knocking and banging, and pestering her to come out. She finally opened her door. She came out wearing a white evening dress. It fit her perfectly showing every curve. The straps were thin. Her beautiful long, silky, curly hair was covering her shoulders. Her bangs were straight and pushed to the side. The dress was long, going down to her feet. She was wearing high heels again. Maan was mesmerized. She was looking like an angel. He wanted to stare at her all day running his fingers through her beautiful hair. He was staring at her. Geet was feeling very conscious.
"Umm...Chale?" she asked.
"Hmm" was all Maan said. They drove to the party in silence. They entered the hall. They met up with the clients.
"You both look great together!" said one of the clients. They were indeed looking like a couple.
"Thanks." said Maan politely. Maan liked it when someone said something about Maan and Geet as a couple. Geet was really bored. She knew no one except for Maan there. she was just following Maan around.
"Will you stop following me." he said getting irritated. Geet frowned.
"But, i don't know anyone else here. Can't we just leave??" she asked.
"No." he said. She got angry and walked away. Someone tapped her shoulder. She turned around.
"Hi!" said a familiar voice. She blinked her eyes, then gasped.
"Oh my god! Sid!!" she said happily. They shared a friendly hug. Maan got furious seeing that. They were chatting constantly. Maan wasn't liking this. He went over to Geet.
"Maan sir...This is Sid! My childhood friend. And Sid, this is my boss." she said. Maan wasn't satisfied. He didn't like the way they were hugging and stuff. He decided to somehow take her attention away from this Sid. geet excused herself to get something to drink. Maan left too after a while. He met up with Geet, and asked for a dance. Geet was surprised.
"Huh??" she said.
"Maine poocha mere saath dance karogi?" he asked again.
"Umm...I'm wearing heels...What if I accidently step on your foot?" she asked innocently looking downwards. He chuckled.
"Don't worry." he said and then took her to the dancefloor. He put his arm around her waist bringing her closer. Geet put her hand on his shoulder and looked downwards at her feet. Maan smiled as she checked on her feet. He instantly twirled her around ten fifteen times, and then pulled her towards himself. Her arm went around his neck and her face was hid in his shoulder. She lifted her face up.
"Why'd you do that?" she asked.
"To show you that you won't step on my foot!" he said amused. She stopped constantly checking on her feet, and blushed a bit. Maan was just out of the world. He didn't think girls blush nowadays.
"Can I tell you something?" he whisepered softly in her ear.
"Ya..." she said.
"You look beautiful." he whispered softly, his lips almost touching her ear. She blushed some more.
"Umm...Thanks." she said quietly.
"Are you bored?" he asked after a while.
"Ya! This party is so boring!" she said hoping they can leave now.
"Okay, let's go." he said.
"Oh my God!!! Thanks soooo much!" she said happily. Maan smiled.

