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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran255

Oh plz continue
their is nothing left in Dmg
but i just adore ur FF

dont worry Kiran

im not endin it anymore...infact the part is just comin up😛
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NOORYA LOVE IT 🤗

LOVE❤️ UR FF....& PLZZZ KEEP CONTINUE MAKING FF ON SR.....👍🏼
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u must continue as CVs hav already losted,so we can cheer ourselves by reding the next version of this gr8 FF
Edited by payyal - 15 years ago
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hey all😛

yesterday i asked a very important question and
tank u for answerin😊
so as lot of u want me to continu
with this FF so here i am with the new part😆
and JATIN im really sorry yaar
i didnt knew u were waitin for
it yesterday after the GREAT EPI🤢
~Tum Mile~

PART 7

Sid entered the children ward and the kids were playin all together runnin everywhere.

Usually sid don't mind it but today his mood was off so it was annoyin him…he tried first to calm them but they did not listen to him so he lost patience

Sid: BASS! (all of them stopped) dekho tum sab khel rahe ho mujhe iss se koi problem nahin hai…lekin itna chor machaoge tho dr kirti aayegi aur sab ko punishment degi…toda araam se khelo

Chottu: sid bhaya app bhi humare saath khelo naa

Sid: nahin…abhi mujhe kam hai…tum log khelo (n he headed toward tam) kaisi ho? (checkin her fever n her tension)

Tam: main theek hoon

Sid: kal raat ko tabyat theek thi?

Tam: BF main theek hoon…par tumhe kya hua hai?

Sid: kuch bhi tho nahin mujhe kya hua hai?

Tam: tho phir itne sad kyun ho? naa theek se baat karte ho aur naa hi smile karte ho…

Sid: tamana…im fine

Tam: BF mujhe tumse baat karni hai…baitho yahan

Sid: abhi nahin mujhe kam hai hum baad mein…

Tam: its very serious BF (sid give up n sits on the chair)

Sid: kya hua?

Tam: mujhe kuch nahin…par tujhe hua hai

Sid: kya?

Tam: arre voh tho tum bataoge naa!

Sid: pata nahin……voh aaj riddhima ko kisis ko yaad karte hue roote hue dekha tho…

Tam: tho tujhe bura laag raha hai hain naa?

Sid: ab voh meri dost hai tho mujhe bura lagega naa

Tam: agar tum riddhima ko khush dekhna chahte ho tho uski life mein naayi yaadein banao

Sid: matlab?

Tam: arre stupid!...matlab tumhe riddhima ke saath ziada time spend karna chahiye…uske liye naayi yaadein banana chaiye taaki unko smile kar ke yaad kare aur slowly voh old sad memories ko bhool jaaye…samjhe? (sid smiles n nods)

***

A nurse stops sid in the corridor n ask him to check some files. While checkin them sid hears someone callin riddhima so he looks up n saw her smiling talking to a nurse…he keeps lookin at her slowly smiling…she didn't saw sid and goes to her cabin and he was still smiling…n when he gains back his sense he gets shocked n leaves from there givin the file to the nurse.

He rushes to the cafeteria n orders a coffee. The gang was there also so he joins them.

Yuvi: kya hua sid? Tu itna daara hua kyun hai?

Sid: nahin..nahin tho…im fine

Jp: arre sid bhaya riddhimaji kahan hai?

Sid: arre mujhe kya pata riddhima kahan hai? Jab dekho har koi mujhse riddhima ke bare mein baat karta rehta hai…(all of them look confuse seein sid's reaction)

Raj: gussa kyun ho rahe ho…jp tho sirf iss liye pooch raha hai kyunki tum dono dost jo baan gaaye ho…

Sid: haan…dost hai tho…tho iska matlab yeh nahin ki hum humesha saath hain…

Sue: acha yeh chodo…tamana ki tabyat kaisi hai?

