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Posted: 14 years ago

The day went away like a blink of an eye ......maan wondered sitting on the edge of the terrace looking lazily at the setting sun ... leaning on his back he remembered the best day of his life with a shy smile lingering on his lips .....he couldn't help ....he cant wipe off his smile and look strict...he is way too happy today for that ....

He blushed with a nostalgic smile ....

He remembered their journey till today .... geet colliding with him on the mela....and his refusal to help him ......picking her up from river ..and she clinging to his chest all wet ...her terror stricken big wet eyes .......her digging nails in his shoulder ....

Just the same like today except she was wet by the shower of the love by everyone around her ...when he was carrying her from the car to the toran of the khurana's .. how she was hiding her face one hand while the other was snaked around his neck ...!

He chuckled thinking the moment when he had caught her palm while playing a bridal game and she was so shy that she couldn't even look up and face the seniors....who were cheering up for either her or him ...... ...she was pleading urnestly to him ....he was enjoying her beetrood cheeks .....until rajji poked him ....and aadi started clearing his throat unnecessarily ...

He remembered the red footprints of hers imprinted on the white tiles of the floor....the falling down of the paddy's .. her flushed content face .....when she was holding one hand of pinky and in another sasha was helping her flairing bridal skirt to lift and move ahead..... her looking back at him as she was preceding in front of him ...........her shy laughter ....as dadi joked when maan was rushed to her as she stumbled on her track ...... that maan was always at service of his brand new wife....

He smiled thinking how she was coaxing dadi to drink juice and have the medicines after only 2 hours of her griha prabesh .....even in the most auspicious and blissful day of her life she never forgot her responsibilities towards his family ....her family ....he corrected himself......

He remembered when he himself was fussing over to finish his lunch ..and the new bride lifted her veil to warn him through her big kohel adorned eyes ... her glare made him gulp down the lassi was being offered by one of his bigi ... and how aadi and rohan noticed that and made fun of him ....and the rolls of laughter followed it around a red maan singh khurana ..tired in futile protests...

And he allowed... well for geet anything ...he didn't mind being "jaru ka gulam" in their words...

It made him feel content ....

He remembered one hour ago when he was looking for his newly wedded wife in a big crowd of women of variable ages....from kid to girl teens to marrieds and aunties as well grannys too were sitting around geet covering her up .....how tasha spotted him behind a pillar and geet turn scarlet ...as an aunty joked how the man missing his beautiful wife....

Yeah ...she is looking so beautiful ..she was always pretty ....but today the glowing vermillion seemed have touched her cheeks...

How much he adored the the blush in her cheeks....her lowered content eyelashes.....her seeking for him when he moved away from his place....the little frown on her face at the failure of her attempt ...and when his sight caught her eyes.....when he was looking at her crossing his hands on his chest ...her face lit up ....he indicated her by his eyes to come to him .....while her shaking head in denial but her eyes pulling him in that old mesmerizing heave...and the shy smile ...

His frown and walking away ..and her smiling at his boyish frown ...and anger...she might not have seen but he did in a distant mirror.....he had seen her looking at his trailing way ardently .... and her lack of interest in next rounds of gossips ...

Okay he was gawking from distance ...but he cant help...his wife is way too beautiful to be missed ...

He bit his lower lip and smiled shyly ....

The man and his wife ....!!

The feelings is Devine ....!

The reception was held tomorrow.....guest list has crossed 2000 even when it was only for selected people...except family ...everybody from maan's side were invitee...and from geet's side ...none ..except rajji ....rajji is no more an invitee ...she is family ..!so that geet doesn't feel lone maan had invited entire office staff ..pinky aadi and rohan had chosen to be on geets side and they were staying with them only ...maan had requested them to be with her always ...so that no old memories can haunt her.....

His smile wiped off slowly as dev came in his mind ....

Where did I go wrong raising that boy ..why he had turned up this way ....he sighed.....he remembered his last evening's behavior they way he was barging in to reach geet....his audacity shocked him ...he never thought his younger brother will stand infront of him ...and raise his voice like this and that too for the woman he was going marry in next hour... ....he was hurt ..!

