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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

When Are You Gonna Update?

I'm Waiting! You better update this or Anjaana Anjaani tommorow! -Jassi

dont worri, i will update this by tommorow, and gosh i felt soo sad for you, all ur hard work and stupid words deleted everything... bt plz re-write... and yes remeber out lil competion... haan??!!!!😆😆😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey mina
posting after a reaaaallly loooong time
read parts 18-24
they were just amazing
and don't end this ff
as sasha is back so make her jealous of maaneet and she is trying to seperate them
will PM more to you
cont soon
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey when are u going to update..please soon!!=)
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PART 25

****************************lOnG uPdAtE**************************
recap; maan brings geet closer to him: i never want any sort of misunderstanding ever came in between us

geet puts her hand on maans shoulder: me too

soon the party finished and everyone went back to thier hostel rooms

geet and pinky

pinky: geet yeh sub, tum aur maan... bt im sooo happy for youu, i remeber telling you maan is nt that relaiable wid gurls bt seeing him today confess his love for you, that was totaly unbeliveable of him to do... seeing the love in maans eyes made,, im soo happy for you

geet hugged pinky: yes, i reali love maan

pinky: im soo happy

in maan and devs room

dev: DUDE im sooo happy for youuu,

maaan: gosh i just love her,

dev: is dats why u kept on calling me geet huh??

maan laughs: maybe!!!

dev: MAAN

maan: acha dev i wana do something reali specail for geet, likan kya???

dev: idk, do something in which she will figure out how much you love her

maan: bt wot? geet is such a different kinda gurl... wot should i do?

dev: im sure u will think off something, abhi ka liya soo jo...

dev went to sleep bt maan couldnt sleep and kept on thinking wot do to for geet,

just aorund 3am in the morning maan relazied wot do to, a perfect dinner for two by the beach

dev: get up maaaaannnn

maan didnt move a bit

dev: geets on the fone get up

maan suddenly got up

dev laughed: u lover boy she is not... bt the geet formula worked haan???

dev laughed more while maan got embrassed: not cool dev im sleepy...

dev: bt it is noon, get upp

maan: fine,

dev felt and maan got ready and made a few phone calls and left his room, he went down to the capmus and saw geet... wid pinky and neha, laughing

maan was about to go to geet wen dev and adi pulled him over to the side of the girls couldnt see him

dev: kidar ja raho?

maan: geet ka pass

adi ah-ha-ha

maan: why kya hai?

dev: they gurls have decided to make a girls day out, meaning no boys

adi: no boyfriends

dev: bt maan we all three gotta stay strong, we cant let the girls now how much we miss them

adi: or how much we wana go and kiss dem

maan peeks at geet: bt look at geet, she looks sad

dev: sad my foot, yeh ssara idea usko tha

maan: KYA... geet kay, goshhh she will have to pay for this

adi: bt wot will we do

maan: i booked a dinner for two... and dat costed sooo muchhh, ar yeh geet ki bachi... idk about u two, bt im for sure going to dine with geet tonite

dev: likan how...???

adi: yea telus too

maan smriked: then listen up, i will fake being sick... meaning geet will wana die to see me, and den pinky and neha would wana have thier girl day out, widout geet, so obvisouly aj ka girls day out

all three of them say together

adi, dev, maan: CANCELED

maan goes up to his room and lays flat

dev: look sick maan, or else this plan wont work

maan took his tongue out

adi ah-ha-ha: dev said look sick not died

maan: adi get oout and call the girls, i will be readyy

adi goes to the girls in a dramatic way and speaks like fimily way

adi: woh....

neha: tum

pinky: no boys allowed

aiadi: nhai woh maaannn....

geet: kya maan???

adi: woh maan

geet: aga bolo kya maan???

adi: maan is sick

geet; sick??

adi: haan, jaldi chaloon

all four of them reach maans room

maan is laying on the bed with the blanket on his face

geet: ma..an

maan underneath is laughing

wen he feels the blanket off of his face and makes a serouis face and opens his eyes slowly

maan talks in a low voice: geet tum, maine kah tha adi aur dev ko dat dont tell geet im sick...