Sid: theek hai abhi…aur hum jald treatment shuru karne vaale hain…

Naina: chalo acha hai tum yeh case riddhima ke saath handle kar rahe ho…tum dono ki dosti bhi hui aur upar se tum dono saath mein……(sid cuts her)

Sid: ache dikhte hain…right? Akhri baar bol raha hoon…we are only friends! Im sure tamana ne tum sab ko kaha hai riddhima ke bare baat karne ko…abhi dekhta hoon usse (sayin this he leaves from there once again confusin all of them)

Naina: main tho yeh nahin bolne vaali thi…isse kya hua hai?

Raj: I think voh zaroorat se ziada coffee peeta hai…

***

Raj was in locker room thinking about suvarna n hw to become her friend…not because he liked her but because it was necessary for his plan…

Raj: mujhe kisi bhi tarah suvarna se dosti karni padegi…agar voh meri jhal mein phas gaayi tho meri lottery lag jaayegi…jitney paise udhar liya hoon voh sab lauta dounga aur mere saare tension khatam…(just then sue enters the locker room n gets annoyed seein raj) hi…(she didn't respond n just went to her locker n when she closed it she found him standin)

Sue: what?

Raj: tumhari problem kya hai mujhse?...i mean kya maine kuch galat kiya hai ya kuch galat kaha hai tumse jo tum mujhse itna nafrat karti ho?

Sue: hum life mein sab ko like nahin kar sakte…

Raj: haan…lekin tum mujhe janti kahan ho? ek baar jaan logi shayad pasand bhi karogi…

Sue: excuse me…lekin naa hi mujhe tumhe jaan ne mein koi interest hai aur naa hi pasand karne mein…(raj wanted to reply back but just then yuvi n naina enter the locker room n saw them)

Naina: hey guys!...kya baatein chal rahi hai? (raj looks at her)

Raj: kuch nahin naina…bas…suvarna ki likes n dislikes ke bare mein baat kar rahe the…

Naina: aur kuch pata chala?

Raj: well…abhi tak tho pata chala hai ki suvarna ko logon ko jaan ne se pehle judge karna pasand hai…aur logon se dosti karna iski best quality nahin hai (sue looks at him with anger)

Yuvi : yeh bhi ho sakta hai ki jo sue se dosti karna chahta hai voh usse pasand naa ho (n he winks at sue who smiles)

Raj: tab hi tho main kehta hoon ki usse logon ko jaldi judge karna acha lagta hai……anyways…main chalta hoon…bye naina (n he left)

Sue: gosh I hate that guy!

Naina: sue…raj is a nice guy tum…

Sue: c'mon naina…uske bare mein baat mat kar…anyways main bhi chalti hoon I need to relax…see ya (she also left)

Naina: yuvi mujhe bhi jaana hai…aaj papa mera jaldi wait kar rahe hain

Yuvi: yeh tumhare papa humari love story mein ghabbar baan ke kyun aaye hain? Voh wapis Gujraat kyun nahin jaate? (naina hits him on his arm)

Naina: yuvi!...papa ke bare mein kuch galat mat bol !...aur tum yeh socho ki papa ka humare zindagi mein hona humare pyaar ka ek test hain jisko hume face karna hai…

Yuvi: agar aisi baat hai tho tumhare papa kya…poora Gujraat bhi koshish kare tho mujhse meri naina ko door nahin kar paayega…(naina smiles n hugs him)

Naina: I love u yuvi

Yuvi smiles: I love u too…

***

Riddhima was waitin for an auto near sanjeevaani n sid passes by his car n sein her he stopped. He got out of his car n goes toward her

Sid: riddhima? Tum kisi ka wait ka rahi ho?

Ridz: nahin…main bas riksha ki wait kar rahi hoon

Sid: riksha?…chalo naa main tumhe drop karta hoon

Ridz: its ok main chali jaoungi……

Sid: c'mon riddhima…main drop karta hoon…kab tak wait karogi

Ridz smiles: ok

Finaly she agrees n they get in the car. On the way ridz was calm not sayin anything and sid was feelin a sort of awkwardness.