May be he loves geet a lot ..........!!.....the brother inside him reasoned....but it was too late to realise that ......geet doesn't love him ...and moreover after the chain of events happened with geet ....she will never forgive him...neither naintara....

Maan couldn't help but feel bad for naintara ....he hated her mere sight ...but he remembered her through out the whole marriage ....she was perfect khurana daughter in law ....she one handedly managed the chain of events ...as well she did the "varan " of them along with dadi ....she was not unhappy with the marriage .....unknown to her maan had kept his constant eye on her ....she was doing everything from heart ...naintara was silent through out the whole night ....he remembered when naintara placed the glass of juice beside geet when she was sitting amongst the women ....he had noticed the denial from geet and pestering from her...after which she was managed to feed her the glass....he suspected her every moment ......but couldn't get the motive for being nice.....she was not scared about being driven away by dadi....as the whole thing was out a long ago ....and dadi had forgiven her ...and maan will never talk against dadi until she tries to bother geet ....

He thought and thought but wasn't able to reach to any conclusion .....he held his temples between his fingers .....

His family became a mess.....

Naintara and dev were parted......dev wanted marry geet ..and naintara wanted maan to marry geet ..means they were long ago parted from each other .....

What to be done ....! dadi might not love naintara anymore....but she definitely likes her ..or else she wouldn't have allowed her to get involved in the marriage ....and dev ......what to be done about him ...?

Where is he...the brother inside maan squealed .....he had no family ...no wife no money and he guessed no shelter .....but he cant allow him inside khurana mansion after all his deeds ...he will never forgive his acts no matter he is his only brother of blood relation ...yesterday also he was not sorry for his acts ....

What wrong with my dear husband ....? why is he sitting here alone flying from his wife.........

Geet embraced his shoulder and nudged him ....while he looked up and tried to smile while snaking her waist by both of his hands only to rest his head on her bloated tummy ....to feel their child ...

He didn't reply to her question .....and she waited for him to loosen up a bit...cause she knew what it can be.......who knew maan better than her ....

She stroked his thick brown hair by her slender white fingers ....and pampered him like her kid ...

And suddenly he jerked up ...

Geet ....!!! something is wrong ....!

Whats wrong..? geet was take n aback ...!!

The baby ..

Haan baby ...? whats wrong with baby ...

It jerked again ...

She smiled ....and said ..it might be a kick ...and its natural ..i told u earlier ....these are symptoms of a healthy foetus ....

Kicked...?? why did the baby kicked me....doesnt she/he like me....maan replied in a small voice...

Geet tilted his chin and made him look at her ....

Nobody can resist loving you maan ....even your enemies will fall in love with you ....then we are talking about our own baby ....its a natural process.. it is called kick in general...but not necessarily he /she is throwing his leg it can be his/her head or hand as well.....she tried to convince him ....

Hmmm...he didn't sound sure....he sat mum for next some minutes ...

What are you thinking ...?come on spill it ... geet nudged him while taking place infront of him and resting her head on his chest ...

Geet ...our families has turned in to pieces........i tried so much to keep them together but I couldn't .....and as well I was too rough on your families too...where did we go wrong geet .....

He sounded defeated ......and guilty .....

Geet listened to him carefully before embracing his hands around herself...

Geet is it wrong ask for my own happiness..? i did only one thing for myself and see everything is scattered ...

No ...you were never wrong ...neither you are nor you will be ever.......geet softly but firmly said....i m not saying this because I m your wife and I love u.....i m saying because I know you ...

If it were about you only u would have never coaxed me into this marriage .....you did it for me dadima and naintara as well....

Maan looked at her with surprised eyes....naintara ...she is not only okay with naintara in front of the guests but in alone too....how come she brought naintara's topic here ....

Geet ...uhh..i mean ...whats going on between you and naintara .....maan asked straight ...

