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@Amour_Reet

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#761

gouri ..i had seen lotsa mistakes......i wrote in in single go ....and didnt check as i cudnt make anymore late ,...!! so posted...i haved missed lots of pronouns as well verbs .....checked a few in next editing ...but will do that after i watch geet ..i hope its watcheble till now...u r free to criticize darling ..:)

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#762

not criticising u darling...that can nvr happen.... i just thot i wud make it easy for u by editing.....

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Reet !

@Amour_Reet

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#763

Originally posted by: deniac
not criticising u darling...that can nvr happen.... i just thot i wud make it easy for u by editing.....

darling ...i meant the same...aabhi koi puchan wali gall hai soniye ..!!

i take ur advice to rectify my personal life ek update me ki rakkha hai ...!!

feel free dear !!\

mwaaaaaaaaaaaaah

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#764

hiiii reet

so her i go with my unsolicited analysis😆
in totality i loved ur update to core.........after all itne din baad mila hai😆
aisa laga ki pyaase ko kua mil gaya😆

so here it goes:

its nice to see the entire post wedding sequences, rituals and their entire journey from their first meeting from maan's perspective...........that just shows the depth of his love and makes him all the more adorable for not missing out even the smallest moments spent with his geet ......

he is awed by the fact that geet is as responsible as him and has taken her responsibility seriously towards her new family right from the next day

there are times when she is blushing watching maan and at times she is bossing over him through her eye movements.....

i am glad that maan has admitted to himself that he is joru ka gulam..and he feels no shame in doing so...welll i love him for that...how many men can proudly admit that

the hide and seek game played by them and the subtle messages conveyed through their eyes make me go goo eyed and all mushy...that is simply chweet..

maan smiling shyly.....OMG...i was lik i want to see tht now on the show😆

maan wanting to surround geet with his office staff and friends so that she doesnt feel lonely shows that he not only loves her but is aware of each and every need, feelings,what goes on in her mind,longings of geet without her having to be vocal......thats what makes him so special to us

maan pondering over the happenings before his wedding....the altercation with dev and geet's family was something refreshing as it gave an insight over how much he feels and blames himself for faulty upbringing for the wrongdoings of dev .....

maan being protective of geet and not ready to take any chance with her ..... and him being wary of NT is portrayed brilliantly

inspite of dev's illdoings maan is still concerned about his brother ...but yet will not be forgiving portrays that he feels responsible towards dev just out of the sense of duty as a brother but not out of love.........its well expressed....

loved the chweet moments between maan and geet.......
maan getting hyper over baby movements.... and getting nervous is hilarious yet endearing.......

heir teasing session was so chweet.........

geet assuring maan that he was not responsible for the mess in which the family is.... was very much needed and shows a very mature and understanding shared between them.....

NT is a puzzle for me..........😕 as she oscillates between being good and evil.......i guess i can never trust her.

and then coming back to : MG's cute fights and bickering has always been endearing and the so called tiffs end up bringing them more close than before.......

and finally the song selection...i have always complimented you on ur song selection and choice that completely fits ur updates...so today is no different....

so overall after a long hiatus.... a super duper update..
and awaiting for another long update and an update of in love with enemy....

an impressive update of ur awesome ff

100/10....
omg thats all my blabber goes on and on😆

love u, ur ff, ur readers..... and now my newfound partner in crime....oops stalking...gouri...

keep writing

god bless you

reva😆

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01leothelion

@01leothelion

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#765

heyy welcome back after such a long break...

well when u were not updating, i happened to read the whole FF and was waiting when you will continue further....

so now as u r back, expect to have more and frequent updates from u.... but probably will not be commenting on ur updates for some time, as i m having my exams from next week.... so even if i dont reply, consider my silent presence,....

thanks and plz do pm me on updates....

gud night

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#766

OMG reet..
i ended up reproducing ur update in the name of analysis😆

well i love to dissect ur update piece by piece and bore u to death😆
at times i feel am i the reason u stay away from IF for so long😆

enjoy reading my crap analysis(well its not analysis...but my ramayan)😆
i chide myselft mentally to limit my comments to maximum one paragraph for ur updates but end up writing a whole lot of epic on it😕

thanks for enduring my painstakingly boring comments😆
enjoy reading

reva