Bin Tere... chapter 12 updated (RT-MC ff) page 21 - Page 16

thik hai ... next week tak i am planning one 😊

Originally posted by: rinku4u

thik hai ... next week tak i am planning one 😊

nice plan!...

Originally posted by: rinku4u

thik hai ... next week tak i am planning one😊

good idea...go ahead, we r waiting :-)

See I am giving an update before 1 year is completed.😊 Don't 😭 kill me
This update is not so interesting but its an introduction to what is coming..😊 Please forgive me for grammatical errors and short-forms😊😊

Chapter 12

After an argumentative session with Aabeer, Roody finally got time for editing the snaps. Sluggishly resting on a chair, chewing a pencil casually he was going through the snaps of Bibs and Shreya, taken during the photo session, pinned on the soft board in front of him.

'This Bibs looks hot in Indian wear too, so what that her speech is bitter. Though Abi is convincing me that everything is ok with Cudly but I really doubt about that. Something is definitely wrong with her.

Am I missing something? It seems like Bibs has hypnotized her and deliberately taking her away from us'..

Ah! I must get back to work or else the snaps wouldn't be ready by tomorrow. That Abi has already finished his part.

Gawddd! Help me please.

He was giving final touches to the photographs in his laptop with concentration. Suddenly Roody stopped his work, as if something triggered in his mind; a chill ran down his spine. With a panic stricken face he slowly lifted his head up and looked at the snap of Bibs on the board. '..''..'Bibhabori?'

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Thanks Maashi you came back to Kolkata on such a short notice, don't worry, Maa is with me and we on our way to Aanondopur. Ya ya.. Once we reach there I will call you'

'.. Everything is perfect Maashi. Trust Me. I am going there for my assignment and Mom told she wants to join me,

No more questions Maashi! Now listen to me! Remove all the pictures from every wall in which I am there, Daadu and Maa are there.

'.. No - No! Only those pictures which are taken in India and Daadu's too

'Nothing has happened Maashi!

'Now QUIIIEEETTT!!!' 'It's just that, there can be a shocking visitor tonight at our house.' - Bibs informed Aloka with an amused tone.

'Let it be a surprise

Ok, I can't talk more I am driving. Tell Mesho that I will take care of myself. Love you.

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Seated on the back seat of a Maybach with Bibs's mother, Shreya and Samar were staring blankly at Bibs, hearing the conversation.

Surprise visitor! Removing pictures! What is the matter?What are you doing Bibhu? Who is going to visit our house today? - Her mother couldn't keep herself silent seeing Bibs's excitement during the phone conversation. But she seemed to turn a deaf ear, busy in dialling a number on her phone.

'I am asking you something Bibhu. Answer Me!

-'Mr. Aniruddho Roy Chowdhury'

Hearing this name the three faces staring Bibs turned pale.

Prof. Banerjee, Sorry for calling at this hour. Actually I needed a favour.

It's okay Bibs tell me how can i help you?

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The posh car ran through the empty road carrying four passengers- Bibs, Samar, Shreya and Maa. While Bibs was driving Shreya was sleeping with her head on mother's lap and Samar was sitting beside Bibs and surfing the net to find a perfect video on ramp choreography. Bibs's mother was also asleep with her head on the cushioned window pane

'I thought your every second is claimed by darling Roody, good to see you doing some work', Bibs taunted Samar with a sly smile though eyes were darted on the road.
'There is much more you need to know about me sweetie', he answered while carrying on his work. Samar's concentration on his laptop startled Bibs as if he was a stranger with specs whose next breadth is dependent on the choreographer's moves in the video.

Again so much rain, I am really fed up of all this. I should have brought the driver. Seeing Samar giving no heed to her murmur she focussed on driving. I guess now you will understand the pain of missing someone terribly. If you really loved your Shreya, wasn't it was your responsibility to stand by her in all difficulties? Moreover when the situations are created by Chandreyee? I have lost my Subhi because of you. I am no way ready to part Shreya from me now. Not now, not ever. And I am sure these three days will be hell for you.

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No! No-no-no-no-no! It can't be Bibhabori. It just can't be. How can it be? Roody was frantically pacing to and fro in the studio puffing a cigarette. ! I must be hallucinating. Overwork is killing me. Right! I must rest. How can she come here? What should I do now? No- I am blowing the matter out of proportion. It's just a thought. I must get back home. I am too hungry. Right! I didn't eat anything since morning, that's why such weird thoughts are coming. He thought smiling foolishly. I will give the studio keys to the caretaker and leave. Can the caretaker help to get her addre'.. No! What am I thinking! May be Prof. Banerjee

He was driving back home.