Sid: tum subah…gadi se nahin aayi thi?

Ridz looks at him: nahin…auto se aayi thi

Sid: oh yeah I forgot…tumhe car se aana ziada pasand nahin hai

Ridz: nahin aisi koi baat nahin hai…aaj mama ko gadi ki zaroorat thi issi liye main auto se aayi…(sid feels stupid…)

Sid: oooh…chalo acha hua maine dekha tujhe…paise bhi bajh gaaye aur jaldi bhi poonch jaogi (ridz smiles…sid's car starts to slow down and then completely stops ridz gets confused)

Ridz: kya hua gadi kyun rokh di? (sid looks at her with a sorry look)

Sid: maine rokha nahin…rukh gaayi…voh…gadi ka petrol khatam hua hai maine dekha nahin……(ridz smiles)

Ridz: its ok…vaise bhi ghar ziada door nahin hai main pedal jaati hoon (she gets out of the car n sid does the same)

Sid: main chalta hoon tumhare saath…kafi raat hai (ridz just nodded n they walk) tumhe nahin lagta jab bhi hum saath mein kahin jaate hain kuch naa kuch hota hai?

Ridz: matlab?

Sid: ab dekho naa…jab hum pehli baar mile tho tumne mujhe teen tappar maara aur mujhe jail baijh diya…phir hum sanjeevaani mein mile aur uske baad hum purposely ek doosre ka jeena mushkil bana rahe the (ridz smiles) phir lonavla ka bus kharab hona, road band hona, jungle mein file khona aur aaj…meri gadi kharab ho gaayi

Ridz: next time naa sab tayaari kar ke milte hain (n she smiles)

Sid: chalo at least aaj tho sirf gadi hi kharab ho gaayi varna……(before he could finish it started rainnin n he looks at ridz shocked who was hardy tryin to hold her laugh) chalo vahan uss tree ke niche chalte hain (n they run to shelter under the tree. Ridz looks at sid n starts laughin)

Ridz: lagta hai aaj ke liye abhi problems baaki hai

Sid: iss mein hasne wali kya baat hai?...Godddd I hate rain!

Ridz: what?...mujhe baarish mein bheegna bohut acha lagti hai…chalo naa hum baarish mein hi ghar chalte hain

Sid: what? No way! Main iss baarish ke saath kahin nahin jaane vaala

Ridz without listenin to him went to enjoy the rain. She enjoyed the rain's touch on her face and her palms…she was lookin happy like a lil kid who just got her favourite toy and when sid saw her like that he smiles…he kepts lookin at her for a moment then suddenly he wanted to do something…so without thinking twice he starts walkin toward ridz who didn't saw him comin. He stopped in front of her n ridz gave him a "what" look smiling n when he didn't respond she just turned her back to him to enjoy the rain but sid holds her hand n pulls her very close to him…ridz had her hand on his wet chest to maintain a distance between them lookin at him confused. Sid was lookin at her with love holdin her by her waist…ridz feels shy n looks down which made sid smile n he slowly removes her hair from her face n she looks up at him.

Ridz: sid………..sid………………………….SID! (sid comes back to his senses n realized that he was just imagining…he looks around and found himself still standin at his place) sid chalo baarish rukh gaayi

Sid confused: hun?......haan chalo….

***

Sid was in his bedroom…he was not able to sleep…Riddhima…Riddhima was the only thing he could think about…every time they bump…every time he accidently got close to her…and specialy what just happened few hours ago…

