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Posted: 13 years ago
hey rinku..

I just finished reading all d updates at a go..and must say tht I m attached to it.. It's Superb..⭐️

Could you pls PM me when you update next... The continuing FFs in the forum has reminded me RTMC still Though it's been of fair long time tat we saw them together.. I really appreciate all your hard wrk.. Kudos for you and all other writers in the forum..👏

mayuri


Edited by mddmayuri - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey rinku...😊
u have updated...i was waiting for it to update since i read it...thanks for updating it...u know this story is my third fav. one...after prithvi n haunted...
i really like bibs...what a amazing girl man...the way she gave answers...i am totally a big fan of her...
what ever she did with riya...i too wanted to do that...
how can she be so arrogant n rude to shreya...poor shreya she is so sweet...

''...Exactly as I wanted- Bibs thought and grabbed Chandreyee's arm. Next time if you do something like this I will gift this arm of yours to your father in 365 installments...''
''...She turned to Chandreyee with a sweet smile and then within a fraction of a second all standing at the corridor blankly witnessed array of slaps on both the cheeks of Chandreyee for few seconds continuously...''
''...Ohh I forgot something! Let me give you some reasonable advice, which will be good for your health. If I ever see you disturbing that girl directly or indirectly whom you pushed today in front of me, your father will get the first installment of his gift from me the very next hour. ...''

see riya this is called being arrogant...u know...
thanks for pm...
n plz add me to ur pm list...n next time plz do pm me too...
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi rinku...😊
u updated after such long time🤔...
but it's an interesting one⭐️...
looks like there's some hidden past of roody-shreya-abi friendship...😕...
but i adore their friendship😳...shreya really is a sweet doll😳...any sane person would want to cudle her😳...did i just say that riya is an insane,weirdo one??😆
how dare she hurt shreya?😡...
no probs...age to sudhu roody r abi chhilo ekhon bibs is also there...
well done bibs👏!that arrogant girl deserves it...
i wonder why roody is even in a relationship with riya🤪...apart from being arrogant and full of attitude she treats shreya like this...
and what is about bibs and roody's past??..it seems they r connected somehow😕...
plz update soon dear and pm me next time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
of all the parts til now, i felt this slapping one d mre happening... lollss..she really desrved tat..n i thought roody wil giv it...waise bibs gav a good one..wish roody could giv one too..😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 10

But this is not right Roody! You are three in a group and we are two? This is NOT-NOT-NOT fair! Shreya carried on with her usual banter in animated talks while coming out of the class with Aabeer and Roody. Suddenly she sensed Roody's silence, 'Please talk to me Roody! Pleaseee!!' She cajoled him.

Leave my hand Cudly! Roody yanked off his hand from her grip and spoke to Aabeer without looking at him -'Abi I am off to home. If you want to come please don't be late. Moreover we have to drop this baggage at her place too.' Saying this he went towards his car.

Seeing Roody's indifferent behavior towards her, Shreya was in tears, lips pouted. She didn't have to say anything but Aabeer replied-'He is hell angry on you Sweety. Don't you know he loves you the most. More than anything'

Then why is he hurting me? Shreya whined

You hurted him too, didn't you?

So? Does that mean he will hurt me too? And why are you supporting him? She pinched him hard on his arm.

OWW! That hurts Cudly!

Good for you! You don't love me anymore, you always support him!

-'No darling, who said so? I love you .. love you very very much. He hugged her tightly. But see still you are adamant to accept your fault. Isn't it?'

But I didn't do anything wrong- lifting her head up she stated, still holding him tight. I really don't want any problem now. Everything is in order me 'Koke, Roody- Riya and you. And if maintaining a distance keeps things at peace I will keep it.

will you be able to keep distance with us?

I have to Abi, I have to. I am very very grateful to Riya and I don't expect her to understand our relationship in the same way as we do. She has problem with my closeness with Roody and to some extent you too.

Me? Why Me? Aabeer was taken by shock rather than surprise hearing this.

I don't know! I just know that, we share a great bond of pure friendship without any barriers of relationship and'

She was about to continue but she was interrupted by Roody suddenly "Abi you are still here? C'mon I need to go to the gym too. And yes I am sending you one MMS after that I want no-nonsense queries on this. We will talk after dinner."

