MaanEet FF: Once Upon A Time... Chapter14-Page125

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Mina

@Mina H

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

res.. OMG OMG OMG dat was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo azaming👏👏👏👏👏👏

i just love the way geet talks to maan... as she is her wife/gf or sumthing 😉

anways jassi u deserve 5stars for ur update ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 😆

i just loved the part where maan proves himself he is nt gay, dat was sooo funni and cute of him 😆😆

reali adorade da part where maan kisses her wid passion and geet cant reply back as she doesnt nw how to kiss 😳

i was thinking mayb in the cuming part maan could diss geet saying that u dont even nw how to kiss properly, and geet just to prove him... kisses him again!!! (ur choice if u wana use it nt)😳

nways i think maaneet will get enganed cuz ever1 has seen geet sitting in his lap... and plus dadi wanted geet to be her bahu wen she met her! 😆

no clue how ever1 reached infornt of thier elevator door... bt im sure u will tell by today wen u update again... RITE?!!! 😃😆😉

and yes im sori... i did fall asleep, was reali tried after packing and all... nways i mite put up my update today... so u must read and comment it... i will be wait for ur reply! 🤗

Edited by Mina H - 14 years ago

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Sana

@Vintagepeach

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#162

owsme update👏 nd continue soon

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Jassi

@--jassi--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: princess_xaini
owsme update👏 nd continue soon

Thanks!!!

-Jassi

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

hey awesome update!

absolutely fabulous! can't wait for the next part!

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

First of all, thanks for the dedication!

What an amazing update! Fantastic! I enjoyed every bit of it......awesome! Lolz......Geet so loves to irritate Maan......and she also included a chewing gum machine in her design......lmao.......Maan actually praised her designs......and even that Khanna dude liked them......me likes it too! They got stuck in that lift.....lolz.....what followed was so funny and kinda romantic......Maan and Geet fought and Maan kissed her coz she called him gay........lolz......but I really loved the way she reacted to that......she showed Maan that it's not so easy to get her.....cool! Maan ke takkar ki hai.....no wonder Maan has fallen for her. Ooooo......Maan praised her whole-heartedly then......and she was waiting for it......aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai, it seems....lolz. Loved the last bit...her falling on his lap and their getting lost in each other's eyes....while the whole staff was standing there to watch this nazaara.....lolz.....great!!!! Can't wait to read the next part......Maneet getting engaged......must be Dadi's plan....lolz....do continue real soon.

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known

@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

eautiful update i love it it was funny maaneet talk to each other pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn

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priza

@priza

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#167

amazing....lovely...I am short of words....when will your next update be?? I have not noticed the frequency of your update, but can you let me know how often you update....

btw thanks for ur pm

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maanmishti

@maanmishti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

awesome update.............i loved their kiss scene😉i was guessing maan would do such thing😛....anyways plzzzzzz update soon.....cant wait to read more.

------------vinitha

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Saz

@Chotii

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#169

FIRSTLY.. @ THE PRECAP.. OMG NO WAY! THEIR ENGANGEMENT??? So soon?? WOWZAH!!!!
surely has something to do with dadi!! but whatever the reason may be.. am excited to find out for sure!

i seee how u got the idea from the comment ;) yay!
am suuper happy u got maan to PROVE to geet that he wasnt gay! loved it! and great timing for the kiss too.. was a little soon in the other chapter and fit perfectly in this one!
i lovvvvvved maans line when geet was shocked that he kissed her:
"haan kiya.. PHIRSE KAROON?" OMG lol i love the way they answer eachother, you're awesome when it comes to their bantering - u write it SO fantastically! i thought it was super funny as well as pretty hot ;)
and then maans thoughts:

"OMG! Maan! Tu line maar raha tha!?" he thought in his head.

that topped it all off perfectly - absolutely hilarious! i couldnt imagine maan thinking like that../ saying that to himself and its totally funny in this context as it is with maan from the show.. hahaha
SUPER fabulous work!

The way u'v portrayed Geet in this is just soo super cute! yes she's mad, but how can we not love her?? lol i really enjoyed the way maan deliberately tried bugging her in the lift this time round in the lift and got his little pay-back ;)
u'v compiled some truly AWESOME ideas together in this update.. it was tons and tons of fun to read! there's just so much 'life' to this ff.. no rona dhona.. just fun - its a Great read every time!!!
Continue sooooooooon!!! =D
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