Nothing ...i m khurana's daughter in law ...as well she is....

Maan was mum for some seconds and then said....do you know what dev tried to do last night ...

Yes ....i know ....pinky told.....you could tell me as well....

I thought better not to disturb you by all these ....doctor told me not to disturb u by any kind of mental stress.....

I know ...maan ....as I said before u were never wrong ..but I just wanna tell you ...nothing I mean nothing in this world keeps importance to me infront ur happiness.......and will never keep ....

Maan pressed his face in the crook of her neck and looked far and the horizon to the already set sun ...

Don't worry about naintara.....she is normal with me....not too close not too far ....she has accepted me as your wife...and dadi told me what she had done to get u and me married ...

Yeah ...thats only because her own married life is in trouble ... maan was nt too happy with naintara's acts

It was already .....! dev had sent her divorce papers...geet said in a small voice...

Whatever ....let them get divorced ...they can remarry ..i don't care....at least not any more ..... he said stubbornly while pulling geet closer...

Geet didn't say anything in reply ...

Whatever ....uhh by the way I came here because dadima is looking for you ...

Why ...maan said while rubbing her jawline....

Aivein ..to see the jaru ka gulam pota of hers....

What did you say ....?mai jaru ka gulam hun ?

Maan grabbed her tight while she was trying to slip away ...umm...something like that was being said by the taijee's........... she giggled while trying to free herself..

While maan pulled closer holding her tight against his chest ...

Agar jaru khubsurat ho to thodi bohot nakhre to uthaya ja sakta hai....

Aur agar mai khubsurat na huyi to ......

He snapped her off...who said you are beautiful ....?

But just now you said .... she was cut by him

I said ...if my wife was beautiful.......then I cud listen to her ...i didn't say you are.... so no question of ,listening to you ..... he said as a matter of fact

While She stared at him with wide eyes....to understand whether he is joking or not ....

He understood she trying to read his face ,..so he continued.....in which angle you look beautiful ...you are fat ....plump ...your hairs are not silky always plaited in a braid ...u never leave them open ..your eyes are small...your nose is......his endless list continued until She shrugged his arm from her shoulder and pulled away .......but soon to be caught by him only ....

A pregnant mother should not anger so much ..

I m not ....!! she whispered while facing away from him ....

Sensing the watery voice of hers he pulled her again in his chest ....

You are the most beautiful woman I have ever met geet .........the most pure and most perfect ..he wiped off the rolling tears.....

offo .....dont cry ....i was kidding jaan.......tum na majak bhi nahi samajhti .....he pinched her red nose...beokuf bewi meri ....

While geet shrugged off his hands sobbing in between ...i m no longer beautiful to you .....i was not looking good in my own wedding ..

Shhhh,...geet ...seriously I was kidding ...ohh mahn ...!! this pregnancy has made you quite stupid and cranky .....

Dekha ...ab mai stupid and cranky bhi ho gayi /...choriye mujhe ......let me go ...

Ab nahi ....kabhi bhi nahi .....ek pal ke lie nahi ...he said making her look in his eyes tilting her chin ...adoring her with his eyes...caressing her cheeks with soft strokes......Never misunderstand me and pain yourself....i already caused a lot of pain to u ..not anymore...

Geet .......you so good often I think what did I do to deserve you ......!! often I feel it's a dream only ...a long one.....it cant be this real ..my luck cant be this good ...the insecurity was not covered even after his hard attempt ....

Geet's heart knotted at the heaviness of voice ......she hugged him tight .....dont say this please......i m scared.....

Maan smiled with a shining tear in his eye....

Don't be scared....jaan

Geet sobbed in his chest ...its not you ...its me lucky to have you in my life...my only family ....even if this is dream I never want to get up ....i cant live without you ...just cant do without you ...not anymore please.....i wont be able to breath without you ...she sobbed harder hugging him as tight as possible to her...as if someone is going to snatch him away from her...

