FF-Maan's confession&Geet's revelation-53last part - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice part dear...
Loved it...
Continue soon

Take Care
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing update!!! YAY!! They are gonna get married soon...can't wait for the next part. Pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Veryyyy nice ff.
Plzz continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
finally they confessed.
wow i just loved it
do continue
bye sumi
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hi friends ... today small update ....will be posting later on the next part ....

Part 13:---

Geet & Maan are driving back home …

In the mean while in Maan's house Dadima & Dev are having conversation ….

Dev – dadima mujhe aur nayan tara ko 7-10 days ke liye Pune jaana padega udhar urgent kaam aagayaa hain ….. hum thodi daer baad nikal jaayengae …..

Dadima – par dev kal tumhara bhai tumhari hone wali bhabhi sae humhae mil wane walae hain ….

Dev – jantha hun dadima par kya Karen …. Kaam bhi tho jaroori hain na … koi baat nahin main waapas aane kae baad bhabhi sae milungaa …..

Saying this Dev leaves …..

Maan & geet enter the out house …. Maan takes Geet's belongings upstairs & keeps it in her room & tells Geet to get ready….

Maan – tum tayyar ho jao …. Main abhi aata hun ready ho kar … aaj humae bahut important kaam hain …. Main ane kae baad bataunga ….

Geet gets ready & is in the kitchen preparing aloo kae parathae ….

Geet is mixing the dough ….

Maan enters the kitchen …. Sees that she is mixing the dough …. Water dripping from her hair …..

Maan goes near Geet & stands behind her …. Moves her hair to the front & puts on her right shoulder ….. & gently kisses her left shoulder ….

Geet gets scared & moves away from him … but he holds her & twirls her around so that she comes face to face with him …. & then kisses her fore head ,….. geet is frozen ….. eyes ,nose , & then about to kiss her on her …..

Then suddenly Geet comes in front of Maan …saying …Sir …. Yeh lijiye garma garam aloo kae paratha … aapki farmaish kae anusar ….

Maan comes out of his dream … & then shouts …. "Geet "

Geet – kya hua sir ….

Maan – main tumhe kitni baar batau ki tum mujhe Sir nahin bulaogi ….

Geet – oh …yeh baat hain … teek hain nahin bulaungi …. Ab tho khalijiye aapke liye hi banaya hain maine ….

Maan – Teek hain main kha ungaa par ek sharth par ….

Geet – kya sharth hain si… sorry Maan ….

Maan – tum mujhe khilogi .... apni haathon sae ….

Geet – main …. Nahin baba nahin ….

Maan – teek hain main bhi nahin khaungaa …. Mujhe nahin khana yeh aloo waloo kae parathae ….

Geet holding parathae ka plate in 1 hand & her ear with her other hand saying sorry … please khalijiye naa … aap nae kal sae kuch bhi nahin khaya hain ...

Maan – tho tum mujhe khilaogi …. Aur sorry nahin bolna …

Geet nods her head while feeing shy ….

Small update guys please bear with me....

will be posting the next part soon ....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it yaar....please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Both the parts are lovely

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Veryyy cuteee part.
Plzz continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was a cute part!!
Pls cont.soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet shd call maan as SUNIYE not MAAN

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