Bibhabori- city- college-studies-fashion designing - modelling. No match at all!

Bibs's attitude, Style.. smartness ..Beauty... figure... confidence- Impossible! It can't be Bibhabori. She was so'. Just not applicable types. But then what is Bibs's full name?

-"..you can call me Bibs."

-''..you shouldn't have any problems now!"

With shivering hands he somehow managed to ring the bell after clearing 3 levels of security check. 'Is this a house or museum? Why so much security.'

It was night, he couldn't see around clearly, but could make out from the silhouettes within his eyes reach that, the mansion has a big lawn in front.

As he came inside with the caretaker, Roody was amazed to see the interiors of the house. The mansion seemed to be so modern from outside but the interiors were a total contrast. The wall paper design was somewhat like plasters are coming out of the wall. There was a large wooden mirror on the wall with a teak wood table giving the room a total Bengali traditional zamindari house look. The windows were as large as the door with heavy curtains. A heavy chandelier covered the total ceiling which stretched more than 2500 sq feet.

No doubt Bibs is a big fish. She can no way be Bibhabori; the dim wit, stale looking ugly '.. And whatever! Forget it! I was a fool to link her with Bibs. Roody was looking at the large portrait of Bibs on the wall

Getting the news of the guest, Aloka traipsed down the stairs lazily looking at him.

Yes- whom do you want to meet?

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It seems we will be reaching Aanondopur at the dawn. I hate driving. Getting no answer from Samar she looked at him only to find that he is sound asleep. Miss Bibhabori this is what you are now; a chauffeur, a driver. Giving the sleeping companion an ignorant look she continued driving. By now Mr. RoyChowdhury must have reached his destination for today evening. Just waiting for Mashi to put some spice.

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As he turned around, Aloka's her jaw tightened, she held the railing of the stairs tightly preventing her to fall down. For a moment a lump came up to her throat making difficult to breathe.

'Don't show me your tarnished face ever Bibhabori! You not only got your name damaged but also mine! I will never forget the insult! And I as the guardian of Aanondopur declare that you will not touch the charred bodies nor you can do their last rites and whosoever helps her will also be thrown away from Aanondopur.'
'Just throw her out of my Anondopur!'

"Hold it Landlord of Aanondopur! As long as I am alive nobody dares to touch Bibhabori!"

'Hello Ma'am,' hearing his voice Aloka came out of the reverie

'Ye'.es ' yes' what is it?'

' Hi Ma'am, I am Anirrudho RoyChowdhury - Bibs's classmate'

Really? Only classmate, Son?

'Is Bibs at home? Actually we needed to discuss about our next semester summer collections.'

' Oh Hi Son; Nice to meet you. But you are bit late dear. Just now she left for three days.'

'Oops! Ok ma'am, thanks. I must take your leave now. Sorry for the inconvenience!'

'No- No, Not at all son. It's nothing like that. And please don't call me Ma'am. Its sounds too formal.'

'Ok Aunty.' ' He said with a smile. 'I must leave now .It's getting late.'

Aloka nudged him to have some snacks but Roody felt something awkward and left.

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In his room Konishko was pacing restlessly-I must let Riya know what I saw in the studio today. May be with a little touch of spice. No Abi, Roody I will not give up so soon. Doll is mine forever.

'Hey Riya... How are doing dear?'

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'Thanks Kanai Kaka!'

'What's there to thank didimoni. When you are coming to your home I had to come to arrange everything.' Kanai said casually while cleaning the antiques of the house.

'THIS IS NOT MY HOME!' Bibs screamed at him

Hearing her shrilled voice the antique vase fell down from his hand and broke into pieces.

Pressing her forehead with one hand Bibs said- 'Anyways ... did you remove the photographs from the wall?'

Photographs! Which Photographs! I was not instructed to do so Didimoni. Kanai told with surprise

Bibs was shocked hearing this-'what-How- I mean ... What will I do now? Oh God! Where is Shreya?'

She went to have a look of the house.

What!!

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Shreya was relaxingly viewing the rooms of the house.

Whose is this room? I am sure it's of Bibs. Let me see its interior decor. She has really good taste. But as soon as she opened the door her eyes went on the large photograph on the wall.