geet: oh plz maan, vasey tumhey kya hua hai?

dev and adi speak together:

dev: tempeture

adi: smotic-ahe

geet: kya?

pinky: yea, wot do u mean?

maan in a high voice: INKA MUTLUB HAI KAY

geet looks at maan suspously

maan back in low voice: they mean i got a stomic-ache and from that pain i got tempature

geet puts her hand on maans forehead

geet: bt u dont seem to be warm

maan: yea mujhai tempature asey hi hota hai, face, arms, and legs cold likan body becums reali hott, u wana touch?

geet looks at him embrassly

neha and pinky let out a gigle

dev: sharam karo pinky aur neha, idhar maan is sick and u guy are thinking drity sutff...

dev gose to the back of the girls and looks at maan and rasies his two tumbs up, and suddenly puts them down as he sees pinky turing aroound to look at dev

pinky: arey dev mera woh mutlub nhai tha

adi: acha guys i think we should leave geet alone wid maan and leave

neha: bt how can we leave maan like dat

maan: by simply just walking out of the door

maan coughed into his fist

maan: i mean, its okay, i wouldl say geet u can go as well, i will manage

geet: absoutly not, u guyz leave i will stay here with maan

maan: likan geet tumhara girls day out

geet: i guess we can do dat sum other day hannah girls

neha and pinky agree and leave wid thier mans!

geet goes and sits with maan on his bed

geet: i think u should go to a doctor,

maan: nhai geet uski koi zarurat nhai, ur wid me and i feel better already

maan sits up

geet: lay down maan

maan: no i feel better

geet: maan nw u lay down, i will make some kawa for u to drink

maan: kya kawa, i hate kawa

geet: bt u gotta take something for the infection

maan: nhai geet

geet: no maan, i will be rite back

geet leaves and maan thinks his plan backfired him

after sum time geet cums back with kawa, bt to her shock maan is wearing jeans with his favortie leather jacket wid a white, v nect shirt

geet: maan r u feeling fine?

maan smiles: im totally fine, and as u left i felt even better

geet: acha, bt y r u ready

maan: i thot meri waja se tumhara girls day out karab hogaya, toh how about i take u out...

geet smiles and gets serouis: no way, u r not feeling well, u must drink this kawa and lay down again

maan: geet darling

maan takes the kawa form her hands and puts it on the table and holds geet form her wasit and brings her closer to him

maan: im telling you im fine...

geet: likan maan, tumhare tempature

maan: its all better

geet: no u r lying, and leave me, b4 someone cums

maan: no one will cum,

maan grabs geet hands and makes it touch his forhead: dekho garam hay kya?

geet: bt u said urself that ur face, arms or legs never got warm its ur body

maan: yea, so u can touch me where ever u like, i woulnt mind

geet blushed: maan

geet put her head on maans chest, and maan immdeitly wraped his arms tigthly on geet

maan: come geet, i wana take u out, on a date

geet: date?

maan: yea a date, i was thinking kay i have never took u out on a date...

geet: bt we have gone out pently of times

maan: yea bt i wana take u out on a date alone... just you and me

geet looked up at maan and blushed again

maan: plzz

geet: bt ur health...

maan: shhh geet im fine, trust me, plzz

geet nodded her head: fine, give 15mins i will come down- ready

maan smiled bt didnt wana let go of geet

geet: maan tum chora gay toh hi main wapis ah sakoon gi

maan smriked and kissed her forehead: only on one condition

geet: hmm

maan: onli if u remove the 1 by the 15 then i would let u go

geet: kya

maan: i mean cum in 5mins, i cant wait for a whole of 15

geet smiled: oh did i say 15 i meant around 25 to 30mins

maan smiled: geet

geet: acha na leave me, and i wil try to come fast okay

maan let go of her: come soon, i will be waiting

geet ran up to her room shut the room behind her hard and started lookin through the clothes she owned

geet: gosh babaji y do i have to have the uglyest clothes everrrr

geet signhed: onli my angles can help me now

geet dailed pinky and nehas number

geet: guys i need ur help cum soon to my room...

