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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey miss missinguonly..!!😊..i realy loved ur concept sweets..👏⭐️ evry1 is so funny yet lovable n realistic..🤗 ,,..
realy a good start dear..just 1 request,plzz mk ur font size a li'l bigger as d present font size is bit 2 small 2 cause strain in d eyes..ok?,..update soon dear..😊..will be waiting..

also thnx a lot divya di 4 ur pm 4 dis ff...luv ya...🤗

luv mayur always!!!🤗

Edited by AngelArTi1988 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesooome....
loved it.........
wonderful........
thanx for the pm........


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: missinguonly

hi people😃 😃
😃this is my new ff called "humari dosti" 😳 😳
its similar lyk my old ff "mere reaction with arjuhi"
this ff is specially for my friend divya 😃 😃....(who is biggest fan of mayur n request me to make a new version of my ff with mjht teamz)😃
in this ff i will describe mjht cast
nupur
mayank
gunjan
samrat
diya
uday
benji

gunjan: she will be very friendly person😃 but also funny 😆 😆
nupur: u know kind of thori nakhre waali😛 😛 cuz everyone is her fan😆 but also funny 😉
mayank: alwayz running after nupur😆 but also funny lyk otherz😃
benji: alwayz say the right thing @ right tym😃....but also funny lyk otherz😉
samrat: give comments on gunjan for everything😆...but funny as otherz😃
diya: friendly wid everyone😃.....alwayz right...and funny as otherz😊 😊
udday: who is alwayz on everyone's side....n as funny as others😃

n i will make a funny story on them....but please dont mind if it has funny lines on ur favorite character...cuz its just a friendly ff "humari dosti"

