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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: NehAditya8791

maaneet is maan and geet from geet hui sabse parayi right? i dont watch the show, but i'm trying to guess from the name.. well, i love the 2 actors, and wouldnt mind reading the fan-fic.. plz do send me the link... and thanks for praising my fan-fic yaar.. but i really dunno whose is better... of course, i may be biased towards my own fan-fic.. but then again, i just posted one part up so far so its too early to judge...mjht is also my fave show on the channel.. but otherwise, my fave show is tere liye on star plus.. i am on the mjht forum.. and i regularly view the updates and sometimes comment on a topic or post.. but i dont normally start my own topics there.. as for commenting, i am regular in commenting on certain fan-fics tt i read, in updating my own ff and replying to the comments there, as well as the telebuzz articles..



Awwhh, yeahh MaanEet is Maan and Geet from the show Geet Hui Sabse Parayi :)
You should watch it- it's soooo good 😃 Awwhhhh, yeah I'll send you the link through PM 😳
Looking at mine and yours I do think yours is better- Lol 😃⭐️ Ohh nice, I also like watching Tere Liye it's a good show:) Ohh cool- I want to also Join that Forum.. 😆 By the way- whats your name? 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetRozie123



Awwhh, yeahh MaanEet is Maan and Geet from the show Geet Hui Sabse Parayi :)
You should watch it- it's soooo good 😃 Awwhhhh, yeah I'll send you the link through PM 😳
Looking at mine and yours I do think yours is better- Lol 😃⭐️ Ohh nice, I also like watching Tere Liye it's a good show:) Ohh cool- I want to also Join that Forum.. 😆 By the way- whats your name? 😃

xx

ok since u recommended it, i will try and watch it online.. coz here in singapore, we dont get the star one channel.. i even watch mjht online..
and as for my fan-fic being better than urs.. i dont think so.. if u say mine is good, i say urs is equally good.. its just maybe coz my writing style is different, u like it more.. i love ur concept and cs, and yeah, i'll comment on ur fan-fic too.. and u shud join the tere liye forum.. our written updates are absolutely the best, and their comments (while updating, for the scenes) are totally hilarious.. oh and my name is.. well, i hav a wierd name.. ok maybe not wierd, but i hav 2 names.. nandini neha.. nandini is my official name, and neha is my middle name.. i hav many many nicknames.. so u can call my by one of my nicknames.. here are ur choices😆: nani/ nani pani/ naanz/ dini/ nehu/ nandu.. though yeah, i prefer all the rest except nani pani, dini and nandu.. so u can call me any of the other 3..
oh, and thanks for commenting and liking my fan-fic so much.. btw, i think if we "chat" like this next time, we shud just use the pm-service.. coz u know, its against the forum rules to chat in fan-fic topics.. at least this comment has a bit on the ff itself...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: NehAditya8791

ok since u recommended it, i will try and watch it online.. coz here in singapore, we dont get the star one channel.. i even watch mjht online..
and as for my fan-fic being better than urs.. i dont think so.. if u say mine is good, i say urs is equally good.. its just maybe coz my writing style is different, u like it more.. i love ur concept and cs, and yeah, i'll comment on ur fan-fic too.. and u shud join the tere liye forum.. our written updates are absolutely the best, and their comments (while updating, for the scenes) are totally hilarious.. oh and my name is.. well, i hav a wierd name.. ok maybe not wierd, but i hav 2 names.. nandini neha.. nandini is my official name, and neha is my middle name.. i hav many many nicknames.. so u can call my by one of my nicknames.. here are ur choices😆: nani/ nani pani/ naanz/ dini/ nehu/ nandu.. though yeah, i prefer all the rest except nani pani, dini and nandu.. so u can call me any of the other 3..
oh, and thanks for commenting and liking my fan-fic so much.. btw, i think if we "chat" like this next time, we shud just use the pm-service.. coz u know, its against the forum rules to chat in fan-fic topics.. at least this comment has a bit on the ff itself...