Sid: yeh mujhe ho kya raha hai? Main riddhima ke bare mein itna kyun soch raha hoon? Aur voh khayal?......uska matlab kya hai?.....kya main riddhima se….? nahin dude…she is just ur friend…voh sirf meri dost hain…yeh sab…tamana ke waje se ho raha hai…jab bhi uss se milne jaata hoon sirf riddhima ke bare mein baat karti hai…riddhima yeh…riddhima voh…riddhima aur main…riddhima riddhima!...kal uss se milke bohut daantounga……oh shit! Kal mera day off hai! Tho main tamana se mil nahin paounga…chalo acha hai at least ek din tho chain se reh sakunga……(just then he remembered another detail) aur riddhima…poora din main uss se bhi nahin milounga……what?....yeh main kya bol raha hoon…aur main yahan akele riddhima ke bare mein idiot ki tarah kyun baat kar raha hoon?...dude iss kamre se nikal…haan…main…main videogames khelta hoon…

All he wanted was forget riddhima for some time and relax playin videogames…but it wasn't and easy task for him…he tried hard but even playin did not helped him…he kept loosin and that really annoyed him so he thrown the joystick n sue looks at him amused

Sue: kya hua bro? haar gaaye?

Sid: haan yaar! Kab se haarta hi jaa raha hoon iss game mein…

Sue: its ok sid…har game jeetna zaroori todi hota hai…aur kisi ne kaha hai kabhi kabhi haar mein bhi jeet hota hai…

Sid: sab se pehli baat tho yeh hai ki main iss game mein naa master hoon…aur doosri baat…(makin a confused look) kis bevakoof ne kaha hai ki haar mein bhi jeet hota hai

Sue: bohut saare log kehte hain and I agree

Sid: haan tho next time jab mein apne car race mein haar jaounga tho sab se yahin kahunga ki guys…its ok main haar ke bhi jeet gaaya……what rubbish is that Sue?...aur tumhe yeh stupidity bataaya kisne….Raj?

Sue: first of all…shut up! And then…main tujhe ek aisa game bata sakti hoon

Sid: really?...kaun sa?

Sue: dunya ka sab se popular aur khatarnak game…love game

Sid: kya??

Sue: haan…pyaar ka khel…jab hum uss insaan se khelte hain jiss se hum pyaar karte hain tho hum purposely uss game mein haarte hain taaki usse khushi mile…aur usse khushi mein tumhari khushi hai…tho mili naa haar mein jeet…infact when u fall in love… tum uske liye apna dil haarte ho aur badle mein uska pyaar paate ho…tho yahan bhi tumhe haarte hue bhi jeet mili…(sid gets annoyed with all her love talks)

Sid: naa hi maine kisi ke liye koi game purposely haara hai aur naa hi apna dil…sab bakwaas hai yeh…u know what…tum yahan apne haarne vaali jeet ke bare mein socho aur main jaa raha hoon soone! (sayin this he angrily went back to his bedroom leavin a confused sue)

Sue: isse kya hua hai?...main tho iske bare mein todi baat kar rahi thi……

Love and Luck to All
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: NehaSehgal

NOORYA LOVE IT 🤗

LOVE❤️ UR FF....& PLZZZ KEEP CONTINUE MAKING FF ON SR.....👍🏼

im not stopin it dear

infact i have updated the new part😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: payyal

u must continue as CVs hav already losted,so we can cheer ourselves by reding the next version of this gr8 FF

Payyal the FF is not endin anymore

u can read the new part i have posted it
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Posted: 15 years ago
SR in rain 😍
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

noorya 🤗 🤗

amazing update 👏 👏 👏

this was a superb peice of writing...keep it up 👍🏼

loved the convo of sid and tamanna and of course SR in rain....can anything be normal between them????????

you seriously cheered me up....thanks a lot!!!!!and i want more parts and the next update asap.....

m waiting for your comments on my OS.....

thanks so much for the pm...

loads of love❤️ ❤️
mayuri ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome noorya as usual. cv should take ur advise how to run the track. u described not only SR friendship, but other charcters friendship so well. gr8
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Posted: 15 years ago
Noorya 🤗

frst of thnx for continuing it😃

Love this part soooooooooooooo much...awwwwww....Sid started 2 think about Ridzi...nd he's so cute...

nd Siddhima in Rain 😍 😍

Plz update soon nd thnx for the PM!!!

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