pinky and neha reached after 2mins

pinky: wots the hurryy

neha: yea is maan fi9

pinky: and why is there a mountain of ur clothes everywhere??

geet explained everything to pinky and neha,

and neha got busi on selecting something for geet to wear awhile pinky started making geets hair

downstairs maan is waiting for to geet to come bt instead dev and adi com

dev: no fair

maan: kya no fair

adi: wot did u say to geet, she called neha and pinky, they both ran after her call

maan: i didnt say anything to geet,

adi" no phir...

maan: i just told her abou tthe dinner...

dev: oh i get it, geet must be getting neha and pinkys help to get ready

maan: kya, why doe sshe need help she is already to beauitful

adi ah-ha-ha: likan woh larki hai, aur larki asey hi karthi hai

maan: kya then should i get ready as well...

dev: oh shut up maan, kya tum phela khabhi kisi larki kay liya tayaar hua ho jo ab ho gay?

maan: likan, its geet, wot should i wear a tux? should i go shave should i put on more clone???

adi ah-ha-ha: yeh toh geet sa bhi zada nervuos ho raha hai

maan: nhai main nervous nhai hoon...

dev: sach mein

adi: toh arahi hai geet

maan suddenly turned his face aorund, nt wanting to face her soo soon

maan: kya, would do i do, guyz give me some ideas

adi: tel her she looks beuitful

dev: yea reali reali beautiful

maan: hey tum donu apne apne gf's to dekho, meri ko nazar na lagoo

dev: acha tum dekho nhai geet is lookin' somkin'

maan: devvv

adi: arey turn around na

maan slowly turned around and noticedd geet in a white coloured dress, the one which onli goes up to one shoulder, leaving the other shoulder naked, the dress was upto her kness, with hairs in a bum with onli her curly bangs fallin down on her face, she wear normal size pencil heels(white coloured) geet had woren a pendant necklase with white small earings, with lite goruous makeup

maan for the whole time didnt blink his eyes ones, infact his mouth droped opened...

dev: moon baandh kar

maan fianly came back to relatity

pinky: so how is geet looking

maan: ummm, she is looking beauitfulll

geet blushed

maan: chalay?

FORM HERE DOWN IT IS ALL MAANEET! <3

geet went and sat with maan on the fornt seat and maan started to drive

maan: u look reali beautiful

geet: u have said that already

maan: hmm, so u want me to say more words in ur beauty?

geet: okay, bt onli cuz u have said soo

maan smirked: u look lovely, as a angel sent from above... just for me

geet blushed: so where r u going

maan: a specail place, by the beach shore... which i planed 3 in the morning, just for youu

geet: kya 3 in the morning

maan unknowinyly says: haan,bt ur girls day out almost runined it, wen i got a idea...

geet: KYA, idea, u mean to say tumhara sick hona bhahana tha kya?

maan: nhai geet, woh, i was.... ummm, geet, .... woh .... i... geet....

maan gave up, he just couldnt make anymore excuse...

geet: maan stop the car

maan: geet please,,, look i reali wanted this to be specail, then i got to nw about ur gdo

geet: gdo?

maan: haan yaar, girls day out, so i thout kay i reali wanted to go, and i did all this for us.. plz geet

geet thinks: so sweet likan why did he lie to me???

geet: fine, bt maan next time, plz just say the truth to me

maan nodded his head: for sure... and yea geet

geet: hmmm

maan: i love you

geet smiled: me2

after some time they reached the place, which was decorated with purple colour of ribbions, and balloons with red coloured roses alomst everywhere, and water on the beach moved towards them and then back, geet was stunned, she was amazed

geet: this is beauitful

maan: dont lie

geet: no maan its the turth this is beauitful

maan: bt it is nt beauitful as you

geet blushed again and went and hugged maan, maan hgged her back

maan: cum lets have dinner

maaneet went and had dinner quitely, after food was finished

geet: the food was reali good

maan: i nw

geet: why did u make it?

maan: maybe

geet: kya??

