MN FF - Pride and Prejudice (Upd - Pg.48) 1/12 ❤️

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#301

thanks for the update Kanky it was simply wonderful update happy nupur thinking good for mayank thanks 4 d pm

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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#302

heyy kanky

Awesom update as usual....beautifully written

i loved it

do continue soon

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#303

omg wow
i just love this
so cool
great part
thanks for the pm

love
pooja

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#304

Kanky, I am very angry with you, you should have written it the way you wanted it to be, and not create a mess. You really should've made it the way you wanted it. But it was your decision, and I can't do anything about it.

The part in general was obviously well written as usual. But the whole story baseline makes me a little confused. The part, however, was nicely written and the Nupur-Tamanna scene was the best, especially what Tamanna said in it.

Anyways continue soon Kanky. Take care

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#305

beautiful! she's thinking good of mayank.. well sometimes you just cant help it..lol

wonder why mayank didnt leave..not that i'm complaining..lol

continue soon

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Alisha2887

@Alisha2887

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#306

Brilliant update Kanky.

Please continue soon and thanks for the pm.

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#307

hiii

awesome update

loved it

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#308

*Edited*

Kanks 🤗

Ok, so yes I can see that you've deviated and quite a lot this time too 😆

But it's ok. I can understand that you've had enough of FFs now and wanna take a break from them.

The part in particular was very well written as usual. So, the end was quite amazing, Mayank at her door. And I simply loved the conversation between Nupur and Tamanna it was really sweet yet defining.

You write brilliantly well sweety. Keep it up always.

Love

Daania

Edited by -Daania- - 14 years ago