MAYUR: The Beauty & The Nerd (upd part12, pg59) - Page 8

Originally posted by: NehAditya8791

wow! u commented pretty fast..

thanks for ur comment btw..

i love nupz too.. (not in the way mayank does though😆)

her character is so loving, thats y..

Originally posted by: Naina2127

hhaha yupp :) im lucky i guess so yayy i was first! and np, nothing to thank...you're great writer! aww.. thanks (lol, again😆) well, but seriously.. i am a gr8 writer only coz u all love mayur, and like my writing and support and comment on my ff.. my other current ff on premeer is not doing so well.. and haha nupur is just an amazing character...true.. rati just makes nupz more amazing..in all truth i only started watching the show after reading some of the ffs and falling in love with mayur😆😆 hahaha.. for me, i fell in lov wit arjun during his lrl days, then started watching mjht for him, then switched to reading mjht ff's wen i felt the plot of the actual show was not so good.. at least, the ff's always hav an interesting track...

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

nice update

luved nupur entry

cont soon dear

Originally posted by: fariaa70

3rd one to comment aww. dont worry.. next time u'll be first. ok?
hi my nehu hi my dear fari..

I hate this update


why??????????????????????????????


Becoz it was too short.lol really.. lol😆 u scared me here.. i thought u didnt like what i wrote..




itna short update kyun kia??????????????????? well.. itna short update isiliye tha because i wanted to keep nupz and mayu's entry/intro in diff parts.. and see the diff reactions of diff readers.. and other more confusing reasons.. anyways, u dont hav to worry, coz next part onwards will be long, or at least i will try to make it as long as i can...


i loved this Nupur me too..
she is so sweet and bindas girl like mjht i know.. and i can totally imagine rati in this scene..😛
and her diwanas r totally funny really? i tried to make her diwana's as well as the whole part funny and light hearted..
phool k liye [phool lekar ayi hon, main tumko apna dilka tukra de rahe hoon- hahahahahaha ithis dialogue made me laugh. lol.. me too😆 but when i first typed, i thought it was a bit ghisa-pita.. coz its been repeated in quite a few movies and tv shows, though i cant remember which specific one..
and then in railway station nups dad and nups convo was also very nice i wanted to show the close relationship between them.. coz i mite hav a twist to introduce later on.. but dont kill me it will be a sorta good twist

i m totally love in with this girl
kyun nehi o hai he itni acchi i know.. i love nupz too.. (wait., u talking abt the character in the actual show, or the nupz in my ff?)

but i hav one suggestion for Mr. narrator-
r agar abhi kahani baata doge tou hum age ijakar kya parenge?
Abhi suspense nehi khuliye ji . baad main dhire dhire kholna. dont worry.. after this, mr narrator will not make an appearance.. he was here in the first two parts just to introduce the story and the characters.. and what he said is actually the storyline, just put in different words..

sorry dear if i bother u. no u didnt.. its ok


anyway beautiful update dear thanks so much yaar..
fantastic
i lved nups entry.
now waiitng 4 mayur meet mayur will meet for the first time in the next part...

plz plz next time try to make a long update. i will try my best to make it as long as possible... coz u giv me such long and nice comments, i can try and do the same for u..😃😛 cant i?
u knw na i hate short update .

I want a super long mayurish update- mayurish means full of mayur and mayur full of mayur updates will come after a few more parts.. coz, they first of course, have to meet.. and then the usual hit and miss, before they finally come face to face properly...

huh jaida demand nehi kya- itna karna he parega abhi tak toh zyada demand nahin hai, so its ok for me.. itna karne hi koshish zaroor karoongi.. coz my uni is starting again on monday, and pata nahin ki when will i get the time..

ok i should stop now- kyun ki main jaida nehi bolti.lol agar tu zyada bolti hai, toh main kya bolti hoon?😆😆 seriously.. u shud meet me in real life just once, and then u'll see that less than 5 mins wit me and u'll hav to say "shut up, stop talking.. ur such a chatterbox" to me..😆😆

take care u too... take care..
update soon yup.. i will

Originally posted by: Alini.

Nice one......

Continue soon......

And thnks for the pm........................