Shhh...jaan ..none can separate us........look at me ,....jaan you must not cry ....maan was feeling helpless....he shouldn't have brought the sensitive topic now ...when he was already alerted not to give her any kind of emotional stress....as well her emotional outbursts because of excessive hormones now a days .....

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He cupped her face and before she could understand claimed her lips into a sweet deep kiss....

Soon the softness of the kiss changed from sweet to become demanding with increasing ardent every passing moment .......he kissed until both of them ran out of breaths .....

Blushing she hided herself in his chest....and a satisfied pair of arms hided her in his bosom .......

Aai Meri Subah Haste Hasate
Boli Aankhen Tere liye Sandesha hai
Haan hai
Jaagi aankhon ko bhi sapna milega
Koi khushi aane ka bhi andesha hai
Haan hai

Aan haaan
Gulabi si subah
Aan Haan
Sharabi si hawaa

Bheegi si bhaagi si
MEre bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye

Bheegi si bhaagi si
MEre bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi ram dhun woh sunaye

Edited by maanmeet_Reet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

not one darling for you its two ....
lolz......me too waiting to update ,,,lolz....
uhuuuu...gouri made me write so much ...pehle to in love fir bin tere ...
but i love her ....see how prepared she is ...stalking me jaan ????



OMG u shud start a new FF dedicating it to ur readers....." IN LOVE WITH MY STALKERS"
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Posted: 14 years ago
well GOURI>..
thanks for stalking, pestering reet to give two updates..............now i have a partner to pester reet...
whatsay gouri

reva

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Posted: 14 years ago
okay update is up ....!
and i m relived as well ......
it was short ...!but important issues were handled as well....but i couldnt give u a dry update without romance as well.....i will finish this quick may be tomorrow the next update----- only one update left after which the epilogue .......will take little time to work on it ...
okay m hell tired now going for a break to watch geet ....after that you are gonna get the update of in love...its till now 4750 words ..might increase more might be same as it is.....
the update goes to specially gouri as she is one never tired pestering me....as well to the other one who always asked for bin tere update - in love's thread
love and thanx
reet
hope u enjoy it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

well GOURI>..
thanks for stalking, pestering reet to give two updates..............now i have a partner to pester reet...
whatsay gouri

reva

no revaaaa...dont team up with her .....i m ur sweet little reet na...u cant do this with me...reva plz ....
okie tel me how were ur holidays ? i wann aknw frm a long time
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Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

no revaaaa...dont team up with her .....i m ur sweet little reet na...u cant do this with me...reva plz ....

okie tel me how were ur holidays ? i wann aknw frm a long time



OMG just finished reading ur update.....
well i guess i need to polish my vocab to come up with some nice adjectives to describe ur updates
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

no revaaaa...dont team up with her .....i m ur sweet little reet na...u cant do this with me...reva plz ....

okie tel me how were ur holidays ? i wann aknw frm a long time


are u kidding...i m definitely goin to gang up with gouri....
u r sweet...there is no denying that....but that does not mean i am goin to let u off the hook.....
for torture u gave us by not visiting IF for months together....i am goin to kill u softly and slowly😆

by the way ur readers are in a very vengeful mood...so BEWARE...
i am on a permanent holiday.....
i am doin my PG ....so sitting at home and warming my computer seats...
har din holiday hai 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok let me do the analysis of ur update...
will come up with it soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Reva...definitely we can gang up..... lol
@reetu...awesome update...n thanks a lot baby for the update as promised...btw there r a few spelling n grammar mistakes... want me to correct them???
n sweetie... do i trouble u?? rnt u my sweet lil reet.... rnt u my lil sis???
Waise i wasnt stalking u.... i just logged to IF n the updated post in my posts was in love with enemy... i went to check if u updated it n saw reva's post there....so came back to bin tere to remind u n saw ur post...... waise darling love u lots.... hugs
Edited by deniac - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow reet u r back......................i feel sooooo happy when i see ur update.............u r such a fabulous writer..........
really loved d way maan teasing geet and then manofying her.......
very sweet part.........
continue soon..........

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