Ohh sorry- I reply back to this message by PM- because I don't want anything to happen wrong!
Lol! 😃😊 See you there x
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey aancchal.. thanks so much for ur comment..
do keep reading my fan-fic and commenting on it too..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part!
poor mayank.....
continue soon!
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Nikhita...

nice part!

poor mayank.....
continue soon!
thnx for the pm

hey nikhi.. thanks so much for ur comment..
and yeah, i know.. poor mayank.. girls run after him, but he runs away.. if this goes on for long, he'll lose so much weight. gym bhi jaane ki zaroorat nahin..😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys.. i hav already finished typing the next part, which is part 2.. but then, i hav to still make some changes, so i will only post the part in about 5 to 10 minutes.. once again all my readers, i would like to thank you for reading and enjoying my fan-fic so much... and also for commenting.. btw, is there anyone who would still like me to add them to my pm list? i dont mind pm-ing more ppl.. just mention it in your comment, or add me to your buddy list.. u can check the pm list on the first page if ur not sure..
Edited by NehAditya8791 - 15 years ago
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RECAP: Mayank is introduced. He is a total mumma's boy, and has shares a very close and sweet relationship with her. In college, Mayank is a total hit among the girls, who chase after him any chance they get. In reality, Mayank is a nerd (a "hot and sexy" nerd😳😆as the girls in his college think) and runs away from all girls because he hates them since they run after him. The exceptions to this are of course, Gunjan, Diya, Shilpa (Mayank's mom), his other female relatives and neighbours too. Gunjan and Diya, along with Mayank, Uday (Diya's twin brother), Benjamin (aka Benji, Diya's boyfriend), Samrat all make up a sort of closely-knot group of friends.

Part 2: Nupur's entry
The narrator continues...

Aur yeh hai Nupur Bhushan. Mast aur chulbuli, sirf achche khayaalon aur khushi se bhari, humesha doosron ko khushi aur chere par hasi deti hui Nupur. Vaise, kehne ko toh Nupur bohot baat karti hai. She is a complete chatterbox. Nupur loves challenges. Agar koi use challenge karein na, toh voh us challenge ko poora karke hi dikhati hai. Padhna Nupur itna pasand nahin karti, lekin agar Nupur kisi ek se bhi zyada marks exam mein paane hote toh voh padhkar dikhati hai. Nupur ka nature hi aisa hai ki sab log use pehli nazar mein hi pasand karte hain. Dosti karna chahte hain. Lekin, sirf ek insaan hai jo pehli nazar mein Nupur se shaayad nafrat karta ho. And he is none other than Mayank. Na jaane kyun, Nupur Mayank ko bohot irritating lagti hai. Lekin humari Nupur bhi kam nahin. Nupur Mayank mein badlaav zaroor laayengi. Nupur will change Mayank to such an extent that he will fall deeply in love with her, so much in love that he will be willing to do anything for her' Lekin yeh kaise hoga? Jaanne ke liye aagey ki kahaani toh dekhiye na...

In Morena...

At some roadside stalls selling handicrafts and flowers, there is a big crowd gathered. In the middle of the crowd, stands Nupur, collecting flowers and going away gifts from her many admirers.

"Nupur jee.. Yeh phool aap jaisi khoobsurat phool ke liye." Says one Nupur's deewana.

"And Nupur jee... Yeh taufa nahin. Mere dil ka ek tukda hai which I am giving you, mujhe yaad rakhne ke liye. I hope ki aap Mumbai jaake mujhe bhool toh nahin jaayengi." Another deewana presents Nupur with a huge heart shaped box of chocolates.

"Thank you. Shukriya tum sab logon ko." Says Nupur with a kind smile, and walks away once the crowd of her admirers disperses.

"Uff! Yeh sab mere peeche kitne deewane hai na? Main hoon hi toh aisi." Nupur says to herself. "Sach mein. Main apne in sab Morena ke deewanon ko zaroor miss karoongi jab Mumbai jaaungi."

"Kya soch rahi ho?" whispers Suhaani (Anupriya Kapoor), Nupur's friend in her ears, sneaking up on her.

"By god ki kasam! Suhi! Tune toh mujhe dara hi diya."

