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Posted: 15 years ago
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interesting ff do pm me
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Great starting. Looking forward to it.😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow...this is gonna b a fun one..!! Very excited to read..!!
n Rinki.....welcome back.. 🤗
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nice one!loved it..was differently written...👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely

bst of luck for ff

and thanx for pm

do continue its mindblowing

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chinki...:D lazy gal 😆....Character sketch toh de diya ab ud kab degi huh?😆😃 jaldi de!😔 cant wait no...😛
Awesum character sketch...seems realistic..:D hope the story goes realistic too😆 Well, i know it will...since its my chikni jaan 🤗
Muah continue...😊

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Update #1




" Rockstar, Baby you are the one ooh ooh! "

Jessica - Yeaah I am the rockstar 8) *half awake*

Jessica's mom's name was Veronica. Veronica was a fun person 😉Jessica loved her with all her heart but for one thing Jessy was always sad. That was her dad. Her dad had left her mother and her when she was 6. She was quite a lot attached to him but after that incident she had erased all the feelings and emotions for him out of her mind. But there was this one secret that Jessica's mother was going to disclose on Jessica's 18th birthday. A secret, which was between her father and mother was going to be now between the three of them.

Veronica - Babyy come down, have your breakfast honey :) Today is the first day in your High School. I hope you dont wanna be late today until and unless your addicted to your movie magazine. Oh god this girl, I tell you. What the hell does she find in watching these actors shirtless?

Jessy - Oh mom, your 40+. I'm still 17. Gosh mom, they are so hot 😳 You wont understand *gives a kiss on her moms cheeks*

Veronica - Yeah right.

Jessy - So whats in breakfast?

Veronica - JEssy, today is your fathers 11th death anniversary. I hope you understand and..

Jessy - Please mom, I dont wannna listen about that man in this house. I dont consider him as my father so I hope you dont consider him as my dad too. If he loved me and you, he would have not left us like this. Go to hell with him.

Veronica - Jessy, mind your language. On your 18th B'day.. I will tell something your dad wanted me to tell you. Never talk about your dad in that language in front of me.

Jessy - You mean secret? Whatever. I'm leaving for school now. *leaves*

- Veronica starts crying and plays the piano since her husband Peter played the Piano everyday.-

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Jessy - God, so this is my so called supposed to be the best school in NY. Hmm, doesnt look bad though whatever. 😆

- All of a sudden a boy bumps into her -

Boy - Heey oooo new girl eh? new girl = pretty 😆

Jessy - Excuse me?

Boy - Oh hi, am John. & you are?

Jessy - um jessy.

John - So jessy, let me introduce you to all the people of the college ;)

Jessy - He talks as if he knows the whole college :| Suckerrr.

John - Did you just something babe?

Jessy - Babe? :O um call me Jessica. Or jessy or never mind.

They go to the canteen.

In the canteen were some *supposed-to-be-cool-dudes*

They were Ashley, Miranda, Sean & Ryan.

Ashley was supposed to be the most hottest girl in the school, she was but um she was stupid.

Jessy - um hey guys.

Ashley - *stares at jessy* who's this joe? i mean john.

John - Hey babe *hugs Ashley* this is the new chick in school. i mea student 😳

Jessy - Excuse me? Do you like call every girl babe? 🤣 & chick? Sorry, I'm not a chicken :D She calls him an ass in mind 😆

John - Attitude huh.. I like it :P

Everyone says hi to jessy.

Sean - Hey Jessy, uum we've got this like um we are hanging out tomorrow, so you'd like to come? :)

Miranda - oh shit what is he doing? *mumbles miranda* um no jessy wont like it.. she's new, and everyones pretty old? So..um i hope u get me.

Jessy - *stupid girl* um no miranda, ill love to come 😆

Jessy didn't like the girls and guys over there. She'd hope she could be friends with them soon so that she could at least die in peace. She knew she would die in this place like hell but if no one was her friend she'd die worse 😆




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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowwwwwwwww jsy awesmmmmmm i m loving it😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing really nice 😃 thnx for the pm
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Loved it Pari...Thanx for the PM!!!!😳

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