Seeing Roody coming Shreya turned to the other side with her head on Aabeer's chest still embracing him tight.

Cudly thats bad behaviour! Say sorry to him right now! Shreya didn't answer just pressed her head on his chest more and clasped him tightly without looking at Roody, But he just ignored it

But what MMS? Aabeer asked him teasing.

Shut up Abi! Will you! Its an answer to your query which you shared on terrace. Just that the answer is not given by me.

As soon as they spoke of MMS suddenly Shreya turned at Roody darting her eyes. Aabeer looked down at her tilting his head a bit and following her gaze. In fluke of a second Roody put his tongue out a bit and made face to Shreya . The next second Shreya was chasing him with a limp and he was swinging left and right to save himself.

How dare you make face to me! I will kill you today!

Witnessing this Aabeer muttered 'some people never change'

*******

Chandreyee was sitting at one corner of the vacant hall trying to overcome the happenings. Konishko was soothing him.

I will never 'ever forget this! I will pay her back for sure. That witch came since two days and SLAPPED ME? In front of the campus? HOW DARE SHE!

-then why didn't you say anything at that time?

Right time Koke right time- She said with tears brimming out of her eyes. And who are you to question me? Can you keep that beggar Shreya away from Roody and Abi?

Konishko chose to keep quiet in this matter but in a way of offering advice he said- "you can share this with your father. I am sure he will throw Bibs out of this college for good."

Yes you are right Koke! Everyone knows my father owns an ownership in IFD ' she continued wiping her tears.

Yeah that's why all cling to you, because you are worthless in any other way ' he muttered under his breath.

Chandreyee continued'. And my trump card to throw Shreya out of this college will be my love. Roody. One scar on her character with her friend Roody and she is gone. Then me and my love, you and your love. I will manage the college gang . As it is they do whatever I say ALWAYS .

*****

"Ok 'Ok now stop Abi you drop Cudly at her place and I am going to the gym. See you at night. Tell mom not to wait for me.." saying this Roody signs off

As if she listens.-Aabeer was escorting Shreya towards the car. They saw Bibs approaching towards her car.

Hey Bibs wait! Shreya screamed from a distance.

This is not fair! Whenever I search for you, you vanish like camphor

I am sorry, saying this with a smile Bibs cuddled Shreya's cheeks.

"You are forgiven"-She replied with a light pout , now let me introduce you to one of my SO CALLED guardians, Abi.. as in Aabeer

Aabeer who was staring at Bibs blankly, suddenly got life with jerk of Shreya,

You know Abi that night when I was lost in Noorpoor she accompanied me to you.

Ok! Now I got the whole matter.

Hi Bibs, Aabeer stretched out his hand to greet her

Hi Abi!

I guess you forgot my name Madam, its Aabeer, remember?- Aabeer said sarcastically remembering their encounter at Noorpoor

Aah ! I need to move now .I am getting late . May I give you a lift Shreya? She asked .

Before Aabeer and Shreya could answer, Aabeer's phone buzzed and seeing the sms and mms he requested with a serious face.Bibs do me a favour. Please drop Cudly at her place. I have some important work to do.

But! Shreya couldnt say further as Aabeer was already gone.

Come dear I will drop you .

But its only 4.30 I don't want to go now.. she puled getting into the car

Well in that case you can accompany me to my place. And to gym also.

GYM? Her eyes popped out. Nooo! I will not! Saying this she opened the door of the car to go but Bibs held her arm. "The next semester exam is after 3 months and I want you to be the show stopper of my show!"- Bibs said in one go.

She turned around with a frozen face to Bibs

******

Is this your palace Bibs?

Yes, come inside.

No I will not, you will throw me out!

I am not Chandreyee ,Shreya! and this is my house. May I get the privilege to befriend with you as Roody , Samar, Aabeer?

She couldn't utter anything, just hugged Bibs tightly with tears.

While entering the house holding Shreya's hand, Bibs froze for a second seeing someone in front of her and then ran towards her leaving her hand

Maa! You are here?

Yes my child your Mashi and Mesho is going to Noorpoor today, so I thought of coming here and staying with you.

All this while Shreya stood still feeling awkward amidst of unknown environment.

Maa this is '

Subhi'her mother was shocked seeing Shreya.

