MaanEet FF: Once Upon A Time... Chapter14-Page125 - Page 18

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Heyy Saz!!

Thanks for finally commenting

Now I can peacefully work on the update lollzz

Btw, Geet ke favourites were pretty much all my favz

and I guess also urs then

I also LOVEE sallu!

I'm finally watching Dabangg today at the theatres!!

Can't Wait :-)

Heard it's really good!

and also can't wait for Anjaana Anjaani!!

I'm soooo happy u liked the update

thanks for ur wondeful comments!!

btw u gave me an idea with ur comments for chapter 3

which u'll see in the chapter 5!

I'm hopefully updating today because i have an off from skool!!

-Jassi

Hey girly!!!
yes defo! so almost all my favs floating around on geets wall!! 😆 i thought they'd b ur favs too 😛

also.. omg I actually watched Dabangg Today!!! I have to say.. Initially, when promos were out.. I was totally surprised with his look and thought.. "oh no, yeh aise kyun lag raha hai??" but then, it totally works in the movie. He's So super funny + some things were a little hottish 😆
ALSO omg.. although I noticed this when I watched the song tere mast do nain earlier (love tht song by the way!) umm yeah.. towards the end Sonakshi wears a white sari, and Salman's in black.. completely reminded me of Maneet from the Kurbaan Hua epi + dance... 😳 😆
I think u'll certainly enjoy it.. it somewhat reminded me of Wanted though I have to say.. + overall thought it was great but Love Wanted more..
anywayyyysss coming back to the ff... 😉 .... "munni badnaam hui" .. I can actually imagine a drunk geet sing this to maan somehow in this ff 😆 Can totally imagine Geet doing that and shocking the hell out of maan, as well as making him drool over her like krazyy which would make him join her dance and what not lol
nay nay, I dont want u to add that into this on request or anything lol i'm just saying I can see it match the personalities of their characters in this ff 😉
LOVE where ur taking this story, keep it up - its ROCKING!!!xxxxx

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

hey awesome update!

absolutely fabulous! can't wait for the next part!

Originally posted by: Starry_night

First of all, thanks for the dedication!

What an amazing update! Fantastic! I enjoyed every bit of it......awesome! Lolz......Geet so loves to irritate Maan......and she also included a chewing gum machine in her design......lmao.......Maan actually praised her designs......and even that Khanna dude liked them......me likes it too! They got stuck in that lift.....lolz.....what followed was so funny and kinda romantic......Maan and Geet fought and Maan kissed her coz she called him gay........lolz......but I really loved the way she reacted to that......she showed Maan that it's not so easy to get her.....cool! Maan ke takkar ki hai.....no wonder Maan has fallen for her. Ooooo......Maan praised her whole-heartedly then......and she was waiting for it......aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai, it seems....lolz. Loved the last bit...her falling on his lap and their getting lost in each other's eyes....while the whole staff was standing there to watch this nazaara.....lolz.....great!!!! Can't wait to read the next part......Maneet getting engaged......must be Dadi's plan....lolz....do continue real soon.

Originally posted by: sharmake11

eautiful update i love it it was funny maaneet talk to each other pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

awesome update

thankz for pm

Thanks and no problem!

Originally posted by: priza

amazing....lovely...I am short of words....when will your next update be?? I have not noticed the frequency of your update, but can you let me know how often you update....

btw thanks for ur pm

Originally posted by: vinithaa

awesome update.............i loved their kiss scene😉i was guessing maan would do such thing😛....anyways plzzzzzz update soon.....cant wait to read more.


------------vinitha

Originally posted by: Chotii

FIRSTLY.. @ THE PRECAP.. OMG NO WAY! THEIR ENGANGEMENT??? So soon?? WOWZAH!!!!
surely has something to do with dadi!! but whatever the reason may be.. am excited to find out for sure!

LOL, are u sure???

btw I myself don't know exactly why there getting engaged, I'm just gonna make sure tehy do hehe

i seee how u got the idea from the comment ;) yay!
am suuper happy u got maan to PROVE to geet that he wasnt gay! loved it! and great timing for the kiss too.. was a little soon in the other chapter and fit perfectly in this one!

You caught it!😆

i lovvvvvved maans line when geet was shocked that he kissed her:
"haan kiya.. PHIRSE KAROON?" OMG lol i love the way they answer eachother, you're awesome when it comes to their bantering - u write it SO fantastically! i thought it was super funny as well as pretty hot ;)

Thanks!!!!😳

and then maans thoughts:

"OMG! Maan! Tu line maar raha tha!?" he thought in his head.

that topped it all off perfectly - absolutely hilarious! i couldnt imagine maan thinking like that../ saying that to himself and its totally funny in this context as it is with maan from the show.. hahaha
SUPER fabulous work!

Thanks you soooo much Saz!

The way u'v portrayed Geet in this is just soo super cute! yes she's mad, but how can we not love her?? lol i really enjoyed the way maan deliberately tried bugging her in the lift this time round in the lift and got his little pay-back ;)
u'v compiled some truly AWESOME ideas together in this update.. it was tons and tons of fun to read! there's just so much 'life' to this ff.. no rona dhona.. just fun - its a Great read every time!!!
Continue sooooooooon!!! =D
xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Originally posted by: Chotii

Hey girly!!!
yes defo! so almost all my favs floating around on geets wall!! 😆 i thought they'd b ur favs too 😛

also.. omg I actually watched Dabangg Today!!! I have to say.. Initially, when promos were out.. I was totally surprised with his look and thought.. "oh no, yeh aise kyun lag raha hai??" but then, it totally works in the movie. He's So super funny + some things were a little hottish 😆
ALSO omg.. although I noticed this when I watched the song tere mast do nain earlier (love tht song by the way!) umm yeah.. towards the end Sonakshi wears a white sari, and Salman's in black.. completely reminded me of Maneet from the Kurbaan Hua epi + dance... 😳 😆
I think u'll certainly enjoy it.. it somewhat reminded me of Wanted though I have to say.. + overall thought it was great but Love Wanted more..
anywayyyysss coming back to the ff... 😉 .... "munni badnaam hui" .. I can actually imagine a drunk geet sing this to maan somehow in this ff 😆 Can totally imagine Geet doing that and shocking the hell out of maan, as well as making him drool over her like krazyy which would make him join her dance and what not lol
nay nay, I dont want u to add that into this on request or anything lol i'm just saying I can see it match the personalities of their characters in this ff 😉
LOVE where ur taking this story, keep it up - its ROCKING!!!xxxxx

love it............so fab