Bibs and Him? Her eyes widened in horror, throat went dry and everything went dark in front of her.

u knw wat..i had lost hope of seeing another update of this ff long back..!!! 😳

neha u r absolutaly right, part was not good...it was amazingly awesome... (Y)
so according to the part...bibs n roody had met before, n she was ugly then, really??????? o_O
n what was that in aloka's part??????...what she was remembering??????...,bibs was stopped from performing last rituals of whom????????
n it was roody n bibs picture which shreya has seen in bibs room right???????...say yes plz
n bibs is taking shreya away from roody...
neha, u hv given a hint of what is coming or confusion ka pahad khada kar diya h...
haila itne saare questions k saath chod diya n that too with a cliffhanger...
plz plz update soon...seriously want to know shreya's reaction n how cum shreya is roody n sumer's weakness...
n what had happened with bibs, n how roody is responsible for this???????,
n who she shubhi, how her death is related to roody :/
update soon...
luv u... :-)

hey rinku
Awesome update
Bt itnaaa saara suspense!
Whos shubhi?
N wt di roody do to bibs?
plzzz do update soon next time
N thanks fr d update...

Ye bhott galat bat h-not a single roody bibs scn---yea yeaaa1! U wrote first scn= when roody ws thinking of bibs luking hot in bridal sartorial… but since em a vry nice follower of ur ff- u hav written another version of same scn in last last-…from bibs hotness realization by roody to her real name realisation…that's why em complaining- atleast a new scene of roody n bibs cud hav been certainly better…ptaa h meine just vo scn- when roody was thinking of bibs hot in Indian- kitni baar pada!.. ((u can very well ignore this complains…stick to ur story evrytime….mmera kyaa h- muje tho herr jagan iss ff mei sirf roody n bibs hi chahiye… ^_^ ))

Bib is so evry time correct abt him- her all predictions abt him r so exact like a wife knows ki paati k dil mei kyaa chall rha h… :D

'This Bibs looks hot in Indian wear too, so what that her speech is bitter---yesss… dis is the line I read again n again…

No doubt Bibs is a big fish. ---dis is really shows he is Bengali- yaahn per bhi he is talking abt fish-bengali's saple diet…my son roody- she is ur real fianc bibs' house- u see!!!

I strt reading every update of you wid a hope to get answer to my previous questions..but I end up just adding few more questions…

The flash back u gave- not allowing bibs to do some rites..and yess-who is dis gaudians of anandopur…what kind of insult..and how bibs is responsible for it???is really bibs responsible or she is being wrongly charged for dis..and whose charred bodies r being reffered…

Bibs was reluctant to wear bridals—why??? And roody recognized her bridal wears???dats why bibs ws afraid???

Saare photographs r removed- great- but not those when she was in London- because she was changed there in London from an ugly useless gal to glamorous fashionista….- as sexy as her red cars?? ((car and bibs- killer combination by the way))

Subhi- bibs ki sister h kyaa?? And aloka's daughter….?? Radha- is bibs kinda some friend-who had made her realize abt her past agn- she said subhi was killed bcz of roody???

Haaaooowww maaannn!!!!

Koi kuch batayega….??? ((screaming on top lungs- enough to bring earth quake in this ff thread!!

Roody loves shreya…clear…roody don't love riya- very clear…roody hav bibs- all time on his mind( dil ko sukooon mila feel h yahan))- very clear agn….but he superduper like bibs house evrytime-haha!!!...

What kind of spice was bibs expecting maashi to add??- to her surprise guest roody??- but mesho evn asked him to call her aunty??-kyaa maajeraa h ye!!... enough rinku di- kuhc tho reveal krooo- humare dimaag phatt jayegaaa!!-itna saare question se…

Roody is gonna live hell for 3 days widout shreya-….i know ppl miss their friends! So much..so so much…but not to extend that their life becomes hell!!..

bibs was abt to know by her professor why shreya is weakness of abi n roody- but that didn't happen as assistance came- a long long back story it is I know- but still…evn dis question is unanswered???

Roody is responsible for someone's death- bibs remember of subhi by seeing shreya-aloka hated roody's visit to home- ananodopur's guardians didn't allow bibs to do the last rites of charred bodies of whom-who is dis guardian of anandopur-why did she go to London-where the hell roody met bibs before as ugly looking un-applicable gal?-and who is the photograph wid her in her room which shreya saw??

Him stands for roody- rite??? (actually I see bibs wid only rooody evry where)) but wat d hell this photo doing in her room??? Why is bibs not calling dis house her home???

Everything went dark in front of shreya's eyes- hoa kyaa h???-has she fainted seeing the photograph (not probable)- or its electricity cut off???

And ab iss dis blockhead koke saw in studio that he is going inform riyaa??-naradmuni ka bhi baap h!1 >_<

Very nice update – pl zpl jaldi jaldi update deker humare brains ko burst hone se bacha loo di!!..

plzz plzz update soon...