MN FF - Pride and Prejudice (Upd - Pg.48) 1/12 ❤️

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Beet

@Beet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#281

Kanks 🤗

Ahh, you'll be ending this soon? =(( But why sweets? I love this FF of yours!

The update was so fabulous! The very starting line was just so beautfiully written. And the whole update was just amazing! Especially the little moments between MN!

Aww, the converstaion between Nupur and her Dad was just too sweet. Ooh, so a proposal eh ? 😉

Fabulous update Kanks! I just love your writing style <3

Continue soon

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#282

omg just read this.. so nupur use to like armaan but he died? and now she feels attracted to mayank but doesnt wanna go too close cuz she's scared? is that it.. i wonder why samrat left.. this is an interesting story and cant wait to read more of it. please add me to the pm list:D

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#283

awesome update

loved it

what a cliffcanger

cant wait 2 read more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#284

Hey Kanky! 🤗

Well there was one paragraph that really confused me:

At first Nupur could not frame the right sentence to answer but finally she replied in a yes. 'I am sure the gentleman is liked in the household, is he?' he continued.

'Maasi definitely likes him, Gunjan does that too. I am not sure about Dia, though.' She answered. His expression to this evidently showed his urge to come to know if she liked him too.

'And to me, he seems quite much of a vain man. Though, when he wishes to ' his vanity takes the back seat out the blue,' she declared. 'What about you?'

I think it's because the way you use words and how the sentences were just really made my head spin. Just wanted to point that out to you. =)

And don't let the less readership discourage you. Write as much as you want, because I know how much you love Pride and Prejudice, so make it how you want it to, and don't let anything discourage you