FF: You & I...Collide Part13 pg145 July 27

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@Oblivion007

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Oh dear lord jazz!!!that was a freakingly mind blowing and fantabulous update.i really can't wait for the next part bt wht to do,u need to prep for ur job.bt none the less,ths is one freakishly awesome ff which is driving me crazy in anticipation as to wht will happen next in it.really i'm soo worried and eagerly want to know wht made maan to marry another girl and wht is the story behind naina's condition bt,u need to make these two soul happy as they seem so much worn out with their job and lyf as if they themselves had opted for ths lyf as they're nt in their dear one's company.
Really,honey i am soo much looking forward to the ff,as ur writing style and the frequent elaboration on diff med terms make the read more and more interesting for me as i'm also a fan of medicine,jst luv anythng related to medicine.currently,i'm at my final year before completing my graduation on medicine.so,u can guess,how much frevolously,i'm intimidated by ur writing.
Bt,u certainly don't need to compromise with ur preferences,stay cool and pls cont giving such mindblowing stories:D(if possible pls post the next installment a little,juusstt a little early):p

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

wow.. waiting for the interaction..

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613528

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

The update was awesome.

So Maan and Geet have finally met, yay!

Is Maan really marries or is NT lying? but why would she lie...hmmm...

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Alisha

@luv angel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Amazinggg!!
Continue soon and thanks for the pm
Alishaa

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Nanthini

@Nanthini9

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

So Maan did marry? I was hoping he didn't :( ahh will wait for ur update :)

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

So they literally 'collided'!! Well well...fabulously written as usual...Can't wait to read more😊

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

Why do I feel , this 'baby - sister' , maybe , was responsible for Geet & Maan's present relationship status ; directly or indirectly ??? 🤔 Just a wild guess ; don't mind me , my bad 😆

Last scene Geet & Maan face - to - face ⭐️

Loved the update ...

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#168

NT is the cause for pain in between Maaneet ryt

The past was sweetest

Loved Maan n Nt's relation

Maaneet met

Lets c how will Geet say him abt NT

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#169

lovely update

pls cont soonnn

thanks pm

thank yu dear

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LD-Radha

@LD-Radha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#170

Sigh...here we go...again...lol.

- Ok first of all, I have to tell you that I pressed the like button before I even started reading. I dont know why (pffttt...like I usually do!) but it just felt like the right thing to do.

- OMG...the rusted dagger part and how she felt like she was going to fall apart but she couldn't...that was AMAZING.

- I love hearing Dr. Handa! It also just seems right to me. Geet and helping people...I mean.

- "He loved you too," Naina said softly.

Geet froze with her hand on the door knob, her back to Naina. A cold smile played on her lips as her eyes stung with tears.

"Not as much as he loved you," she said.

JAZ, that was AWESOME! That was BEAUTIFUL! That was...visual! My god.

- And the part how she wasnt going to do again what she hadnt done in years - cry over MSK. Wow, I love that part because even without knowing the story completely, I get it. And because that kind of fits in with her character from the show as well.

- Mendel and his peas!!! Haha...biology class...good times. Well, not really but hey! It was something I could relate to which always makes me happy and more into the story. If that makes any sense.

- ''Where exactly was 'over here' and how the hell was he supposed to know where it was?''

HAHA MSK...

- Its just a rabbit and its going to eat me! I think I was laughing just as hard as MSK. Partly because of how ridiculous it sounded to be scared of a rabbit and partly because I remembered my own ridiculous animal fears too.

- AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What an absolutely ADORABLE AND SWEET bro and sis moment! I have always read sweet Maaneet moments but that is just one unique moment that really touched my heart. So kudos to you for that. Makes me miss my bros...well they're my cousins but to me they'll always be my bros and to them, I'm their little sister :D

- I find it interesting that the most distinct detail you wrote about MSK when Geet sees him is his choco brown eyes. I'm not saying that in a good or bad way...I just find it interesting.

- His heart began to race!!!! I LOVE that. I love that its not only Geet that gets affected...

- She falls...yup...looking good Jaz.

BRAVO JAZ. I'm looking forward to your next update and OMG...I can't wait to see what happens next!! :D Love you!