"I know Nupz. Aur tujhe darana toh main bilkul miss karoongi, jab tum Mumbai jaaogi."

"Main bhi tujhe bohot miss karoongi Suhi."

"Vaise, tumhari train kitni bajah hai?"

"Kal subah nau baje. Mujhe station chodne aayegi na tu?"

"Of course! Yeh bhi koi poochne vaali baat hai? Ab chalo, tumhari packing karni hai, varna tu toh kabhi akeli packing karegi hi nahin, aur kuch na kuch toh bhool hi jaayegi."

"Haan chale!" says Nupur, turning to lead the way to her home, whee Suhaani is going to help her pack her bag. But just before she can take a step forward, her way blocked by another admirer.

"Nupur jee, yeh phoolon ka guldasta aapke liye. Please kubool karein na." Says a shy guy, before practically shoving the flower bouquet in Nupur's face and running away blushing and smiling.

Nupur and Suhaani look at each other and burst out laughing, before finally heading to Nupur's home.

Next day at 8.45am...

Nupur reaches the train station on time, and sets her bags on the floor of her compartment, nearly tucking them in under the bottom-most seat. She turns to her father Vikram, and also Suhaani to say her final goodbyes.

"Apna khyaal rakhna beti. Aur haan, Mumbai pohonchte hi mujhe phone karna. Vijay aur Gunjan tumhein Mumbai ke Bandra station pe tumhein pickup karne aayenge, toh Vijay ke mobile se hi phone karna. Aur haan, train mein..." Vikram says, but it interrupted.

"Train mein agar koi tumhein khaana offer karein, toh mana karna. Mera dibba aapne pack kiya hai, vahaan se khaa loongi. Don't worry, bohot saara khaana hai aur mere liye do din tak reh hi jaayega, aapki tarah petu nahin hoon main" Nupur teases her father.

"Nupur!"

"Sorry bauji."

"It's ok. Aur haan apne samaan ka'"

"Main apne samaan ka dhyaan rakhoongi. Raat ko bhi jaagti rahoongi apne samaan ki rakhwali karke taaki koi chori na kar sake. Yeh trains jab raat ko station par rukte hai na tab andar chor ghuste hain aur chori karte hain." Nupur replies, teasing him once more.

"Nupur!"

"Sorry bauji! Phir se."

"Aur phir se, it's ok. Vaise, main tumhari yeh natkhat adaayein miss karoonga. Teerth yatra khatam hote hi main business shuru karoonga aur tumhein apne paas bulaaunga."

"I know bauji. Main bhi aapko miss karoongi. Bohot miss karoongi. Lekin roz phone bhi karoongi, taaki aap mujhe bhool na jaaye."

"Bhale main apni pyaari si beti ko kaise bhool sakta hoon? Lekin tum mujhe bhool na jaana."

"Bauji, Nupz aapko nahin bhoolegi, lekin lagta hai ki mujhe toh already bhool gayi hai. Dekho, main bhi kitni der se yahaan khadi hoon. Mujhe toh gale lagayi hi nahin." Suhaani pipes up.

"Arre pagli! Main tujhe kabhi nahin bhool sakti." Nupur tells her in reassurance.

Nupur hugs Suhaani and her father. Vikram and Suhaani get tears in their eyes.

"Ab tum dono un tv serials ki heroine ki tarah rona shuru mat karna. Bauji, aap toh mard hai na?!" Nupur teases again, easing the tension.

Nupur smiles and walks with them to the train door, and waves as they get off the train onto the platform. She keeps the smile on her face even as the train starts moving and she is still waving. But when the train finally leaves the platform, Nupur gets tears in her eyes, but quickly wipes them and returns to her seat.

Edited by NehAditya8791 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowow! great parrt...love nupur :) do continue soon and thanks for the pm

~Naina


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naina2127

wowow! great parrt...love nupur :) do continue soon and thanks for the pm

~Naina


wow! u commented pretty fast..
thanks for ur comment btw..
i love nupz too.. (not in the way mayank does though😆)
her character is so loving, thats y..

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