FF: You & I...Collide Part13 pg145 July 27

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Isha

@JilyPotter

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

YAY!!!!! it is updated!!!

thanks for the PM...

The beginning is very touchy, the emotion and suppressed ones really make you feel depressed...

the resentment and love mixed with anger and desire. he loved you more, killed me.

It made me think that Geet's love wasnt enough or something...so sad...

and than Maan proved it by jumping on a plane and going to meet his little sister...

however the flashback was utterly sweet. The cuteness of the characters...An older brother and ubber protective...Most definitely know that feeling.

Mendel and his peas...is in the middle school

the bunny was exceptionally wonderful...i found that cute and touching...loved it

Geet and Maan collide...so happy and kind of scared...Hope all goes well...cause, well, things can go array..

and i LOVED THE STANZA at the end!!!!!!!!!!!!! TO GOOD!!!!!!

Thanks for the amazing update...LOVED it to pieces.!!!

U ARE FANTASTIC

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anks_ams

@anks_ams

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

wow. just mindblowing. loved it jas:)

waiting for the next one eagerly:)

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@roseinbloom

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

Wowww! So Naina and Maan had a seriously strong brother-sister bond! He is such a caring and protective older brother and she seems really possessive (well before she did .. I still wonder what happened that made them drift so apart that something this horrid was possible to happen to Naina) ... but why do I feel this is the reason Maaneet had problems?

I mean especially after Geet's He loved you more line to Naina .. really interesting!

And OH GOSH you like LOVE to leave us at the most excruciating cliffhangers! Yeesh 😆 Now I shall dream about what shall happen next till you actually update .. LOL!

Awesome update 😃

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heermeher

@heermeher

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Posted: 14 years ago

#154

i just came across ur ff luv every bit of it

r u bye chance a medical student becoz u explain the situation very nicely

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

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Posted: 14 years ago

#155

Thanks for the PM...

This was a short update 😆 but a an awesome one...

You left it at a point of "SIGH FOR MORE"

What went wrong with Maneet ??

A big question?

who is responsible Maan or Geet or somebody else?

What Geet said "Maan loved Naina" it means he believed or trusted Naina more than Geet...Does that mean is she she one who might be the reason for Maneet's separation...

Karma for Naina

lot of questions about these characters...

update soon.