It wasn't that cold outside. They ran to the car to avoid getting sick. Maan turned the heat on. It was a half hour drive back.
"Wow! I can't believe you actually listened to me!" she said and then started saying all this stuff like, she didn't know he knew how to be nice, and he's not being a Dusht Dhanav anymore,a nd othe BakBak.
"If you don't be quiet, we're driving right back to the party!" he said. That shut her up instantly. They were driving on an empty road, when suddenly the car made some wierd noises and stopped.
"Shit! What happened now!" he said in frusturation. Geet sighed. Maan got out to check what's wrong, but there wasn't anything wrong. He came back and tried starting it several times. The heat and everything else worked but it just wouldn't start.
"What the hell! It's also khatara like your other car in Dehli!" she said frusturated. Maan looked at her angrily.
"It is not khatara!" he yelled angry. She rolled her eyes.
"I can see and hear that!" she said sarcastically. She took out her iPhone, which she was in love with.
"Shut up Geet! you know what?! Your phone is khatara! Mine is so much better!" Geet gaped at him. She would not take any insult about her phone!
"How dare you call my phone khatara! It's an iPhone 4!!" she yelled angrily.
"Well mine is a BlackBerry! And it is way way better than yours!" he yelled back.
"No it's not!" she yelled.
"Yes it is!" he yelled.
"You know what!? Everything of yours is garbage!" she said angrily. He looked at her angrily.
"No! Everything of yours is garbage!" he yelled.
"No! Everything of yours is garbage!" she yelled back.
"You know what! Just shut up Geet! Tum sab kuch kharab kar deti ho!" he said angrily. Geet was shocked. He was blaming her!
"You don't even know how to drive! You nearly killed a kid before, and now the car doesn't want to be driven by you!" she said.
"Hello!? What are you talking about! Like seriously! I don't think there is one thing in Khurana Constructions that you didn't almost break!" said Maan.
"Haww!!! Well atleast I know how to drive! You can't even drive properly!" she said angrily.
"Geet! you can't even walk properly!" he retorted.
"You can't even talk properly to your employees! Your such a demon! Always taking your anger out on them!" she said. Maan was getting furious now.
"You shouldn't be talking! You're the one insulting your own boss!" he said.
"So!?" she asked angrily. Maan was angry.
"Geet! you don't even know how to kiss properly!" he yelled. That shut Geet up. He eyes widened when he said that. She couldn't believe he actually said that! Maan chuckled at her expression.
"Kya hua! Chup kaise ho gayi?" he said amused. She didn't answer. He went back to trying to fix the car. Meanwhile, Geet noticed that it was snowing. She smiled and ran outside to play in the snow. Maan called after her but she was running and twirling in the snow, and not listening to Maan. Maan opened his door. It was cold, and she was wearing a sleeveless dress. he couldn't help but gaze at Geet, who was twirling around in the snow, catching snowflakes and watching them melt on her hands. Her hair was damp now and her dress was becoming wet and clung to her. It was white and became see-through around her waist. Maan walked towards her. He pulled her by her wrist and she banged into Maan's chest.
"Geet! Ghaadi mein baitho!" said Maan taking his coat off.
"Why!" she said. She was having so much fun.
"Because if you don't you'll catch a cold! And by the way, your dress is see-through!" he said. Geet looked down and got a quite a shock. She gasped.
"Turn around!" she yelled at Maan. Maan did as she said and took his coat off.
"Pehn lo!" said Maan handing his coat to Geet. Geet didn't take it.
"Geet take it! Else, I'll turn around!" he said angrily. She took it obediently and put it around herself. he held her wrist and made her sit in the car. He opened the bonnet of the car, and started fixing something. He got back into the car. Geet looked at him. Maan tryed starting the car a few times again, and it finally started. It was moving really slowly though, like at speed 30. Geet started shivering because she felt really cold.
"What did I tell you?!" said Maan. Geet looked down. Maan turned the heat higher. There was a Chai-Stand ahead. Maan stopped the car, and got out of the car. Maan told the Chai-wala to make two cups of tea. Geet admired him from inside the car. He fought a lot but he was just too sweet and caring. She looked at him with admiring eyes. He sat in the car while they waited for the guy to make them tea.
"Thanks...I really could use some." said Geet. Maan just smiled. Geet leaned forward and kissed Maan's cheek.
"You look cute when you smile." she said, not caring that she just kissed Maan. She didn't regret it at all.
"Wow...I thought I was a Dusht Dhanav." said Maan amused, that Geet just kissed him.
"You are." she said smiling. Maan leaned forward and kissed her cheek.
"You also look cute when you smile." he said and then chuckled at her surprised expression. The guy was done making the tea. Maan went and got it for them. He gave one of the cups to a shivering Geet. She took a sip.
"Mmmmm...Tea never tasted better!" she said. Maan smiled at her cuteness, then drank his tea. They returned the cups.
"Aap dono saath saath bahut ache lagte hain." said the tea guy who was observing the two.
"Thanks!" said Maan. He went back to the car and started driving, wishing the car could go faster.
"Stupid Car!!" yelled Geet. The car jerked a few times then halted to a stop.
"Argh! Now what!?" she asked angrily.
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Precap:

Car breaks down
MaanEet in cottage
*WinkWink*

OMG!!!
I can't believe I actually got to update!!!!
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-Jassi

Dedications:

Ayeshaaa. Dimpzz Afsha Sireesha Starry_Night

awesome part

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