Maa this is Shreya my friend at the college.

Shreya smiled at them innocently.

Ohh dear she is so cute. Are you sure she is in college? She looks like a school kid with that hair band on curly hair and these dimples.

Bibs's mother came forward and cuddled her caressing her cheeks.

Maa from today she will go to gym with me.

Gym? Why do you need to go the gym? you have all the arrangements here!

No maa I will go the gym p l e a s e !

Then go and get ready I am sending juice for both of you.

****

'Wow Bibs your room is quite spacious' Shreya thumped on the couch,

While she was busy to seeing the beauty of her room Bibs was busy in a call.-"Do one thing. You go to your home for few days. Rest I will manage."

*******

Make sure this MMS is seen by every peer of her in the college and no one should disturb Roody for this.If I get to see a single face from here at my place I will crash him.

******

Am I cheating on Riya? Why I couldn't say anything to that stranger after she slapped her so badly? Why Riya didn't call me after this incident ? did she come to know about my visit to Kanai-kaka? Did I leave Bibs without saying anything because she stood beside Cudly?Should I say thank you to her or'. No-no-no I cant lose Riya, I will call her as soon as I go home- and Roody carried on with his exercise.

******

Bibs ! you will really wear these stuff in that gym?

Yeah! Why? I cant do exercise in sari.

No, not that I mean there will be boys too , isn't it?

Who is interested in all? I am interested in one particular'.

What?

Nothing ! lets go.

No wait. Shreya pulled herself out of Bibs's grip

I will not wear this.She said with a morosed face

"Shreya I don't know anything . You will be showstopper of my show in 3 months and you have to get in shape! Do you get that?"

Yeah I will, but not in shorts and that tiny sports top. I am fat now, please,

Agreed, but for the first and last time. From tomorrow you will practice at my house. Now make a move.

*******

Chandreyye was towards her home-Once I go home I will talk to Roody, then he will take care of that witch Bibs.And dad will throw her out of the college soon. Koke will take care of that beggar Shreya. Then me again ruling the college.Wait 'Wait, I guess I saw that sports car which I chose to buy, in the college today. I will ask the care taker tomorrow about that car for sure. I need it.- I NEED IT-

********

This girl has a spark for sure. Abi darling control- control. You are falling for her badly.So she was the one who saved Cudly that night. I was right she is the chosen one for me by the destiny.Thank you God I love you for your selection.-Aabeer drove back home.

*******

Cudly! What are you doing here? Roody asked with a surprise when he saw Shreya at the gym

I'I came with Bibs and before asking anything please wear something and I am not used to.. seeing half naked men .

Excuse me I am wearing shorts!

Duffer! That's why I said half naked!

Forget it! I am THE ROODY of IFD he stated with pride.

"Cant you dry your hair? See water is still dropping on your shoulder". Though Roody was hearing her blabbers but his eyes were searching someone else. And then he saw her heading towards the ladies cubicles.

Cudly, the gym is almost empty now. I am going to change, you take the keys and wait in my car. I will drop you at your place. Don't be naughty and DON'T call Abi. I don't want him to run here, as it is you killed his day today.

Ok! Making a puppy face she started going towards the exit.

'' and lock the car from inside..give some rest to your worthless mind.it did a lot of work today'-Roody moved towards the washroom

FINE! Oof!! Growling father!

*******

Thank god it's empty now. Gawd so much noise I think I am last one now. But couldn't get him today-not to worry Bibs, patience-patience'Bibs was about to enter the cubicle

Excuse me!

She turned around hearing the voice but immediately closed her eyes and faced the door!

You rat! Can't you wear something?

Same goes for you! He came forward and said

Hearing this taunt she faced towards him-I am wearing enough to'

To?

How dare you? She barged towards him to cover the minimum distance between them. As there was water on the floor of the washroom her legs slipped and she fell on Roody. Both of them slided inside a cubicle luckily both the heads were saved from any sort of injury.

As the showers were on, inside the cubicle they both couldn't speak. But their eyes were fixed on each other. Roody was holding Bibs by her bare waist and she clutched his bare shoulder for support . He was kind of lost again in her eyes and supple lips. His eyes carried on its journey towards her petite figure gradually, until he tried to grip her smooth back. She gasped and he loosened his hold. Pulling himself and making her stand he tried to apologise.