1st part: Humari Dosti

1st day:
udday is sitting.....n singing the song "dost dost na raha"
mayank cum from other room
mayank hit the pillow to udday
mayank: ye kya dukhi athma bana hai subah subah utha diya faltoo mei
udday: to tere liye hi to ye gaana gaa raha tha main....kyun k jab se tu nupur ka fan bana hai tu to humse ek dost ki tarah baat hi nahi karta
mayank: pata nahi kya ho gaya hai tujhai?? pagal ho gaya hai kya?? main abhi bhi tera pehle jaisa hi dost hoon
udday: haan bas tu ye to rehne hi day
mayank: aray nai yaar sach mei
suddenly gunjan cums out from other room
gunjan: mayank...tu uth gaya itna jaldi?? or udday yaar itni baton ki awaaz arahi hai waha main bhi uth gaye
mayank: haan wo main or udday zara baat karrahay thay
udday: haan gunjan..tu to banja mayank ki chamchi....mayank ap uth gaye mayank tujhai chaye laake doon...huh!!
gunjan: aray gussa kyun ho raha hai....chal so ja abhi sirf 7 bajay hain subah k
udday walks out from there in his room
than mayank walks out in mayanks room
n than gunjan goes in her room
in udday's room udday is sitting and start singing "dost dost na raha"
so nupur cumz
nupur: kya howa udday? ye gaana kyun ga raha hai abhi??
udday: tujhai kya jaa na apne mayank k pass
nupur: udday kya howa hai tujhai?? main to tere bhi dost hoon na.....aray tu hi to mera best friend hai....sab se zayada acha or funny friend
udday: abhi chal chal mujhai maske nahi laga.....sab pata hai mujhai
nupur: lagta hai tujhai neend char gaye hai...to tu so ja hum sab bhi sote hain theek hai
udday: haan jao sab sojao mote hote raho so so ke
nupur: aray yaar....acha yaar chal main jagti hoon tere saath
udday: nai yaar mujhai bhi neend arahi hai main so raha hoon
nupur: chal phir main bhi soti hoon apne room mei bye
udday: bye
than nupur walks out from there
and udday sleeps in his room
so after udday sleeps
diya goes in udday's room n luk @ him if he is sleeping
as diya sees udday is sleeping
she goes in everyone's room n wake everyone up except udday
n than everyone stay in benji's room n talk
samrat: dekha aaj udday ka behave??
benji: haan yaar wo aisa hi samajh raha hai k hum uska birthday bhool gaye hain
nupur: haan yaar subah se ye gaana ga raha hai "dost dost na raha"
gunjan: lekin humain at least usse wish to karna chaiye tha na uski birthday per
mayank: aray nai na phir uski jo surprise party humne rakhi hai wo usse pata chal jaati
diya: yaar ab kya karein??
nupur: ek kaam kar benji...aj tu us k saath rahe pura din...or hum party organization karte hai
gunjan: nai nai.....udday ko aise hi rehne do....wo surprise party dekhne k baad kudhi pehle jaisa friendly ban jayega
nupur: nai yaar ye bohat galat hai..us k birthday k din shaam tak usse yun upset to nai dekh sakte na
maynk : haan yaar i totally agree....lekin samrat tu ek kaam kar us k saath reh pura din to wo khush rahega.....i mean wo yahi soch raha hoga k us k friends us ki birthday kaise bhool gaye
samrat: toh?? main usse wish karoon kya??
nupur: nai...aaj usko yuhi choro party tak balke us k saath thore or mean bano to party k time usse bohat acha lagega
mayank: haan nupur bilkul theek bol rahi hai
gunjan: haan tu to banja nupur ki chamcha
samrat: acha acha chalo phir dekhte hain kya hota hai
@ 12:00 clock afternoon
udday wakes up n goes in living room n no one was in there
udday goes in kitchen n stand by the calender
start singing the song
"jeena koi mushkil to nahi.....bas thori si wafa chaiye.....jeene ki tarah se jeene k liye pyaar ka sila chaiye.......ghar k angan mei andhi aaye to patte bhikar jaate hain...koi jhoka bhi chooke guzre to bichare dar jaate hain.....rona nahi jab dar lage....hona to jo so howa"
by singing that song she is getting remember her last year birthday party.....where mayank told him "ye to itni best birthday hai k isse koi kabhi nai bhoolega"
suddenly everyone comes out from benji's room
but udday dont see them
n then they all cum in kitchen to see udday
by looking udday like that standing by the calender
mayank start laughing
udday luks @ him
udday: has kyun raha hai??
mayank: nai yaar gaana itna acha gaa raha tha achanak chup ho gaye is liye hasi nikal aaye
udday: is mei koi hasne ki baat nai hai
samrat: kya ho gaya hai udday tujhai aaj subah se??
udday: tum logo ko yaad bhi hai aaj konsi date hai??
nupur: oh haan...aj to 18 august hai
udday: haan chalo shukar kuch to yaad aaya
than mayank cum n hug udday
mayank: thanks yaar
udday: ye mere line hai yaar
mayank: nai yaar ye main deserve karta hoon...thank you so much for reminding me aaj 18 august hai mujhai party mei jaana tha 2 bajay or main bhool hi gaya tha
udday: aham aham aham aham
gunjan: kya howa?? tujhai paani doon??
udday:mayank tujhai or kuch yaad nahi aata 18 august se??
mayank: nai yaar...mere to zehan se hi nikal gaya aaj 18 august hai thanks tune remind karwaya..warna main to party hi miss kardeta!!!
udday gets mad
udday: jao sab parties mei jao...baat mat karna mujhse huh main ja raha hoon mere room mei
and he start walks n stop n turn
udday: or khabardaar agar aake dekha k main kis haal mei hoon
and than he walks from there
and all of the other guyz smile

this part is done...hope u all lyk it=)
luv mehr🤗




loved the update of mayank and nupur ..... but the hamari dosti part i just din't like as my name is not there ...huh
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Luv it! Plz add me to your pm list:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@thambu: srry abt that main apko zaroor add krti bt wo only girls ka hai is liye nai kia srry
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it5s v nice
do pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mehr Part 2 Khab bano gi?? 😛

I just waiting for it! 😍
Biiiiig HUGS Mehwish🤗
Edited by Mehwish-Sheikh. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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2mehwish: inshaAllah on weekend m so busy in now dayz wid skool srry dear=(
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: missinguonly

@thambu: srry abt that main apko zaroor add krti bt wo only girls ka hai is liye nai kia srry



ohh i see 😆 kya hota jee mera bhi naam kahin kone mein add kardiya hota
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@thambu: srry abt that yaar!!

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