maan: geet, im just jking, acha i have some thing to give you

geet: kya?!

maan went towards her and bend on his kness and extened his hand to hold geets hand in his hand, geet gave him her hand, and maan held it firmly, maan then pulled out a ring, the ring was a diamond heart shapped

maan: they say diamond is 4eva, and so will my love be

maan placed the ring on her ring finger

maan: hmmm, i was rite, the ring looks much more nicer on ur finger

geet almost got teary

maan: arey ur crying, u dont like the ring??

geet: no, i love it, aur yeh khusi kay ansu hai... thank you maan, thank you so muchhh

maan smiled and made geet get up

maan snaped his finger and a sweet sound of paino started to play

maan: care to dance my lady?

geet happyli went to dance with him,

maan twirled her around and made her dip, again spined her, making her bang into his chest

maan: u still havent learnt, on how to dance...

geet: i never wana learn

geet held on to his chest, placed her head on his rite side chest and smiled

maan: wot r u trying to say, dat u nw how to dance, aur tum har bar asli mujse takra jati hoo, cuz u like u touch me haan?!

geet: nhai

geet moved out of his embrase

maan: telme naa

geet: maan

maan: comon, u siad dont lie, aur ab tum khood hi

geet went back into maans chest and sligthly nodded her head, and maan held her tighter in his arms

maan: geet

geet: hmm

maan: i love you

geet smiled again: me2

maan: bt i bet i love you more

geet: wot, no i love u more

maan: i decalred my love for infornt of the whole uni

geet: bt i forgave you, which is a harder thing to do

maan: bt i brougth u here to this wonderful dinner

geet: and i wore this sexi dress for you

maan smiled and bend down to geets lips and gave a veri passionate kiss and geet also replayed bt as started to get in the mood maan broke of

maan: bt i can do this..., so i love you more

geet smiled: so wot i can do it as well

geet stood on her tippy toes and gave maan a kiss on his lips, with the same passion... geet had opened her mouth for a better kiss... maan just fougth with her tongue... for god nows how long

atlas they both let go, both were out of breathe and breathing fastly... maan had placed his head on top of hers

maan: i can do something else as well

geet: kya

maan aparted from geets way and took of his shirt: ab bata...

geet just stood there embrassed and confused: maannn, not fair...,

geet started running away to the water as maan followed her...

geet stoodd in the water and maan came justt a few distance away

geet spashed all of the water on him

maan: geet stop, its late in the dark, and the winds are blowing u will get sick

bt geet just keept on spashing the water on maan...

maan: geet... GEET, stop being childishh

geet: acha im being childish... how about u stop being the adult and have sum fun

maan: fine

maan also started spasling water on geet... and geet just couldnt take the force of maan throwing the water so she lay flat on the shore, after every few secounds water would come up to geet and then back, they ocean had soft waves to it...

maan cum towards geet and layed beside her

geet smiled

maan: why r u smiling?

geet: nhai, i just never thouted kay main tumhara saath phir se... u nw

maan smiled and lay on this rite shoulder so he could face geet

maan: geet...

geet: hmm

maan: wot r u doing tomorrow?

geet: kuch nhai, just uni stuff

maan: gr8 then after uni, we will go to dadimaa's, i wana show her my would be wife and her would daugther in law

geet blushed and also faced maan by laying on her left shoulder

geet: toh main phir kal kya panu?

maan: this same dress...

maan blinked at her

geet: maannn, telme na..

maan: ummm, idk anything

geet: hmmm

maan: vasey u look veri hawt in a saree

geet: sareee..

maan: yup saree

geet: bt i have never woren a saree before... at least not infornt of you

maan: bt i imagined u in a saree.. a brown coloured sareee and trust me u looked realii elegant with the touch of her hawtness

geet smiled: oh so mr. msk imagines me... anymore of imgaination i should now off?

maan smriked

geet: maan, did u really imagine drity things... YUCK maan ur disguesting i just cant belive you...