I' I am sorry'

You still don't know how to behave..You weirdo!

Excuse me it should be you to apologise not me! You get it!

For what? For slapping your fiance who insulted a girl in front of the campus!

Earing the word fiance Roody gave a wrathful look towards Bibs, but she continued.

Then I think better option is to thank you, because you are greatest example of spineless man who can't even stand by a friend to save her dignity in front of all!

That was enough for Roody. He pushed Bibs to the wall pulling her hands up to the two sides closing the behind with his right leg.

".. Then lets prove it to you today that I am really spineless and let's see who comes with a spine to save your dignity." Roody's eyes were scanning her inside out amidst of her wet dress.

Bibs clenched her teeth and silently tried to free her from him under the running shower. But that didn't help, he took her both hands and tightened it to her back making her chest flatten to his.

Even her martial art training seemed to be useless in front of Roody's wrath. It was not that she couldn't physically stop him from what was happening. But mentally she felt helpless for some peculiar reason. In effect of the situation her eyes closed slowly, Roody's one hand was grasping her hands and other hand caressed her creamy cheeks with the knuckles. His lips were near hers when both of them heard Shreya's voice in search of them.

Bibs opened her eyes with a jerk and pushed Roody to the door.

********

When Shreya came face to face with Bibs she seemed to be bit lost and pale too.- "What took you so long? I was searching you for telling that Roody will drop me today, and see he is also missing."

Bibs was about to answer when Roody approached to Shreya

Why did you come outside didn't I tell you to wait in the car?

How long should I have waited? I was scared. It's already 9pm

Now don't cry. Go and sit in the car I am coming.

When Shreya left, Bibs was about to go

Bibs wait! he spoke in a low voice, I.. I am genuinely sorry for what all happened. But she rushed towards her car speechlessly.

Edited by rinku4u - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey rinku..
superb ud dear...😊
so chandreyee is planning to throw bibs out of d college...well just wait nd watch mis.chandreyee who will b thrown out of d college...i m waiting for her insult...
and abi is dreaming abt bibs😍
n shower scene...☺️
bt bibs is right i dont no why roody is giving so much importance to riya...
nd cudly will become show stopper...cant wait to see her😊
ud soon
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was really gr888 ud.

first abt 1st scene...
it ws sweet and funny, loved it,
shreya is really a sweet heart...
like the way u present their bond...

riya is a real bitch,
she can be down, i had a mere premonition abt dis before...
but koke's comment was really a genuine, d 1 abt riya's father's ownership.
the comment really cracked me up...

roody is smtime really awkward,
i mean can't he simply recognize dat riya is just nt his type,
she is really a bitch...''i m cheating riya''...good if u really do it roody.

abi drooling over bibs...abi search a new 1, ...

bibs is really a streak personality...i like her.

cudly a show stopper, will b really a scene...wa8in 4 it.

nw coming to the scene of ud, offcourse the SHOWER SCENE...
the way he said -lets see who man with spine will cm to save her, ws amazing...aur to sooo romantic...
imagining roody caressing her cheeks with his knuckles ws really fun...rtmc roxxx, imagining this.

love rtmc,
love u.
love ur story.
love roody n bibs...jus keep this riys shit out of here.

thanx for this lovely ud...

update soon.
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok am late again..! 😔

tanks dear for updating...loved it..especially the ahem-ahem scenes..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update rinku😊 and thnx for the pm...
shreya is such a cutie pie😳...don't know why riya🤢 hates her so much?
she shares a special kind of bond with roody and abi😳...
and what is cooking inside konishko's head?
he doesn't hold that much innocent intentions towards cuddly😕...and actually supporting riya😲..the very girl who humiliated his gf...
but for his own advantages i guess...otherwise his monologue regarding riya was not so friendly😆...in fact insultingly funny😆...
bibs and cuddly becoming good friends😳...aww shreya is so innocent...just two words of love can melt her just like that...
and bibs is planning to make her the show stopper for next sem😃...
but she herself is joining gym just to be close to roody😳...
that falling on the floor scene was awesome...😍
plz update soon dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago
the update was awesome...👏
but why didn't u pm me...
next time plz do pm me...
update soon...
luv u...😊

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