'The Innocence' -FF -updated(7) pg 27

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Crazyy_Fan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#161

⭐️nice update. thanx for d pm. cont soon. tc bye.

Luv_Sakshi😊

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Tasneem

@kooLgrl786

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Posted: 15 years ago

#162

@hiba....inshallah hehe! atleast u gotto wait 4 more 5 parts.....i estimate!!

@yashu n sakshi....thnx grls!!

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her_story

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Posted: 15 years ago

#163

loved ur updates dear....sorry 4 nt commentin 4 long...was kinda inactive...a bit busy with sooo many activities in colg...a tech-fest is goin on here this week and next week v hav our arts fest...these r the last events we'll be organizing in d collge so v trying to make it grant...cant miss any of it as its my last yr in colg...so i may nt be available 4 commenting often....but love ur ff dear...🤗

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Tasneem

@kooLgrl786

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Posted: 15 years ago

#164

awww...harshu!! thnx 4 readin!!!

np take ur own tym.......comment a big 1 wenevr u get tym sweetz!!

xxxx

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tanu

@Armu4eva

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Posted: 15 years ago

#165

Eh lo ji...aab yeh Suhani...ko kya problem hai...!! Moi want vik n tina ..!!

Great update dear..!! Very well written...👏👏👏👏

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Ayesha

@notfadedaway

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Posted: 15 years ago

#166

Amazing! ;) add me to ur pm list! :D thankyou.

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Eva Shah

@maanujaanu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#167

yr updates r gr8 plzzz continue

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Tasneem

@kooLgrl786

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Posted: 14 years ago

#168

Extremely Sorry 4 bieng late agn! 😳

Part 6

Aftr hearing Vikrams name Anji turns towards Suhani n strts glaring at her then wid all anger jst gives d phn 2 Suhani.

Anji: ye le Vikram ka call hai!
Suhani: haa di...

Anji turns n leaves d room

Suhani: hie!
Vikram: oops! Was tat ur sis Anji?
Suhani: ya it was her.
Vikram: oh god! Isnt it a probz 4 u?
Suhani: actualy no n nyways she left.
Vikram: ohk. Ari8 i jst wantd u 2 cum wid me 4 a cup of coffee if u dnt mind.
Suhani: hhmmm....ookkk.
Vikram: oh gr8 dn shud i pik u up at 6?
Suhani: ari8 c u dn.
Vikram: ok bye pretty face.
Suhani: bye.

Suhani hangs up d phn n turns behind 2 c Anji jst standing ova thr staring at her as if she was waiting 4 her 2 keep d phn.
Anji cums closer.

Anji: so wud u lyk 2 xplain wats going on?
Suhani: woh di woh me or woh Vik woh...
Anji: kya woh woh..i knw he askd u 2 meet or sumting so plz temme wats d matter?
Suhani: woh di kya hena woh Vikram askd me 2 go wid him 4 jst a coffee.
Anji: ahha thr v go. N u goin wid him? Chakkar kya he, u r nt usualy d out going types.
Suhani: actualy di woh Vikram hena mjhe acha lagta he. Hez so sweet n cute na? N its jst a coffee na!
Anji: c Suhani m not ur enemy, m ur sis n its my duty 2 warn u. Its jst tat i dnt want u 2 fall into ny kinda trouble.
Suhani: i knw di. I wont let u down :)
So....i can go?
Anji: *luks at suhani* arri8 *smiles n hugs her*

Its 5:45 on d clock. Suhani is all set 2 go out wid Vikram.
In 10mins Vikram cals her n tels her 2 get down.
Suhani n Vikram reaches d coffee shop n r seated on a table.

Vikram: so temme gorgeous wat u wud lyk 2 hav?
Suhani: nythin u wud lyk 2 hav.

-Scene Flips-

On d othr side Tina is liein on her bed n has lots of hw 2 do bt is unable 2 work on it as she cnt stop thinking abt Vikram and everythin about him....

-Scene Flips-

Vikram: ok. 2 capicino plz.
So hw was ur day?

-Scene Flips-

Tina is jst remembring her moments wid Vikram, she can remembr his deep brown eyez, his fit body n arms in which she wants 2 get lost n 4gt all her pain n fear, she jst cnt get ova d tot of bieng wid him. All kinds of emotions r flowing thru her n shez gettin goosebumps thinking abt him, she was having a feeling lyk her every hair, every nerve, every part of her body was jst wanting Vikram.....

-Scene Flips-

Suhani:hmm... It was gud. U temme?
Vikram: mm gud 2. Nyways lets nt b so formal.
Wud lyk 2 tel u 1 thing tat... Since d day iv seen u, i cudnt stop thinkin abt u
havin a diff feelin abt u...

-Scene Flips-

Tina is confused y she cnt stop thinking abt him n wats so special abt him tat makes her smile evrytym she thinks of him. She is unable to let go his tots as different emotions r conflicting deep inside.....
Tina knws vry well tat dis sumthin rely diff n she cnt stop askin herself Questions to which she got no ans..

-Scene Flips-

Suhani: hmmm... I rely dnno wat u xactly u mean.
Vikram: its jst tat i dnt want u think m fast or sumthing but

-Scene Flips-

Wat r dese feelings rushing?
Wat cud dis b?
Is dis....?

-Scene Flips-

Vikram: I LOVE YOU Suhani...!

-Scene Flips-

Tina answers herself.....
LOVE?

I srsly do

yes dis is Love...im in LOVE wid u Vikram......

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Mariam Ahmed

@sweet-and-cute

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Posted: 14 years ago

#169

joor ka jhatka haiiiiiiiiiii joro se lagaa.!!!!..listen wife of bunty ji......app har kam main bohot eee mahir hain..hum apkoo kya bataii..!!!muaah.....cont soon..!!..anddd hun bato bato per vanish math hojanaa..okey!!!..