saying that geet got up and went back to the dinner place while maan followed her

maan: arey geet... i didnt say anything

geet: bt ur smile said a thosand things

maan smriked again and held geet from her wasit and kissed her bear shoulder and back up to her neck and moved to her callor bone

geet: maann

maan: kya, i m just showing u the things i imangined about you

geet blushed and smiled

maan: i also imagined this

maan picked geet up in his arms by her leg(okay i cant reali expain this well, bt he picked her up, nt in his godi, they way he does bt by her legs- i hope u guys understand)! and spined her around

geet had gently placed her hands on maans shoulder

maan sslowly put geet back on the gorund with making thier faces reali close to one another... maan moved a bit more closer to get another kiss, bt geet back away

geet: any more of ur imaginations?

maan nodded his head, held geets hand and took her to the sitting place and made her sit...

geet: yeh kya?

maan suddenly put his head on geets lap and closed his eyes

maan: this was my best imagination

geet softly moved her hand through his hairs

and after a few mins, maan had fallen asleep to geet surpirsed

geet: arey maan toh soo gaya... he must feel cold... he is not even wearin his shirt... wot do i do

just den geet saw a shawl close by and reached for it (i nw dat is veri flimly bt still) and put if on maan, geet leaned her head to the wall and fell asleep as well!

next morning maan woke up still in a trance of last nite

maan: arey i fell asleep during the date...

maan noticed his was in geets lap, geet had tigtlyed secured her hands aorund his neck and on top of his chest sleeping... just then a few kids came running into the beach

radom kid 1 (rk1)

rk1: arey yeh dekhoo, in donu ko

rk2: kya flimly scene hai

maan slowly moved out of geets lap

maan: shhh, she is sleeping and you to are talking so aloud... chup karo

rk1 and 2 started laughing

maan: arey chupppp

geet got up

geet: wots happening?

maan: see i told u kids to keep it down

geet: arey why r u yelling at the kids?

rk1: didi is better then the bhaiyya... kyun

rk2: haan, ur rite

geet laughed and maan got mad

maan: kya... kya??

geet: maan go wear ur shirt and lets go to the uni, classes begin in about 30mins

maaneet went towards thier car, and maan felt reali embrassed to fell asleep like that...

maan: geet woh im sorri

geet: kya sorri? kyun?

maan: haan i fell asleep... on our date, which i planed out soo prefect, pata nhai main kasey soo gaya

geet smiled: i had a prefect time with you, infact last nite was my secound best nite out, which i will never forget...

maan: secound..., wen was the first?

geet smiled: im not telling

maan: telme naa

geet: nope...

maan parked his car in the parking alot of the uni and geet stepped out

maan: geet, telme na, wot was ur 1st favorite nite out..

geet: i will tell you later

geet was abou tot leave when maan held her by her wrist

maan: geet

geet: hmm

maan: i love you

geet blushed: me2

maan let go and geet ran up to her room, and maan went to his!

Hope u guyz liked it... do comment and yea within the next three parts a small leap will happen.... and it will all be about maaneet no sasha or anything like that, meaning i have finally figured out the next story line! and omg i was just thinking, i have never wrote a ff of 25 parts, i always stop in bettween, bt u guyz are just so sweet, wid all of the pms and comments, u guyz just dont let me stop😳 gosh thank youu soooo veri much... mhawz <3 😃
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Wowww supub!!!! Please add me to ur pm list plz
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Originally posted by: jaspreetm2815

Wowww supub!!!! Please add me to ur pm list plz

thanks for liking it, bt i think that u r already added so no need to worry!
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Wow that was awesomeeeeeeeee... a date by the beach with a guy like Maan had always been my kind of fantasy... you made it beautiful... it had almost all the elements that i have ever thought of for a Beach date... :) Update soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: niharika_87

Wow that was awesomeeeeeeeee... a date by the beach with a guy like Maan had always been my kind of fantasy... you made it beautiful... it had almost all the elements that i have ever thought of for a Beach date... :) Update soon!!!

lolz that is my fanstasy as well... infact i think its every girls dream and not just any dream and the wildest dream😳 and thanks for liking itt😊
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Awesome part!!
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Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Awesome part!!
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dont mention it, i am glad u liked it!

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